MokouFriedChicken

MokouFriedChicken

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Just another random voice with crappy wrists on the interwebs. I promise nothing and deliver even less.

2019-01-11 Joined Philippines
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MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
7 months ago
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I'm getting there, but there's still a chance to pivot depending on if I ever get feedback

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
8 months ago
Replied to ShowmikBD

Again, depends on feedback, but the foundation for it already existst

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
9 months ago
Posted

Typical shilling for my own work review here. I'd say that it's a culmination of everything I've learned up until now. A work catered far from my tastes and to the masses. Or at least, that's what I hope. Romance and stuff will be determined depending on feedback

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
1 years ago
Posted

It's great. I can't wait to read more of this. I can only hope that the MC actually starts inventing stuff and roll over his enemies soon though. The rebellion angle is also neat

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
2 years ago
Posted

A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
3 years ago
Replied to tfcuhb

Glad you liked it

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MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
3 years ago
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Well that was fast. Tastefully done scenes aside, the flowery prose in display here is well done. Scenes are painted beautifully and the world is being filled out nicely. Would recommend.

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
3 years ago
Posted

This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
3 years ago
Posted

How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken
3 years ago
Posted

How novel. Such an interesting concept. The execution is fairly good, and just... it's so unique that I just want to see where it goes. The quality writing just makes it all the better.

  • Chaotic System: A Former Assassin in the Game of the Gods original

    Chaotic System: A Former Assassin in the Game of the Gods

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SURVIVAL GENIUS ANTIHERO

    4.9

    For too long, Riku was content with the simple life of a sushi chef. Having left behind the hectic life of an assassin, his knife now only knows the flesh of fish and food as he hones his craft with both the poor and rich alike. His skills translated well into running his restaurant, his professionalism and dedication to having a perfect record refusing to leave him even in such a low stakes job as running a sushi restaurant.  But then, just as he was cleaning up, he was whisked away to participate in a game that would determine the new god of all existence. While lacking in knowledge about his new surroundings, Riku is still a professional through and through. Offered with the bounty of having his unconditional wishes granted, the Goddess that summoned him wishes for him to win her this game. Well, then he'll just have to make sure that their victory will be as complete as he could possibly make it... Against fantastical beasts and opponent Champions, his skills as an assassin and a combatant will be put to the test. He'll just have to make this Chaotic System actually work to his favor instead of it randomly spitting out nonsensical situational powers that he couldn't use. *** The Deep Blue... The home of the Gods... For eons, the Thirteen Gods have lived together in harmony together with the God Father within the Deep Blue's calm waters. Together, they watched over the universe, content with simply observing as they all worked in tandem with their respective aspects to exact their Father's will. That was, until the God Father died without explanation, and His power locked away until a successor was chosen among His children. Left with an ultimatum, the Thirteen Gods argued on who should inherit their Father's power. Eventually, the arguments became clashes, and the gods eventually realized that them fighting to the death would spell the end of the world. Thus, an agreement was formed. Each of the Thirteen Gods would choose a champion from the sea of souls to fight on their behalf. These champions would brave the Deep Blue's dangers to reach the very bottom of its depths, and whoever gets there first would grant their patron god the right to inherit the God Father's power. Or at least, that was the original agreement. One goddess chose to defy her siblings, deciding to take matters into her own hands by choosing a former assassin-turned-sushi chef as her Champion. Granting him a power well beyond the rules of the game, she is certain that Riku would be the one to end her siblings' endless debates. After all, a goddess of chaos need not to follow the rules...

    219 Chs 624 Collections

  • The CEO's Son is a Serial Killer original

    The CEO's Son is a Serial Killer

    Urban MYSTERY BEAUTY CEO KILLER

    4.74 Completed

    True Title: Tales from Midas: Heartstrings Alice Heather Littman was just an average elementary school teacher, well, as average as one can get under the demanding expectations of the average Midasean citizen. Having taught in the Nancaan Elementary School for over a year now, Heather counted her stars for each day that her life went by peacefully, sorely grateful at getting away from her former.. turbulent lifestyle during a dark time in her college years. Ahh yes.. a peaceful life surrounded by her precious students.. Surely this was the blessing that her life sorely needed..  Cue in, during the 25th Founding anniversary of the school she's teaching in, the meek and silent teacher suddenly being propositioned in broad daylight by one of the richest and most powerful men in the city. Heather felt her heart hammer in embarrassment as the dashingly handsome Dio Panagopolous asked her out on a date..  In front of her students no less!  Outwardly, the woman smiled shyly, unable to say anything presumably due to the fact that she's being asked out by one of the most desirable bachelors in the city. Inwardly however... She knew in her heart that she was staring straight at the face of a bonafide psychopath. In the year 2016 on the month of January, a mysterious string of murders plagued the Nancaan district of Midas. At least a dozen women in their 20s were claimed by the incident, all with their hearts physically removed from their chests. Fearing a resurgence of another prolific serial killer along with placating the fears for the start of another slaving ring incident, the authorities launched an investigation about the murders, dubbing it the 'Kardia' incident with the potential suspects being dubbed the same name. Unfortunately, the investigations ubruptly came to a halt due to budget cuts, the upcoming mayoral elections and other external issues.  The city of Midas is at the cusp of a major upheaval, even the smallest of actions can irrevocably change the future in unforeseeable ways. With an active element openly disrupting the city's ability to function, the changes can become more and more unpredictable. Heather knew all to well, just how volatile her city can be. With a certain incident still fresh in her mind, the stalwart teacher went on about her daily life, hoping by the gods that another incident won't affect her already miraculous second chance at living a normal life. UPDATES: I promise nothing and deliver less. Word Count: At least >1k per chapter. Bug me on Discord: https://discord.gg/NZA6Jun Bug me on Twitter: @FriedMokou

    10 Chs 30 Collections

  • The Runaway is a Politician's Daughter original

    The Runaway is a Politician's Daughter

    Urban ROMANCE COMEDY MYSTERY BEAUTY

    4.76 Completed

    True Title: Tales from Midas: The Runaway Struggling novelist Athena Morrison once thought life had nothing left to offer her. Living a reclusive lifestyle and trying to make ends meet while trying to make a name for herself as an author, she certainly had it hard enough. Coupled with extreme bouts of depression and constant threats with running from her dark past however, one can only go so far before something snaps. So in one stormy evening, plagued by the demons of her own making, she planned on ending it all. Before she was stopped by some unsuspecting maintenance crew. A fateful encounter, if she were to describe it. Change was coming to her life. Perhaps it was time to stop running, to try and take hold of her own destiny.  A lot of things were happening in this city, money changing hands, deals being made; politics were being played and power constantly in flux. And while change is something to be feared, it was also something to be excited about. Athena only hoped that it was for the better. ⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛ Bug me on Discord: https://discord.gg/NZA6Jun Bug me on Twitter: @FriedMokou

    10 Chs 94 Collections

  • DEFUNCT1 original

    DEFUNCT1

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION COMEDY MAGIC ISEKAI

    4.78 Completed

    DEFUNCT

    1 Chs 25 Collections