This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.com

Through this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each chapter pointing out any inconsistencies, basic spelling/grammar errors and typos, and anything that doesn't make sense.

I already predict that the comment section will probably get filled with active discussion over these books.

Note, if you came here for a novel, tough luck. There is no novel, this is only for editing/proofreading/revisions/critique. Though if you were looking for something to read and some of these reviews were worth it, then good for you. :D

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"What should we do? Shall we go ahead or go back?" asked Smoke feeling proud of her team who choose to maintain their rationality and kept calm while completely believing her even after such a chaotic revelation.
After hearing everything, another question was if they should find out more or should they come back with a precise plan. Not only because of the dangers that the mission would make them face but mainly because there were many innocent people who they had to rescue. Their one single uncalculated step will not only cost their team but also cost many other people their lives. 

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"Go ahead" everyone spoke at the same time while Zhi Xin said, "Go back."
Smiling Smoke answered while looking at Zhi Xin, "5 v/s 1 not possible, my group say's go ahead."
"It's dangerous." warned Zhi Xin as he was aware that they are practically walking into a tiger's den which was already laid with traps to catch them.
"We love danger's " answered Fire.
"Playing with danger's is our specialty" added Sugar
"We practically eat, sleep, and dream danger's " added Red
Looking at Zhi Xin not saying anything further smoke started speaking and informing about the strategy,
"Step1- call reinforcements- chile. Make sure we have enough medical supplies and space to take the injured back with us.
step 2- hack both the cameras and figure out the number and condition of people we could rescue. Make sure to store the data, it will be useful.
step 3- We will follow the same pattern for entering while the pattern will shift while exiting. Entering, I will go ahead, Fire and Red side to side, Sugar will follow. Chile will make sure reinforcements arrive on time. During exit, Sugar will lead, Red and Fire will maintain Side to Side, I will follow.
step 4- make sure everyone is safe and sound
step 5-blast the entire place.
Any opinion?" Asked Smoke after she finished instructing.
"No" "Yes" came the voices of everyone. While everyone said No Zhi Xin was the one who said Yes.
Looking at Zhi Xin Smoke was waiting for him to explain while giving him a look saying -care-to-explain-.
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On their wedding night, 
Zhi Ruo was scared and nervous, sitting  on the bed she was awaiting her husband since hours. 
"This is the first time I will be meeting him... Shall I run away? Anyway he will not be able to find me, afterall who marries without meeting even once" 
The door opened and a handsome man entered:
Qing Shan moved towards the bed with a steady pace that was neither hurried nor slow.
Zhi Ruo: What ae you doing?
Qing Shan: What a husband should do.......


Since getting married, the almighty boss became a wife slave and everyone was filled with limitless dog food.

Clark taps the table with his fingers while his other hand is on his face while his index finger is on his lips, trying to look like he's thinking.

"Well?" Mrs. Corsilla asks.

Dona smirks while looking at Clark with a blush on her face, 'Oh my god, you're so hot, Mr. White!' she thought as she drinks the iced lemon tea the moment it arrived.

"Hm, let me check if you can take good care of Cj," Clarks looks at Mr. Rogers who carries a thick envelope.

"What is that?" Mrs. Corsilla asks with a bothered look on her face, "I can tell you every reason why you should give us Cj!"

Clark opens the envelope and looks at Mrs. Corsilla, "Okay, tell me."

Dona smiles and butts in, "I'm a capable woman who can take good care of a child. I'm a well-known actress and--"

"Shut your mouth, Dona," Mrs. Corsilla covers her daughter's mouth.

Dona just rolls her eyes.

"We, are financially capable of raising a child. We can send him to school. Give him anything he wants. He is free to do whatever he wants to, Mr. White. And we can give him a complete set of parents," Mrs. Corsilla smirks, thinking that she hit the spot.

 Clark just smiled and gave the envelope full of money, "Is this enough?" 

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona open their eyes widely while staring at the amount of money.

Dona shakes her mother's arms while whispering, "It's enough! It's too much!"

But Mrs. Cordilla's eyebrow flinched, "Are you trying to buy us? This won't work! We care for Cj! You can't take good care of him! You're the reason why my daughter died!" Mrs. Corsilla stands up while yelling.

Everyone else in the restaurant looks at them.

"Now, isn't this an attitude worthy for claiming that you can take good care of my son?" Mr. White sips his iced lemon tea.

"Mr. White, we can assure you that we can raise Cj well. Look at this, if we take him, you can live your life as you wanted. You don't have to worry about a kid. You can live your life as a single man and even get married," Dona said while leaning forward, holding her hands to squish her breast out.

Clarks looks at her, "Well then, I have a proof that you can't take good care of CJ like Kirin," he looks at Mr. Rogers who handed him a folder.

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona look at each other, "Now, we said that we don't need money," Mrs. Corsilla said while gesturing to put the folder away.

"As I have said, it's a proof, not money," Clark stares at them like they are just ants that he can stomp on, "Why don't you take a look at it."

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona suddenly felt shivers run down their spine as they open the folder.

There they saw Kirin's photos.

She's full of bruises and wounds.

"That's the day she called me because she's pregnant. I thought it's blackmailing to make me be responsible for the child, but she said it's from you- her family. You hurt her to discipline her, and you're expecting me to let Cj fall in your hands?" Mr. White said.

Mrs. Corsilla saw a paper with hand-writings of Kirin after the photos of her.

"That's her letter, a testimony of how you abused her and left her alone. You did that to her because she's a child of your husband's mistress, right, Mrs. Corsilla?"

After the letter, Kirin has her signature and her I.D. as proof. 

"She died because her health was not good. I tried to keep her alive. We've tried everything but she can't get well. You neglected her. You didn't raise her the way a family should."

Mrs. Corsilla grinds her teeth as her veins pop out of anger.

Dona felt embarrassed and tried to act since Mr. White hasn't mentioned her name for Kirin's death.

"Mr. White! I love my sister! I tried to help her but she was afraid and she ran away from me," Dona cried.

Mrs. Corsilla looks at Dona with disbelief and she slapped her, "How ungrateful! I raised you better than that kid! I gave you everything you wanted! I removed Kirin from the family to make you the apple of the eye of your father yet you're leaving me behind!" She screamed and pulled Dona's hair.

Mr. White just stares at them, "I'll let you go if you stop bothering me and CJ. But once I hear that you, even just your shadow, appears in front of Cj, you'll live the rest of your lives in jail. I know what you wanted, money, but you refused," Clark stands up.

"Of course, if you took it, you can't ask for money again. But if you have Cj, you can ask me non-stop."

Clark took money from his wallet and put it on the table for the bill.

"Miss Dona, I hope you can make a public apology for slapping Sheen, or else your whole career is done for."

Mrs. Corsilla stops pulling Dona's hair and slapped her again from what Clark said, "You're ruining  what we worked hard for!" 

Dona just stares blankly, her mother really abused Kirin, but she's still being abused.

'I wish I'm dead,' Dona thought while her mother slaps her.

Clark just looks at them in disgust.

Both of them are losing their minds.

Dona is known for sleeping with directors just to get casting.

Mrs. Corsilla's known for illegal gambling.

Clark's blood just boils while thinking that they want to get CJ from him.

He took a blind eye the first time they asked but as time passes by, they get more eager and aggressive so he has to do something.

Clark went back to the company.

Sheen's in her office, continuing the book she wants to write.

He didn't bother her and went to his office to call Dan.

"Please call Dona Hale Violet's manager and tell him that if Dona won't make a public apology, both of them will sink down," Clark said and turned off his phone.

Sheen is too full of energy while writing that she did not notice that it's already lunch.

Her stomach's already begging her to eat but due to being too focused, she can't hear it.

She types fast, eager to let out all her ideas in the story when suddenly she heard someone knock at the door.

She froze, nervousness run through her body as her face tightens.

'Is it Clark?' she thought while standing up.

Ever since she talked with Bea, she's afraid to see Clark for a reason she can't understand.

After feeling sad because she's not part of Clark's family and even asking herself if she wants to be, she feels nervous about having to see Clark.

But she wants to see him and say her thanks for helping her last night.

But there's the feeling that she wants to have her distance from Clark.

She can't run away from him, he's her boss.

And she's an assistant.

She's only an assistant.

Sheen exhales as she tries to calm herself.

Since for some reason, she feels excited to think that Clark's behind the door.

"What the hell! What takes you too long to open the door?" Bea yelled as she opens the door. 

Sheen froze as her legs weaken due to shock.

"Hey! Keep it together, I know you're going to be a White someday!" Bea whispers as she holds Sheen's arm.

"I brought lunch," Bea smiles apologetically at Sheen while they get to her desk.

Sheen just had her poker face until they finished eating.

"Hey, don't be mad. I was waiting for too long outside. I thought you're already out from hunger. You're too focused when writing that you forget to eat," Bea frowns.

"I know, it's just that I was hoping---"

She stops from what she wants to say, 'I'm not hoping to see Clark!' she thought.

"I was hoping that I can finish the 56th chapter today and by next week, I can send them for proofreading and for editing," she continued.

"Oh, I can do the proofreading, Dan can do the editing," Bea suggested.

"Aren't you too busy for the wedding?"

"No, we're done with that part. And you need to pass that by December, right? We still have that much time. I'm just shocked that you're already at the end."

"Yep, I already started writing before I told Clark." 

They both drink their coffeetea jelly when Sheen's phone rang.

She scowls when she saw who the caller is.

"What do you want?" She asks in an irritated voice.

"Can we talk, please?" Kady asks in a begging tone.

Bea stares at Sheen, the only one she will make that face is Kady.

She went beside Sheen and listens.

"No, I am busy."

"Please, I just want to tell you something about Mr. White."

"You can tell it to me now."

"No, I'll tell it if you will see me personally."

"Then, it's your lost. I don't care about what you want to say."

Sheen was about to turn off the call when Kady replies, "He raped a teen and got her pregnant!" 

Sheen's forehead furrows, "I'll see you at 7 pm," she said and turned off her phone.

"What was that? Raped? Where did he hear that?" Bea asks.

"I don't know. But I can't let Kady have that rumor with him. I have to tell him the truth. Clark didn't do that," Sheen frowns.

She can't let rumors about Clark spread.

She has to correct it.

But it's not her problem.

It shouldn't be her problem.

She's just an assistant.

But she can't keep her heart at rest.

It bothers her so much that it suffocates her.

Sheen, a famous book author of romance and a victim of unrequited love, finds herself in need of true romance for a new novel. She stumbles upon young men while thirsty to create the novel she needs to write, she jumps from one romance to another to create the perfect romantic book she can ever write.

This is the end of the first volume. It was mainly an introduction for the main cast, exploring their motivations for playing Classmancers. To spice it up, the finale had some action which gave a taste of how a competitive match looks like.

The second volume will continue with the entry exam, showing how Lars and Julia fare and who ultimately makes it into the club. The draft for the volume is already done, so it's all about proofreading and editing now. Starting with the chapter release tomorrow, I'll resume my usual schedule of releasing one chapter a week.

Meanwhile, you're welcome to give some criticism, rate the fic or even leave a review. This is a very niche type of web novel, so I'm sure I did some things right and some things terribly wrong. It'll be helpful to know what you think works and what doesn't, so I'll learn how to execute this story better.

If you got any spare power stones, please consider spending some on this novel if you're enjoying it  ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Imagine a shonen sports story. But, it’s not about baseball or soccer. No, this one is about playing a MOBA video game!

And no, it’s neither League of Legends nor DotA. A BRAND NEW ORIGINAL MOBA, the one MOBA to rule them all - Classmancers!

The game has become so big, that even schools recognize it as a sport. They even allow students to participate in Classmancers clubs and compete against other schools! Who will be the one going to nationals!?

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For Yuel, a team sport is like a chessboard that comes to life. There’s no greater fun than deconstructing every opponent and predicting twenty of their moves in advance.

And, Classmancers is the ideal stage for such psychological warfare, for it’s a sport in which game theory reigns supreme. At least, usually, it does.

There are also goofs like Lars, who got -200 IQ, yet boast godlike mechanical skill that triumphs against all odds. He’s like your typical OPMC which a cheat, except the cheat does nothing for his intellect.

Yuel and Lars are like water and fire. In other words, 100% compatible! That’s why they form an unlikely duo and set out to dominate Classmancers’ competitive scene!

However, to challenge their OPness, the two will run into rivals who are just as OP! Some of them will turn their teammates immune to Yuel’s psychological attacks, while others will redirect Lars’s almighty strength against himself.

In this harsh environment, the two will keep struggling, struggling, and struggling some more, following their promise to reach the pro scene.

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RELEASE SCHEDULE: Monday and Thursday. Two chapters a week.

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Alright, boy-ohs and girlies, I've tried my best, I really have, but writing is way harder than I could have ever imagined. I'm at 216 chapter, 218 if you count *******, and about 90-95% of the story has been written without much consideration for outlining. A while ago, I started a wiki for the novel to try to keep track of everything and only now am I starting to understand the magnitude of the mistakes I've made writing up to this point.

Anyway, the announcement this time is to let you know that my writing pace hasn't simply slowed. I'm just taking the majority of my time chronicling everything that's happened and will happen and thinking up solutions to the problems that I've detected in the logic of the story; or plotholes. I'll probably take a while and until I'm confident in where the story will head, I'll continue putting out a depressingly low number of chapters every week.

It feels wrong to not say anything and even worse keeping my ******* collecting despite the obvious downgrade to my writing speed. So, despite my obvious bias in wanting to keep Patreons, I'd caution everyone supporting me to only continue doing so if you're fine with the current situation. Webnovel, Royalroad and my ******* all keep publishing dates on the chapters I release, so you can keep track of my writing speed by looking there; until you feel it's worth it, reconsider wasting your time or money during these unstable times. I probably should have made this announcement sooner, considering the downgrade to my writing speed has been around for a month's worth of time, so I apologize.

I'll be putting out chapters when I can, but the majority of my focus right now is revisiting already published chapters, touching them up and documenting whatever I can in the novel's wiki page. Anyone wondering where I'm at can check the wiki page and even contribute if they're bored enough. That is all for now~

UPDATE (December 29th, 2019)
Alright, I'm about to get really real and admit to being a really shitty author these last three to four months. Truth be told, I really did want to take time to update the wiki and figure out how to handle what I thought were this novel's biggest failings in plot holes. However, to do that and find details that might have only been mentioned in passing, I had to eventually turn to rereading entire chapters.

Guys... I'm being as sincere as I possibly can right now. I have no fucking clue how I've developed a following after rereading the first couple chapters. I understand that authors can grow a lot after a year, but it hasn't even been that long and I believe the first hundred chapters are Trash with a capital T. It's borderline unreadable (upon proofreading this tirade, this might be a mild exaggeration, but it is true to my thoughts nonetheless) and the fact that I have nearly 4,000 followers after combining the collections on Webnovel with those following on RoyalRoad is incomprehensible to me. There are still even 19 people supporting me on ******* when I haven't released squat in nearly two months!

I've tried to ignore this. I've tried to work on other books. Hell I've even messed around with fanfiction, hoping to one day wake up and see everyone gone. Like the book had never existed. But like I said, there are still 4,000 people waiting for releases. More joining by the day and people still supporting the novel with spirits stones. Even 19 who value two chapters being at least a dollar.

Every time I think I'm ready to move on, ready to completely shut down the novel to start a new one, I think about those people and realize, "I'm a fucking bitch. Just finish the fucking novel, idiot." The passing of time has only made the feeling worse, so I guess this is a message consigning myself to completing this book, by any means necessary. I won't be able to focus on another story otherwise, so this update is more for me than for my audience.

That being said, the reason I felt inclined to give up on the novel in the first place was because of how terrible I found my writing from a nearly a year ago. So, I want to stress that I'm not going chuck a bunch of shit together to finish the story. Rather, I'm going to go back and rewrite things as I continue to catalogue things on the wiki.

Last couple things I want to quickly mention:

- I haven't really used any of the money I've made on ******* so I want to commission a legit book cover. Ditch that shit I made with my lacking Photoshop Skills...

-More on the money thing, after I finish rewriting the novel — it'll mostly be editing details that make the book seem less like it was written by an amateur, so the story progression won't at all change — I plan on also hiring people to format Book 1 and eventually Book 2 into legit e-reader and paperback formats. I know, I know...

"Greedy author, have you no shame?" 

Honestly, I want to follow pirate aba's style of keeping everything free, and I will. I'm not going to enter a contract with Webnovel or paywall chapters through kindle. However, for the people who for whatever reason want to have a kindle or physical copy of this (current dumpster fire of a) novel, I want it to at least be possible. There's also the benefit of gaining new readers through Amazon this way which is always a plus. 

Like the G.O.A.T. pirate aba — check out her (I think it's a her) book The Wandering Inn — I'll keep all the chapters on Webnovel and Royalroad free. Though the ******* thing will still be in effect at least until I finish the series or whatever.

-Since I'm rewriting the novel for the most part, I'll make more announcements as I continue updating the novel; meaning adding on to the story (Chapter 219, 220, etc...)

Unless it becomes too annoying and people request against it, I'll be adding "Revised" to Chapters that have been, well... revised.

-I'm going to be having some polls on RoyalRoad on a couple important things as I start getting back into the grind of updating this novel.

Namely: Should I change the name of the novel? If so, to what? What would you guys like the book cover to look like? Should I change the name of the Books/Arcs? 

That is all for now. So... I guess this is Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, and Happy New Years all in one?

A seemingly random instance of character creation on the deep dark web changes the life of a socially inept and insufferable game addict, Adrian, in more ways than he could ever have fathomed.

A transformation and pact with a Goddess force him out of his comfortable lifestyle as the wastrel son of billionaire parents.

Entered in the Cataclysm, an apocalyptic battle royale for the Chosen of Sponsor Gods and Goddess, with his life effectively changed into that of a game character, Adrian has to confront underground Secret Societies, Magic, Cultivation, and change dramatically if he is to have the slightest chance of survival.

With Book 2 done, here comes the shamelessness...
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Cause webnovel monetization services is getting worse and worse I shall start writing on another site and write now on blogger where you can view my content for free and shall start posting proper chapter from april 1 until then go to https://godamongsaiyans.blogspot.com/2020/03/ch-1.html and bookmark it or something also I shall be editing my previous chapters, so you can check that out.

Dakon was a cool, handsome guy who was living his life for the fullest and never regretted everything and all the world riches followed him.He was smart, wise, talented and young. Soon everything changed when one day he crashed his car and was reborn as a saiyan.

He wants to be unique and vows that one day he shall become stronger than Zeno and find a way back home to his parents. This is an anti hero novel and follows it own plot style and the author makes it unique.

Hi everyone,

Firstly, I just want to give a seriously sincere apology. I read a really heartbreaking review just now where a reader said they were giving up on the story because of my slow updates. For all the early readers, most of you know I have always been slow on updates due to juggling my studies and work which were always a priority to me.

I have been busy recently working on publishing the first volume of "A Gatekeeper and the Celestial Sovereign" as a Paperback/Hardback with illustrations (proofreading, editing, typesetting etc). 
I have been working with an amazing artist named Rodrigo Gil Chavez who has made some amazing art for the upcoming physical Book. 
You can see the trailer for the book and some of the great art on my website, Writing Pilgrimage, or on my Youtube which has the same name. 
 I really wanted to make something special for all my amazing readers who have stayed with me despite my slow updates to commemorate the end of the first arc which is only two chapters away.

Because I've been working on that and I was waiting on a good time to announce it, I have been holding back on publishing more chapters.
I feel awful though for making you all wait and for having a lot of you disappointed in me.
So I will publish the last two chapters of this arc/volume this Saturday at 10am GMT.

If you want to keep up to date with the official Book release of the first volume than subscribe to my website or YouTube channel: Writing Pilgrimage.
If you want sneak peeks of the amazing illustrations by Rodrigo than definitely check out the trailer which is on YouTube!!!!

After this I solemnly swear to update with at least three chapters a week.

Mao Lu is a regular Beijinger, well except for the fact that he's in a lot of debt and is best friends with a conglomerate heir.
 He works hard to make money and struggles with his daily life until one day he receives a letter. 
A letter that changes everything. 
Follow his adventures as he travels between dimensions, falls in love with a powerful prince and uncovers a terrifying conspiracy.

The first volume will soon be available as a fully proofread and edited eBook and Paperback with illustrations. To be ready for the pre-order and pre-release join the mailing list on my website: https://writing-pilgrimage.com or subscribe to my YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5vuT5l1K1uVnfLTQQpNAuw

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This is a Danmei Novel

-Release schedule: Crazy, I am the worst at regular set updates.

-If ranked in the top 100, 1 bonus chapter
-Ranked top 50, 2 bonus chapters and some extra romance. 
-Ranked in top 10 (If that ever happens I would be so grateful.) 3 bonus chapters ***on the following Wednesday the week after rankings.

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"Done?"
Director Charlie and the vocal assistant weren't present for the last two hours of the recording session. Of course, Lou Lan had reassured them by saying that Meng Fan could continue with the recording and they can check in periodically.
Because of Meng Fan's previous performance quality and efficiency, Lou Lan, Charlie, and the assistant were not worried at all. They'd gone off to take a break and return to fix any minor issues later. They didn't expect them to be finished when they returned, though.
They selected a few major plot points, and when the quality was assured, they felt there was no need to check the rest. Immediately, it was sent to the proofreading team.
In less than a day, Meng Fan managed to finish most of the major recording for "Nine Days". The most important parts were complete, and with good quality as well. Naturally, Charlie was very happy, for he had finished recording all 12 episodes for season one of "Nine Days" that was scheduled to take a week in one day. Now, there are a few more days to engage in editing and filling. Because Meng Fan had voiced the male lead, they were able to finish everything several days ahead of schedule.
Speedy, but high quality. The client's daddy will be very satisfied! And when such a powerful daddy hegemony like Xuan Wu animation was satisfied, they will definitely give you more work!
"I originally thought it would take you at least three days to complete them all. I didn't think you'd be finished in just one day." Charlie asked someone to send the recording to the editing department before asking Meng Fan. "Then what are your plans now, do you want the studio to find some more work for you?"
"I actually have something I need your help with, director."
Meng Fan had already gone over the sentence several times in his mind. "Before, all my roles were small, and focused on video games, so the roles didn't have that much coherence in the plot. But after voicing Luo Hao all day, I've learned a lot. I felt enlightened, but also found a lot of shortcomings. I understand it's not enough to rely solely on the versatility of my voice and the power of imitation. Voice acting still needs to be studied."
Anyone who heard Meng Fan's words would have thought it was fake beyond compare. How can someone as skilled as you be declaring inadequacy? But if they believed him, then they would respect his modesty, professionalism, diligence, perseverance, and reaffirm the idea that "nobody can just succeed, everyone has to work hard" from the bottom of their hearts.
Meng Fan didn't know which one of the above Charlie was feeling at the moment.
He continued, "So, I want to ask you if I could register a recording studio and keep practicing. Of course, if the studio needs any work done during the process, feel free to let me know too."
There was only a time requirement left to satisfy [Studio Bug]. Meng Fan thought about paying to rent a recording studio since it was a rather convenient thing to find in Hangzhou, but it would be costly. But any problem that can be solved by money is not a problem. Only, it would reward him with +5 voice acting skills and +3 voice appeal, which will come all too sudden. If he could borrow a studio with the excuse of wanting to learn, he could say he'd been buffering during his training. Then, everyone would be surprised at the speed of his progress and have no time to ponder the other metaphysical attributes at play.
Nowadays, everyone thought Meng Fan was a voice acting genius. If they could see his hard work and effort, they would recognize him for his skill.
"That's it? Do you have any other requests? Like do you want an assistant or a vocal technician?" Seeing Meng Fan shake his head, Charlie smiled. "That's all huh, then you can have this studio, you're familiar with it too. Either way, this studio was reserved for you to voice dub Luo Hao anyways."
Just like that, Meng Fan became the CV in the Chocolate Factory that had his own recording studio.
He went home and came back again with his toiletries and art tube.
When Meng Fan returned, Charlie was still there. Seeing his equipment, Charlie couldn't help but feel he was going too hard.
Meng Fan was hardcore indeed. Aside from going to the bathroom, he never left the studio. Time is precious! As for what he'd been doing inside… Heh. Drawing of course.
Fortunately for him, nobody came into the recording studio that had become exclusively his own. Only Lou Lan would occasionally come in if he had worked for him. Otherwise, anyone who entered would have to treat Meng Fan like a psychotic patient.
Recording studios are so stuffy, how could someone draw in there?!
He drew until 3:00 am, went to sleep, then went off to run a lap and eat some food before returning to the drawing desk.
But after solving the issue of stuffiness, a closed space like the recording studio was an optimal environment for inspiration and creativity. No wonder authors rushing their work would enclose themselves in dark rooms.
Of course, Meng Fan wasn't drawing manga the entire time. As he drew, he was also increasing his voice acting abilities and continued to stream on time at night. To make it easier, he streamed about his voice acting.
There was a lot of voice acting content in the studio, as there were roles that hadn't been recorded yet and several that have been. The video clips were also much easier to produce. With the help of professional equipment, all the netizens found the new method of streaming very refreshing. It also allowed the netizens to feel the charm and appeal of dubbing more intuitively.
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"Robin, we're here to get you! Leave the rest to us!"
"We're going to die anyway, I want to die here!"
"Robin!"
"Robin Jiang!"
"Robin!"
"What's going on here?!"
"I finally understand who Robin's enemy is! Usopp go and shoot that flag."
"Yes, sir! The new weapon is a giant slingshot, its name is Dou! Taste its power! Flamingo star has been • slain!"
"The pirates have declared war on the planet ZF!"
"Just as I hoped!"
"Quick, say you want to live!"
"If I could really make one wish, I want to live! Take me to the oceans with you!"
From Luffy's shouting to Robin crying in the end, Meng Fan had dubbed the hottest episode of One Piece in one go, featuring Luffy, Robin, Choppa, Sanji, Nami, Sauron, Usopp, Spandam, and passersby, including the sound effects of the flamingo penetrating the flag, the howls, the cries...It was full of hearty emotion!
And he'd done it all in Japanese too.
"What a f*cking badass, if I haven't been listening to Meng boss's voice dubs recently, I would think this was the original soundtrack!"
"Hahaha, the female voice has returned! The person who betted on no female voices appearing today better give a 1024!"
"How many roles is that in one breath?! I'm suspecting there's a voice acting crew living in Meng host's throat!"
"F*ck, it's so badass to voice a female, but he even managed to dub her crying!"
"F*cker! When I watched this episode, I almost died from crying, now you're here to earn my tears again!"
"Crying from listening +1!"
"Crying from listening +69!"
"I'm used to it, if Meng fatty dubs all the famous characters from Japan, I wouldn't even be surprised!"
"Haha Meng host is brave in his dubbing choices, as long as he continues imitating, I can say that I'll be able to recognize any voice!"
"I just want to listen to his impression of Mr.Ohashi."
"I want to hear Mr.Yoshizawa."
"I'm different from you guys. I want to hear him impersonate Mr. Ogi."
After dubbing this segment, Meng Fan ended tonight's stream.
This was the fifth live broadcast he'd done in the studio. On the fifth broadcast, from domestic to foreign, from TV series to movies, and from animations to the ghost stories circulating on 8th Station, he was unable to count the number of clips he'd dubbed.
After logging off, he checked the time for [Studio Bug]. He was already at 9500 minutes of experience and was only 500 away. In about 8 hours, he'd be done.
He drew until 3:00 am.
Better take a nap. When he wakes up, the experience will be full.
Meng Fan flopped over and prepared for bed, but was woken up by the alert in his mind, signaling the completion of a task.


To reward Meng Fan for his bravery before his heroic death, the cosmos rewarded him with a 'system', sending him back in time to three months ago, alive.

Gun-Ho was having a beer with Jae-Sik at the security office in his company. It was all dark outside.
"You used to be very active in the literature club when we were in high school, and if I remember correctly, you also participated in making our school newspapers."
"Yeah, I did. After graduating from high school, I went to college in Seoul and majored in creative writing. It was not one of the top universities, but I had a good life at that time because I could do what I enjoy doing."
"That's right. I think I heard that you studied creative writing."
"I even won the annual spring literature contest after graduating from college, which was held by a newspaper company in a province. At that time I felt like I could rule the world. I wanted to get a job in a newspaper company, but I found a job at a publishing company instead."
"So you got a job where you can use what you learned in college and that was also what you liked to do with your life."
"As you know, a publisher is different from a factory like here. It was a small publisher with only three or four employees and it wasn't doing very well."
"Hmm."
"However, that publisher was publishing a few bestseller books at that time, so they could pay me even though it was not much. I met my ex-wife there too."
Jae-Sik's voice started shaking when he talked about his wife.
"Have some more beer."

"Sure."
Jae-Sik sipped his can of beer before he continued to talk.
"Did your wife work at the same publisher?"
"My wife was a poet. In order to make our livings, we both worked at the publisher as a freelancer doing proofreading and editing."
"Hmm."
"So we hit it off when we met. I was a chief editor at the publisher at that time. Unfortunately, the company could no longer find a good book that would generate enough revenue. Any subsequent books we published were sold less than 500 books at a maximum."
"Does it cost a substantial amount of money to publish a book?"
"Our company usually published foreign books. So it cost more than 10 million won to do the translation, editing, design and printing work."
"Wow, it does cost a lot."
"That company eventually had to close its business. I couldn't find a job in the field afterward because the publishing industry wasn't doing well at that time. So I made a living by doing editing. However, I don't know what happened to me; I guess I had to stay in the field doing editing even though I wasn't making much. But, instead, I opened a deep-fried chicken restaurant with a loan."
"Hmm."
"I put about 100 million won in that restaurant business including its premium. However, the restaurant strangely suffered from the beginning. Moreover, my wife became testy because of the customers who were rude and loud, and sometimes they harassed my wife, those low-lives."

"Hmm."
"She would have been able to take some stress that arose from the business if we were making good money. However, the business was suffering, and we were pressured by the creditors to repay the loan, on top of those abusive customers. My wife couldn't take it anymore. You know people who write like a poem, they are more sensitive than average people."
"Did your wife invest her money in the restaurant too?"
"She did. She took out the money from her credit cards here and there and invested 20 million won in the business. I also used my credit cards in addition to loan from a bank and put about 40 million won in the business."
"So, you started the business with your own cash of 30 million won."
"I had a severance pay of 5 million won that I received from the publishing company's president. He literally cried when he gave it to me. And I borrowed 10 million won from my mother. I used those 15 million won in addition to my own cash—another 15 million won."
"The debt was too high compared to your own investment fund."
"The debt grew like a snowball and we were behind our rent. It was that time when my wife eventually suffered a miscarriage of a baby; she asked me to divorce her."
"Whew. I had similar life experiences. You had a harsh time."
"I haven't heard from my wife for a while. She must still be suffering financially because of her credit card debt. She is probably having a hard life doing editing work."
"Hmm."
"When I eventually closed the deep-fried chicken restaurant, I was left with a debt of over 50 million won. I suffered for quite a while by the creditors before I became a person with a bad credit score."
"Why didn't you apply for rehabilitation?"
"I did. With rehabilitation program, I was supposed to pay off debts according to a payment plan provided by the court. I was paying a certain amount of money to the court every month for several months until the accident happened."
"An accident?"
"I was doing the editing work, but when I couldn't get enough work to make a living, I got a job in a delivery company. I think I worked there for about half a year until the accident. I was delivering a package and I had to make a quick delivery, so I made a U-turn where I was not supposed to do and then I hit a car that was coming from the opposite direction. I crossed the yellow line to make a U-turn. I guess something happened to me that day to cloud my judgment."
"Hmm."
"I am not good at physical work since I have always done office work like writing and editing. Moreover, I had a bad credit score. So it was really hard to find a job. I saw Jong-Suk working with machines and doing welding. He looks great. I know I can't do that kind of work."
"So, you have 50 million won debt in total?"
"I have been paying for the debt until now. I think I have 30 million won left by now. Oh, I talked with the general affairs manager the other day about it. He said I would get paid 1.6 million won per month, and I can take the amount of basic living expenses out of it before it is seized. I think I can save some money then."
"Saving money?"
"Yeah. My rent is paid by the company, and I can have my meals at the company. So, I think I can pay off the debt after ten years working here."

"Right. The biggest expense that the people who don't make enough money is the cost of the rent. The people who don't have money have to pay for rent, and the people who have money receive that rent from them. That's the current economic system we are living in. Consequently, the gap between the rich and poor is getting bigger. Ten years are too long for you."
"Well, it is still hope. It's a good thing that the debt is shrinking instead of growing. There is one thing that bothers me a lot though. I collected some funds from our friends from high school to make an alumni directory book. I couldn't make it happen even though I really was going to make it."
"People don't make those types of directory book nowadays, do they? Many people don't want to expose their real address."
"I know. So I was going to enter their e-mail address instead of physical addresses with phone numbers. I started collecting the necessary information and writing some stuff already like the history and path that our school took so far and news from our friends, etc. I still have the writings with me. It will cost 2-3 million won to complete it but I used that money to pay my rent because I was about to be evicted. I became an animal to our friends."
Jae-Sik eventually burst into tears.

This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top. A very realistic novel that moves away from fantasy and sci-fi and focuses solely on the issues of society and life.

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