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White_Liger
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I'm sorry but it's the translator haha, English is not my native language and having about ten chapters I can't edit them since I just corrected them and that would reduce my desire to write to a minimum haha, and it's either correct or keep writing, but thanks for the tip I will correct it in the new chapters I am writing.
It was obvious that I would act careful and polite in front of the ancestor, she is over two hundred years old the woman and can take me out in a thousand different ways.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
I write the backstory I want, if you have constructive criticism to make I listen to you but don't write something like "stop embarrassing yourself" as if you were the wisest person hahaha, if you want to tell me that the backstory is exaggerated that's fine, but putting "stop embarrassing yourself" seems like an excess to me, but surely there are many people who complain a lot and do little hahaha.
My life turned out to be normal until I was 5 years old in which I was kidnapped by an organization of assassins, I was in it until I was 17 years old, they kidnapped me because of my intelligence, I had an IQ of 210 which was unheard of, they forced me to study many science classes and thus be able to develop technology for them, they wanted me to create a body enhancement serum which I told them it would take me 20 years which would give me a lot of time and they believed it, being 5 years old I already had an idea of what they would do to me so while I was developing a super soldier serum for them, I developed several technologies that were useless to me that kept me alive, I also received training from them.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
Felicia Hardy had the power to change the odds, this power is somewhat unconscious, she can change her luck making for example a pot fall on the head of a man who wants to shoot her or trip a man who was going to hit her, it also affects people who spend a lot of time with her causing them bad luck and accidents, but the powers were not only hers but also her father gave her his and thus made her powers increase and the bad luck caused her parents to die because that is not something a four year old girl can control if even her father could not. also keep in mind that this is kind of an alternate Earth as I'm going to add characters that are not from Marvel or the dates are not exact as I don't have the ability to do the 616 country perfectly but I want to post characters are from there, it mesclar.
"I'm sorry father and mother, if only I had awakened my powers earlier, if only I was stronger you wouldn't be dead now"-Felicia.
Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
She awakened her powers when she had not yet revived the memories of her past life, she lived four years and her powers awakened causing the traffic accident where her parents died. Now it is necessary to understand that after the accident a girl who saw her parents die and she survived unharmed would think she did something wrong and that is why being in a state of anguish and very strong emotions, she managed to release her memories that were supposed to be released with the passage of time, and now Felicia has four years of memories with her parents to absorb the anguish caused by their death. You have to understand that the mental state is still confused because you have not spent much time assimilating the memories, because those memories and emotions are yours and no one else's, it's like if you lose your memory and after a year of new experiences you recover them, the year you lived are also your memories and feelings too, because in that year maybe you fell in love or lost a friend, but despite recovering the memories you would also feel the loss or love, I hope you understand what I mean haha.
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Felicia Hardy MCU
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
where is my super suit woman hahaha .. it reminded me of that phrase a 10 haha
"WHERE'S MY WOLF MASK!??" Kai shouted.
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Movies · NekoGod
Yes, but let's be realistic until they are at least 12 years old, none of them will be able to fully train since overtraining will stunt their growth, they can do training but not at the same intensity as if they were 14 years old, maybe not her for being an Amazon as you said but I think that if they train to the maximum when they are 10 years old it would take away a bit of "realism" I think is the word. It reminds me of the novels that MC trains in the womb, I don't say it's bad haha. And not having a system or something that controls its development without coherence is a little less appropriate to me. I did not know that data that was an Amazon, I am new to this, thanks for the Data hahaha
(picture of Anna and Mercy)
In DC as Kate Kane Wayne
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
Mercy Graves
(picture of Anna and Mercy)
In DC as Kate Kane Wayne
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
Anna Poliatova
(picture of Anna and Mercy)
In DC as Kate Kane Wayne
Anime & Comics · White_Liger
I usually don't like it when the MC's future is decided prematurely. it makes you think that something bad is always going to happen. it leaves you with a bad taste. I would recommend that the mc start to take action against the dangers to come that may come no react to what is happening and give a little more prominence to the MC and stop depending a little on the system ... I like the novel👌✌
ch 76 A Glimpse of The Future
MARVEL: Killswitch's Origin
Movies · NightHowl
A mountain cannot have two tigers jajaja ✌🏻