Armipotent

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HotIce

some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.

LV 14

Rairaidani

I really enjoy this lol. Mc is dumb but in the funny way lol. I dont know about his talent is it working? I mean author said he has Charm and Charisma talent? But i read all the way to 30 and do not see any women charmed by him

LV 5

no_life

Review.

LV 5

stormraven500

I d really don't like idiotic mc novels but this type seems to be liked by many can someone please explain why

LV 15

SoreiGamingTTV

I’ve read into the book a little ways, and have one major concern. Does the author ever find a translator or anyone that actually speaks English to fix this? It’s a huge mess and difficult to read to the extreme. The book has potential from what I can tell, but I’m not wasting my time reading much more than the first few chapters if it’s going to be this much of a mess the whole time I’m trying to read it.

LV 13

HotIce

A shameless review from the author ^.^ hell why not? ^.^ hmm, talking about the story, I can't tell you much about that. The story is set in Apocalyptic world, with LitRPG as the main theme, and using power system of Knight & Magic. that's all, curious? Then why are you still reading my review!

LV 15

Riassuba

i found this really fun at first. mc seemed fun even though he wasnt smart he was written charismatic. he was an underground fighter but he still had certain principles. unfortunately author writes in the chinese writing style where rape is excused. now if this was a minor incident i would have looked over it but in this particular scene mc rapes a chick right after it. made me so disappointed and disgusted.

LV 15

Augustdavis

TO BE BLUNT THE AUTHOR IS STEALING FROM HIS READERS. I'll admit this novel is pretty good but if your about to start this novel and updating stability is important to you, I suggest you don't . the author has a bad habit of disappearing a week before the end of the month and then posting like 2 chapters after the privilege has reset, it's happened so many times, i have a hard time believing it's not intentional. Also sometimes he disappears a week after the month starts without any explanation then comes back a few days before the month ends with 2 chapters and a sad story about why he disappeared. I understand that I might sound harsh but he has done this so many times that I'm starting to think that he's just trying to garner sympathy from his readers so they would buy the privilege again next month. Honestly this novel has what it takes to be ranked #1 but the author's deceptive habit is holding it back.

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Lacastrian

This novel is a grammatical abomination. ..................................................................................................................................................

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DaoistIe4Cxv

I will give my first review to this novel. everthing is good except author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 15

Dejacle

a dumb protagonist. dumber people around him. and you could overlook all that if the translation wouldn't be that bad. there is nearly in every paragraph a mistake.

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SkiIIzrock

Average novel. I dropped it because the characters felt bland and emotionless. The character interactions were pretty minimal and not well done. The main character also felt pretty bland and is basically a meathead that doesn't seem too smart...

LV 13

camy011

Nope, leaving 1 star so people aren't mislead into actually trying to read this. Grammar is really bad...

LV 14

TheUnseenMountTai

I'm just writing this review because of the annoying update stability..... okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal Anyways: Some grammatical errors. But way better than average. Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value. Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels. Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.

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Novelreeead

man author, even with the obvious flaws and mix emotions moments continuesly to show on early to mid chapters i still enjoy it. but the sudden change of mind of tang and you making him soft realy break his real character. i think you want this as his character development but man I didn't suit him at all. I didn't even suit the atmosphere of this novel. he should be domineering and ruthless to his enemy not the otherway around. such a disappointment. imight drop this soon it was a great ride man but the early thousands chap development 'its a mehhh for me.

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Sanchit_Lashkari

one of the best novel I have read so far.if you are looking for op mc with great heram then this is the it. pls release more chapters it's been almost 15 days.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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Styxiss

story seems interesting and characters seem to be unique and different from normal novels but the grammar is too hard to understand. as is it's completely unreadable for me.

LV 10

Azakinu

I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.