This book's creation was for the purpose of proofreading and critiquing other people's novels on Webnovel.com

Through this book, I'll be indirectly showcasing several books as I go in-depth with each chapter pointing out any inconsistencies, basic spelling/grammar errors and typos, and anything that doesn't make sense.

I already predict that the comment section will probably get filled with active discussion over these books.

Note, if you came here for a novel, tough luck. There is no novel, this is only for editing/proofreading/revisions/critique. Though if you were looking for something to read and some of these reviews were worth it, then good for you. :D

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"What should we do? Shall we go ahead or go back?" asked Smoke feeling proud of her team who choose to maintain their rationality and kept calm while completely believing her even after such a chaotic revelation.
After hearing everything, another question was if they should find out more or should they come back with a precise plan. Not only because of the dangers that the mission would make them face but mainly because there were many innocent people who they had to rescue. Their one single uncalculated step will not only cost their team but also cost many other people their lives. 

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"Go ahead" everyone spoke at the same time while Zhi Xin said, "Go back."
Smiling Smoke answered while looking at Zhi Xin, "5 v/s 1 not possible, my group say's go ahead."
"It's dangerous." warned Zhi Xin as he was aware that they are practically walking into a tiger's den which was already laid with traps to catch them.
"We love danger's " answered Fire.
"Playing with danger's is our specialty" added Sugar
"We practically eat, sleep, and dream danger's " added Red
Looking at Zhi Xin not saying anything further smoke started speaking and informing about the strategy,
"Step1- call reinforcements- chile. Make sure we have enough medical supplies and space to take the injured back with us.
step 2- hack both the cameras and figure out the number and condition of people we could rescue. Make sure to store the data, it will be useful.
step 3- We will follow the same pattern for entering while the pattern will shift while exiting. Entering, I will go ahead, Fire and Red side to side, Sugar will follow. Chile will make sure reinforcements arrive on time. During exit, Sugar will lead, Red and Fire will maintain Side to Side, I will follow.
step 4- make sure everyone is safe and sound
step 5-blast the entire place.
Any opinion?" Asked Smoke after she finished instructing.
"No" "Yes" came the voices of everyone. While everyone said No Zhi Xin was the one who said Yes.
Looking at Zhi Xin Smoke was waiting for him to explain while giving him a look saying -care-to-explain-.
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On their wedding night, 
Zhi Ruo was scared and nervous, sitting  on the bed she was awaiting her husband since hours. 
"This is the first time I will be meeting him... Shall I run away? Anyway he will not be able to find me, afterall who marries without meeting even once" 
The door opened and a handsome man entered:
Qing Shan moved towards the bed with a steady pace that was neither hurried nor slow.
Zhi Ruo: What ae you doing?
Qing Shan: What a husband should do.......


Since getting married, the almighty boss became a wife slave and everyone was filled with limitless dog food.

I know it's a long break (more than a year) but I had to focus on my studies. Now into a 2-year internship with lots of free time in my hand. Thus I've decided to continue the novel, at the very least I can guarantee that I can keep writing for the next couple of years.

Guys, I'll officially upload the next new chapter in a couple of weeks; I'm editing all the chapters released, to improve the standard. Re-evaluation of the novel showed my standard of writing is weak, which's obvious given the fact that English is only my third language.   

I'm working on improving my writing skills but for the immediate results, an Editor software has been subscribed for premium.  

Readers are welcomed to re-read the chapters edited, all edited chapters will have the date of editing in the 'author's thoughts'. I'll be editing at least three chapters every day.

I know many readers might be angry or disappointed with the inconsistency and huge break for which I extend my humble apology to all the readers. And will be extremely grateful for all those re-joining the ride and thanks for reading my book.

Alistair strolled through darkness shunning himself from light, he was plunged into the depths of hell by the greed of his own family. He crawled from those depths leaving trails of blood, craving for vengeance and toiling like a crazy wounded wolf.
 
After years of struggle he stands at the peak, a peak no one could touch, a peak where he could disdain anyone. Alistair had long got his revenge and quenched his burning fire with blood of those wronged him. 

The man who was supposed to have achieved everything one could possibly attain in a lifetime was actually left with nothing but felt utter isolation and icy solitude before his inevitable end, the death.

*****

Alistair was given another chance, reincarnation, with a system and the inheritance of the entire universe. 

He’s determined to lead an entirely different life, a life in which he truly pursues happiness with lots friends, lovers and a lovable family.

Will he get over his past and really turn a new leaf??? 

Will a place where law of jungle has long seeped into the society allow him lead a pleasant life without any carnage or bloodshed?????? 

 
This Story is also published in Royalroad.com

Clark taps the table with his fingers while his other hand is on his face while his index finger is on his lips, trying to look like he's thinking.

"Well?" Mrs. Corsilla asks.

Dona smirks while looking at Clark with a blush on her face, 'Oh my god, you're so hot, Mr. White!' she thought as she drinks the iced lemon tea the moment it arrived.

"Hm, let me check if you can take good care of Cj," Clarks looks at Mr. Rogers who carries a thick envelope.

"What is that?" Mrs. Corsilla asks with a bothered look on her face, "I can tell you every reason why you should give us Cj!"

Clark opens the envelope and looks at Mrs. Corsilla, "Okay, tell me."

Dona smiles and butts in, "I'm a capable woman who can take good care of a child. I'm a well-known actress and--"

"Shut your mouth, Dona," Mrs. Corsilla covers her daughter's mouth.

Dona just rolls her eyes.

"We, are financially capable of raising a child. We can send him to school. Give him anything he wants. He is free to do whatever he wants to, Mr. White. And we can give him a complete set of parents," Mrs. Corsilla smirks, thinking that she hit the spot.

 Clark just smiled and gave the envelope full of money, "Is this enough?" 

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona open their eyes widely while staring at the amount of money.

Dona shakes her mother's arms while whispering, "It's enough! It's too much!"

But Mrs. Cordilla's eyebrow flinched, "Are you trying to buy us? This won't work! We care for Cj! You can't take good care of him! You're the reason why my daughter died!" Mrs. Corsilla stands up while yelling.

Everyone else in the restaurant looks at them.

"Now, isn't this an attitude worthy for claiming that you can take good care of my son?" Mr. White sips his iced lemon tea.

"Mr. White, we can assure you that we can raise Cj well. Look at this, if we take him, you can live your life as you wanted. You don't have to worry about a kid. You can live your life as a single man and even get married," Dona said while leaning forward, holding her hands to squish her breast out.

Clarks looks at her, "Well then, I have a proof that you can't take good care of CJ like Kirin," he looks at Mr. Rogers who handed him a folder.

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona look at each other, "Now, we said that we don't need money," Mrs. Corsilla said while gesturing to put the folder away.

"As I have said, it's a proof, not money," Clark stares at them like they are just ants that he can stomp on, "Why don't you take a look at it."

Mrs. Corsilla and Dona suddenly felt shivers run down their spine as they open the folder.

There they saw Kirin's photos.

She's full of bruises and wounds.

"That's the day she called me because she's pregnant. I thought it's blackmailing to make me be responsible for the child, but she said it's from you- her family. You hurt her to discipline her, and you're expecting me to let Cj fall in your hands?" Mr. White said.

Mrs. Corsilla saw a paper with hand-writings of Kirin after the photos of her.

"That's her letter, a testimony of how you abused her and left her alone. You did that to her because she's a child of your husband's mistress, right, Mrs. Corsilla?"

After the letter, Kirin has her signature and her I.D. as proof. 

"She died because her health was not good. I tried to keep her alive. We've tried everything but she can't get well. You neglected her. You didn't raise her the way a family should."

Mrs. Corsilla grinds her teeth as her veins pop out of anger.

Dona felt embarrassed and tried to act since Mr. White hasn't mentioned her name for Kirin's death.

"Mr. White! I love my sister! I tried to help her but she was afraid and she ran away from me," Dona cried.

Mrs. Corsilla looks at Dona with disbelief and she slapped her, "How ungrateful! I raised you better than that kid! I gave you everything you wanted! I removed Kirin from the family to make you the apple of the eye of your father yet you're leaving me behind!" She screamed and pulled Dona's hair.

Mr. White just stares at them, "I'll let you go if you stop bothering me and CJ. But once I hear that you, even just your shadow, appears in front of Cj, you'll live the rest of your lives in jail. I know what you wanted, money, but you refused," Clark stands up.

"Of course, if you took it, you can't ask for money again. But if you have Cj, you can ask me non-stop."

Clark took money from his wallet and put it on the table for the bill.

"Miss Dona, I hope you can make a public apology for slapping Sheen, or else your whole career is done for."

Mrs. Corsilla stops pulling Dona's hair and slapped her again from what Clark said, "You're ruining  what we worked hard for!" 

Dona just stares blankly, her mother really abused Kirin, but she's still being abused.

'I wish I'm dead,' Dona thought while her mother slaps her.

Clark just looks at them in disgust.

Both of them are losing their minds.

Dona is known for sleeping with directors just to get casting.

Mrs. Corsilla's known for illegal gambling.

Clark's blood just boils while thinking that they want to get CJ from him.

He took a blind eye the first time they asked but as time passes by, they get more eager and aggressive so he has to do something.

Clark went back to the company.

Sheen's in her office, continuing the book she wants to write.

He didn't bother her and went to his office to call Dan.

"Please call Dona Hale Violet's manager and tell him that if Dona won't make a public apology, both of them will sink down," Clark said and turned off his phone.

Sheen is too full of energy while writing that she did not notice that it's already lunch.

Her stomach's already begging her to eat but due to being too focused, she can't hear it.

She types fast, eager to let out all her ideas in the story when suddenly she heard someone knock at the door.

She froze, nervousness run through her body as her face tightens.

'Is it Clark?' she thought while standing up.

Ever since she talked with Bea, she's afraid to see Clark for a reason she can't understand.

After feeling sad because she's not part of Clark's family and even asking herself if she wants to be, she feels nervous about having to see Clark.

But she wants to see him and say her thanks for helping her last night.

But there's the feeling that she wants to have her distance from Clark.

She can't run away from him, he's her boss.

And she's an assistant.

She's only an assistant.

Sheen exhales as she tries to calm herself.

Since for some reason, she feels excited to think that Clark's behind the door.

"What the hell! What takes you too long to open the door?" Bea yelled as she opens the door. 

Sheen froze as her legs weaken due to shock.

"Hey! Keep it together, I know you're going to be a White someday!" Bea whispers as she holds Sheen's arm.

"I brought lunch," Bea smiles apologetically at Sheen while they get to her desk.

Sheen just had her poker face until they finished eating.

"Hey, don't be mad. I was waiting for too long outside. I thought you're already out from hunger. You're too focused when writing that you forget to eat," Bea frowns.

"I know, it's just that I was hoping---"

She stops from what she wants to say, 'I'm not hoping to see Clark!' she thought.

"I was hoping that I can finish the 56th chapter today and by next week, I can send them for proofreading and for editing," she continued.

"Oh, I can do the proofreading, Dan can do the editing," Bea suggested.

"Aren't you too busy for the wedding?"

"No, we're done with that part. And you need to pass that by December, right? We still have that much time. I'm just shocked that you're already at the end."

"Yep, I already started writing before I told Clark." 

They both drink their coffeetea jelly when Sheen's phone rang.

She scowls when she saw who the caller is.

"What do you want?" She asks in an irritated voice.

"Can we talk, please?" Kady asks in a begging tone.

Bea stares at Sheen, the only one she will make that face is Kady.

She went beside Sheen and listens.

"No, I am busy."

"Please, I just want to tell you something about Mr. White."

"You can tell it to me now."

"No, I'll tell it if you will see me personally."

"Then, it's your lost. I don't care about what you want to say."

Sheen was about to turn off the call when Kady replies, "He raped a teen and got her pregnant!" 

Sheen's forehead furrows, "I'll see you at 7 pm," she said and turned off her phone.

"What was that? Raped? Where did he hear that?" Bea asks.

"I don't know. But I can't let Kady have that rumor with him. I have to tell him the truth. Clark didn't do that," Sheen frowns.

She can't let rumors about Clark spread.

She has to correct it.

But it's not her problem.

It shouldn't be her problem.

She's just an assistant.

But she can't keep her heart at rest.

It bothers her so much that it suffocates her.

Sheen, a famous book author of romance and a victim of unrequited love, finds herself in need of true romance for a new novel. She stumbles upon young men while thirsty to create the novel she needs to write, she jumps from one romance to another to create the perfect romantic book she can ever write.

This is the end of the first volume. It was mainly an introduction for the main cast, exploring their motivations for playing Classmancers. To spice it up, the finale had some action which gave a taste of how a competitive match looks like.

The second volume will continue with the entry exam, showing how Lars and Julia fare and who ultimately makes it into the club. The draft for the volume is already done, so it's all about proofreading and editing now. Starting with the chapter release tomorrow, I'll resume my usual schedule of releasing one chapter a week.

Meanwhile, you're welcome to give some criticism, rate the fic or even leave a review. This is a very niche type of web novel, so I'm sure I did some things right and some things terribly wrong. It'll be helpful to know what you think works and what doesn't, so I'll learn how to execute this story better.

If you got any spare power stones, please consider spending some on this novel if you're enjoying it  ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Imagine a shonen sports story. But, it’s not about baseball or soccer. No, this one is about playing a MOBA video game!

And no, it’s neither League of Legends nor DotA. A BRAND NEW ORIGINAL MOBA, the one MOBA to rule them all - Classmancers!

The game has become so big, that even schools recognize it as a sport. They even allow students to participate in Classmancers clubs and compete against other schools! Who will be the one going to nationals!?

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For Yuel, a team sport is like a chessboard that comes to life. There’s no greater fun than deconstructing every opponent and predicting twenty of their moves in advance.

And, Classmancers is the ideal stage for such psychological warfare, for it’s a sport in which game theory reigns supreme. At least, usually, it does.

There are also goofs like Lars, who got -200 IQ, yet boast godlike mechanical skill that triumphs against all odds. He’s like your typical OPMC which a cheat, except the cheat does nothing for his intellect.

Yuel and Lars are like water and fire. In other words, 100% compatible! That’s why they form an unlikely duo and set out to dominate Classmancers’ competitive scene!

However, to challenge their OPness, the two will run into rivals who are just as OP! Some of them will turn their teammates immune to Yuel’s psychological attacks, while others will redirect Lars’s almighty strength against himself.

In this harsh environment, the two will keep struggling, struggling, and struggling some more, following their promise to reach the pro scene.

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Alright, boy-ohs and girlies, I've tried my best, I really have, but writing is way harder than I could have ever imagined. I'm at 216 chapter, 218 if you count *******, and about 90-95% of the story has been written without much consideration for outlining. A while ago, I started a wiki for the novel to try to keep track of everything and only now am I starting to understand the magnitude of the mistakes I've made writing up to this point.

Anyway, the announcement this time is to let you know that my writing pace hasn't simply slowed. I'm just taking the majority of my time chronicling everything that's happened and will happen and thinking up solutions to the problems that I've detected in the logic of the story; or plotholes. I'll probably take a while and until I'm confident in where the story will head, I'll continue putting out a depressingly low number of chapters every week.

It feels wrong to not say anything and even worse keeping my ******* collecting despite the obvious downgrade to my writing speed. So, despite my obvious bias in wanting to keep Patreons, I'd caution everyone supporting me to only continue doing so if you're fine with the current situation. Webnovel, Royalroad and my ******* all keep publishing dates on the chapters I release, so you can keep track of my writing speed by looking there; until you feel it's worth it, reconsider wasting your time or money during these unstable times. I probably should have made this announcement sooner, considering the downgrade to my writing speed has been around for a month's worth of time, so I apologize.

I'll be putting out chapters when I can, but the majority of my focus right now is revisiting already published chapters, touching them up and documenting whatever I can in the novel's wiki page. Anyone wondering where I'm at can check the wiki page and even contribute if they're bored enough. That is all for now~

UPDATE (December 29th, 2019)
Alright, I'm about to get really real and admit to being a really shitty author these last three to four months. Truth be told, I really did want to take time to update the wiki and figure out how to handle what I thought were this novel's biggest failings in plot holes. However, to do that and find details that might have only been mentioned in passing, I had to eventually turn to rereading entire chapters.

Guys... I'm being as sincere as I possibly can right now. I have no fucking clue how I've developed a following after rereading the first couple chapters. I understand that authors can grow a lot after a year, but it hasn't even been that long and I believe the first hundred chapters are Trash with a capital T. It's borderline unreadable (upon proofreading this tirade, this might be a mild exaggeration, but it is true to my thoughts nonetheless) and the fact that I have nearly 4,000 followers after combining the collections on Webnovel with those following on RoyalRoad is incomprehensible to me. There are still even 19 people supporting me on ******* when I haven't released squat in nearly two months!

I've tried to ignore this. I've tried to work on other books. Hell I've even messed around with fanfiction, hoping to one day wake up and see everyone gone. Like the book had never existed. But like I said, there are still 4,000 people waiting for releases. More joining by the day and people still supporting the novel with spirits stones. Even 19 who value two chapters being at least a dollar.

Every time I think I'm ready to move on, ready to completely shut down the novel to start a new one, I think about those people and realize, "I'm a fucking bitch. Just finish the fucking novel, idiot." The passing of time has only made the feeling worse, so I guess this is a message consigning myself to completing this book, by any means necessary. I won't be able to focus on another story otherwise, so this update is more for me than for my audience.

That being said, the reason I felt inclined to give up on the novel in the first place was because of how terrible I found my writing from a nearly a year ago. So, I want to stress that I'm not going chuck a bunch of shit together to finish the story. Rather, I'm going to go back and rewrite things as I continue to catalogue things on the wiki.

Last couple things I want to quickly mention:

- I haven't really used any of the money I've made on ******* so I want to commission a legit book cover. Ditch that shit I made with my lacking Photoshop Skills...

-More on the money thing, after I finish rewriting the novel — it'll mostly be editing details that make the book seem less like it was written by an amateur, so the story progression won't at all change — I plan on also hiring people to format Book 1 and eventually Book 2 into legit e-reader and paperback formats. I know, I know...

"Greedy author, have you no shame?" 

Honestly, I want to follow pirate aba's style of keeping everything free, and I will. I'm not going to enter a contract with Webnovel or paywall chapters through kindle. However, for the people who for whatever reason want to have a kindle or physical copy of this (current dumpster fire of a) novel, I want it to at least be possible. There's also the benefit of gaining new readers through Amazon this way which is always a plus. 

Like the G.O.A.T. pirate aba — check out her (I think it's a her) book The Wandering Inn — I'll keep all the chapters on Webnovel and Royalroad free. Though the ******* thing will still be in effect at least until I finish the series or whatever.

-Since I'm rewriting the novel for the most part, I'll make more announcements as I continue updating the novel; meaning adding on to the story (Chapter 219, 220, etc...)

Unless it becomes too annoying and people request against it, I'll be adding "Revised" to Chapters that have been, well... revised.

-I'm going to be having some polls on RoyalRoad on a couple important things as I start getting back into the grind of updating this novel.

Namely: Should I change the name of the novel? If so, to what? What would you guys like the book cover to look like? Should I change the name of the Books/Arcs? 

That is all for now. So... I guess this is Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, and Happy New Years all in one?

A seemingly random instance of character creation on the deep dark web changes the life of a socially inept and insufferable game addict, Adrian, in more ways than he could ever have fathomed.

A transformation and pact with a Goddess force him out of his comfortable lifestyle as the wastrel son of billionaire parents.

Entered in the Cataclysm, an apocalyptic battle royale for the Chosen of Sponsor Gods and Goddess, with his life effectively changed into that of a game character, Adrian has to confront underground Secret Societies, Magic, Cultivation, and change dramatically if he is to have the slightest chance of survival.

With Book 2 done, here comes the shamelessness...
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When they arrived at school, Liang Xiaole and Liu Xiaofei asked another psychopath about the idea of entering the middle school. knowing that this matter could not be in a hurry, they continued to make up stories to fool the past. 
When he arrived in the dormitory, he opened QOO, while monitoring Zhao Bing's QOO, while continuing to watch Cobra's tutorials on his computer. According to the original plan, he was prepared to take action tonight, but after seeing the conversation between Zhao Bing and the online bodyguard yesterday, Hu Yifei postponed the action again, this time to make it impossible for Zhao Bing to turn around forever. 
Now, all his preparatory work has been done, except for Zhao Bing to complete the PPT presentation of the network transformation plan. 
After watching the teaching plan for half an hour, Hu Yifei remembered that Zhao Bing appeared at the Wolf's den Forum last night, so he logged on to the wolf's den again. After coming up, he found that the meeting was adjourned again, and everyone was still quarrelling over the fact that the attendees were being tracked. 
"* you are afraid of being tracked, so you just don't come to the meeting. Won't you be tracked if you quarrel in the wolf's den?" Hu Yifei said that these experts are all psychopaths, and this matter will be quarreled for several days. If you are afraid of being tracked, you should not be a hacker. To be a hacker, you have to be prepared. I am just a rookie, and I was almost chased by a tarantula to jump off a building. You are a bird if you suffer such a grievance. 
Checked the list and sent: Zhao Bing is not online, Hu Yifei withdrew from the wolf's den, and parsed the more than 20 web addresses registered by Zhao Bing. Whatever is online now, he uses an artifact to connect to it, but he can't find any trace of Zhao Bing. I can't help feeling depressed. I wish I had planted a Trojan horse on Zhao Bing's machine, so that no matter where he was, he could always know, because after he went online. Trojans will contact themselves on their own initiative. 
Hu Yifei thought of Zhao Bing's mailbox again. It was full of good things. I was sure I could use it. I just didn't know that hacking into the mailbox server was the same as hacking into that network photo album. 
As soon as I said it, I used the artifact to connect to the mailbox server, and according to the old way, I quickly found the database to store the account password. 
The password of this mailbox is also encrypted and stored in the database, but the encryption method is different, the length is different, and it is not so unified. Hu Yifei is going to look for the encryption algorithm in the code, but accidentally found that there is a field in the database that seems to be a path, which seems to be the storage path of all attachments under this account. 
As soon as he was overjoyed, he didn't even have to change the password. he directly connected to the server where the accessories were stored with an artifact, looked for the past according to the path provided in the database, and sure enough found a lot of files, including the Trojan horse that acted badly all over the world. 
without demur. Hu Yifei packed these things directly and sent them to my mailbox. That's what an artifact is good for. It allows you to get around a lot of restrictions. But there are also many restrictions that cannot be bypassed. 
Hu Yifei carefully studied these shellfish of Zhao Bingdi. Unexpectedly, various methods for spreading Trojans were found in it. There's a worm. There's an e-mail virus. As long as the computer is infected with the virus. The Trojan will be downloaded and installed automatically. Hu Yifei, hey, hey, smile. Now I can save myself and prepare to play a heavy hand. Stir-fry chestnuts with sugar to give me the virus that can kill the hard drive. Now we have this kid's own e-mail virus. Even better. Let him die convincingly. 
It's time to turn off the lights. Zhao Bing is online. Hu Yifei quickly linked the past and now Zhao Bing is still fiddling with his PPT presentation. Probably did it all night. It's time to get ready for bed. Just came up to open QOO to send and receive messages. Few messages were sent by the online bodyguard. He said he had prepared the equipment and system and was just waiting for the main road to issue an order. 
Zhao Bing spent more than ten minutes QOO. The network cable was disconnected. 
Hu Yifei watched Zhao Bing shut down the network with his own eyes, which is much easier than turning off his own phone. You can also try this trick to disconnect the other party next time. So as not to make such a big noise when the phone is turned off. 
The next day to light blue. Push open the door of the Ministry of Cyber Security. There are four security guards in there. Play games, talk about QOO, fight landlords. Those two were among them yesterday. I saw Hu Yifei. They're not nervous anymore. Stand up and say hello with a smile: "Little brother." Have you come to work? " 
Hu Yifei said "yes" and sat down in front of the computer yesterday, ready to continue to scan those IP. 
The security guards also greeted Hu Yifei, "Brother, will StarCraft play? let's play together and learn from each other!" 
Hu Yifei smiled and shook his head. "No, I have a lot of things to do!" 
The security guards were not forced to sit down and work away again, really as if Hu Yifei no longer existed. 
Hu Yifei hung up IP to scan automatically, looked back at these security guards, suddenly patted his forehead, how could he be so stupid? those security guards could come in and turn on the computer casually, then turn on a few more machines and hang up these IP, wouldn't he soon be able to get rid of all these IP? 
"I'm such a pig. Why didn't I think of it earlier?" Hu Yifei scolded himself, got up quickly, turned on four machines in one breath, including the one he had already started scanning, that is, five, just one for each of the five scanners, so it would take ten minutes. 
A scan of IP. 
Of the five scanners, only two scan very slowly, and it takes about ten minutes to scan an IP, while the other three can basically complete an IP, in a minute or two because there is little information scanned. Hu Yifei wants to scan all the IP with these three scanners today. If he comes back later, he will turn on seven or eight machines to scan with those two slow scanners, and finally put the information together. It only takes about three working days to finish it. 
Hu Yifei was overjoyed that the seemingly indefinite scanning task was solved at once.
 
 When the security guards saw Hu Yifei busily bustling around there, they wondered, did the Ministry of Network Security really want to get busy? 
The greasy security guard smiled and said, "Little brother, what are you up to? do you need any help?" 
On hearing this, Hu Yifei said, "Thank you. It's best if you can help!" 
The security guard didn't expect to get a Ken's answer and was startled. I heard that this network security is high-tech. Can these rough people also help? There is still a little chicken moving at the moment, and he said, "then tell me what to do!" 
"it's nothing, just run a software for me on your machine, and when you see that the software doesn't work, just let me know, and you don't need to look at it all the time, just about once an hour and a half!" 
"all right, this machine is already yours. It's easy to use!" As soon as the security guard heard that this was the case, he did not refuse and did not help with his hand. in case someone else got mad, he would not be able to play the free computer. 
As soon as he flew, he copied the two slow scanners to the four security machines, and then began to enter IP,. After entering ten in a row, he pressed the scan button, and the scanner began to rub over the data. Hu Yifei said, "well, if you see that the data here is not moving, just let me know." 
"is it that simple?" The security guard looked at the "high-tech" thing and scratched his head, saying that it was easier than being a security guard. He casually entered a few numbers and clicked a mouse, and he messed up in an hour and a half, and he still got a lot of money. "you teach us, we'll lose that number, too!" 
Hu Yifei smiled and picked up the list. "just enter this, and I'll see if you lose!" 
The security guard did it for the first time, but he was still a little nervous. after confirming it several times, he typed the IP into the scan box, then looked at Hu Yifei and said, "is that right?" 
"Yes!" Hu Yifei said a few words of praise, thinking that he didn't even have to type in the IP. Now he found a few pieces of paper, copied the IP, and sent it to the security guard. "just input it according to this, and when you can't play, let me know!" 
Several security guards were very excited, supervised and discussed with each other, so they typed in all those IP. After clicking the scan, they saw that the data rubbed and flipped wildly, and several of them even forgot their own games, where they turned faster than others. 
Hu Yifei had no time to see the tutorial today, running back and forth between several machines, excerpting the scan results. The three tools with fast scanning speed scanned all the IP in one day, while the two with slow scanning completed 150 IP scans today. Plus 20 yesterday, Hu Yifei has completed more than half of the total task. It is estimated that in another half a day, all the scanning tasks will be completed. 
When he got off work in the afternoon, Hu Yifei was too tired to vomit blood and left without delay. 
The security guards looked at Hu Yifei's back and muttered to each other, "if the security guard can't do it in the future, I'll come here to apply for a job. High-tech stuff is too simple!" 
"Yes! It's too easy! " 
After Hu Yifei went to school for dinner, he went back to the dormitory and acted quickly. Whether he can succeed depends on whether Zhao Bing is online tonight. 
In fact, 90% of Zhao Bing's PPT presentation was completed yesterday. Hu Yifei had already put the presentation on his own machine, and he had already done what he had to do. he was very smart and knew that after tampering, the size of the file could not be significantly changed, otherwise Zhao Bing, a veteran, knew that the document had been tampered with. To this end, Hu Yifei took great pains, and every change in it was carefully carved. Now just wait for Zhao Bing to go online, and then send back what he has done. 
After nine o'clock in the evening, Zhao Bing went online, and Hu Yifei quickly connected. He saw that Zhao Bing had completed the design of the network transformation plan and was making the final proofreading. 
Every time Zhao Bing changes, Hu Yifei is also making corresponding changes here. 
Seeing that Zhao Bing finished proofreading and turned off the presentation, Hu Yifei quickly switched to the working mode, quickly replaced the corresponding part of Zhao Bing's presentation with this part of his hands and feet, saved it and compared it with the size. The change is almost negligible. 
After unplugging and then connecting, I saw a flash drive sign appeared on Zhao Bing's computer. Zhao Bing copied the presentation to the USB disk, and then, as usual, disconnected the network. 
"Hey, hey, you're dead this time!" Hu Yifei smiled.

 

The rookie's ironic hacker road. 
Hu Yifei, who was originally a computer rookie, inadvertently found a second-hand hard disk, and has since embarked on the wretched road of hackers. 
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"Done?"
Director Charlie and the vocal assistant weren't present for the last two hours of the recording session. Of course, Lou Lan had reassured them by saying that Meng Fan could continue with the recording and they can check in periodically.
Because of Meng Fan's previous performance quality and efficiency, Lou Lan, Charlie, and the assistant were not worried at all. They'd gone off to take a break and return to fix any minor issues later. They didn't expect them to be finished when they returned, though.
They selected a few major plot points, and when the quality was assured, they felt there was no need to check the rest. Immediately, it was sent to the proofreading team.
In less than a day, Meng Fan managed to finish most of the major recording for "Nine Days". The most important parts were complete, and with good quality as well. Naturally, Charlie was very happy, for he had finished recording all 12 episodes for season one of "Nine Days" that was scheduled to take a week in one day. Now, there are a few more days to engage in editing and filling. Because Meng Fan had voiced the male lead, they were able to finish everything several days ahead of schedule.
Speedy, but high quality. The client's daddy will be very satisfied! And when such a powerful daddy hegemony like Xuan Wu animation was satisfied, they will definitely give you more work!
"I originally thought it would take you at least three days to complete them all. I didn't think you'd be finished in just one day." Charlie asked someone to send the recording to the editing department before asking Meng Fan. "Then what are your plans now, do you want the studio to find some more work for you?"
"I actually have something I need your help with, director."
Meng Fan had already gone over the sentence several times in his mind. "Before, all my roles were small, and focused on video games, so the roles didn't have that much coherence in the plot. But after voicing Luo Hao all day, I've learned a lot. I felt enlightened, but also found a lot of shortcomings. I understand it's not enough to rely solely on the versatility of my voice and the power of imitation. Voice acting still needs to be studied."
Anyone who heard Meng Fan's words would have thought it was fake beyond compare. How can someone as skilled as you be declaring inadequacy? But if they believed him, then they would respect his modesty, professionalism, diligence, perseverance, and reaffirm the idea that "nobody can just succeed, everyone has to work hard" from the bottom of their hearts.
Meng Fan didn't know which one of the above Charlie was feeling at the moment.
He continued, "So, I want to ask you if I could register a recording studio and keep practicing. Of course, if the studio needs any work done during the process, feel free to let me know too."
There was only a time requirement left to satisfy [Studio Bug]. Meng Fan thought about paying to rent a recording studio since it was a rather convenient thing to find in Hangzhou, but it would be costly. But any problem that can be solved by money is not a problem. Only, it would reward him with +5 voice acting skills and +3 voice appeal, which will come all too sudden. If he could borrow a studio with the excuse of wanting to learn, he could say he'd been buffering during his training. Then, everyone would be surprised at the speed of his progress and have no time to ponder the other metaphysical attributes at play.
Nowadays, everyone thought Meng Fan was a voice acting genius. If they could see his hard work and effort, they would recognize him for his skill.
"That's it? Do you have any other requests? Like do you want an assistant or a vocal technician?" Seeing Meng Fan shake his head, Charlie smiled. "That's all huh, then you can have this studio, you're familiar with it too. Either way, this studio was reserved for you to voice dub Luo Hao anyways."
Just like that, Meng Fan became the CV in the Chocolate Factory that had his own recording studio.
He went home and came back again with his toiletries and art tube.
When Meng Fan returned, Charlie was still there. Seeing his equipment, Charlie couldn't help but feel he was going too hard.
Meng Fan was hardcore indeed. Aside from going to the bathroom, he never left the studio. Time is precious! As for what he'd been doing inside… Heh. Drawing of course.
Fortunately for him, nobody came into the recording studio that had become exclusively his own. Only Lou Lan would occasionally come in if he had worked for him. Otherwise, anyone who entered would have to treat Meng Fan like a psychotic patient.
Recording studios are so stuffy, how could someone draw in there?!
He drew until 3:00 am, went to sleep, then went off to run a lap and eat some food before returning to the drawing desk.
But after solving the issue of stuffiness, a closed space like the recording studio was an optimal environment for inspiration and creativity. No wonder authors rushing their work would enclose themselves in dark rooms.
Of course, Meng Fan wasn't drawing manga the entire time. As he drew, he was also increasing his voice acting abilities and continued to stream on time at night. To make it easier, he streamed about his voice acting.
There was a lot of voice acting content in the studio, as there were roles that hadn't been recorded yet and several that have been. The video clips were also much easier to produce. With the help of professional equipment, all the netizens found the new method of streaming very refreshing. It also allowed the netizens to feel the charm and appeal of dubbing more intuitively.
　　...
"Robin, we're here to get you! Leave the rest to us!"
"We're going to die anyway, I want to die here!"
"Robin!"
"Robin Jiang!"
"Robin!"
"What's going on here?!"
"I finally understand who Robin's enemy is! Usopp go and shoot that flag."
"Yes, sir! The new weapon is a giant slingshot, its name is Dou! Taste its power! Flamingo star has been • slain!"
"The pirates have declared war on the planet ZF!"
"Just as I hoped!"
"Quick, say you want to live!"
"If I could really make one wish, I want to live! Take me to the oceans with you!"
From Luffy's shouting to Robin crying in the end, Meng Fan had dubbed the hottest episode of One Piece in one go, featuring Luffy, Robin, Choppa, Sanji, Nami, Sauron, Usopp, Spandam, and passersby, including the sound effects of the flamingo penetrating the flag, the howls, the cries...It was full of hearty emotion!
And he'd done it all in Japanese too.
"What a f*cking badass, if I haven't been listening to Meng boss's voice dubs recently, I would think this was the original soundtrack!"
"Hahaha, the female voice has returned! The person who betted on no female voices appearing today better give a 1024!"
"How many roles is that in one breath?! I'm suspecting there's a voice acting crew living in Meng host's throat!"
"F*ck, it's so badass to voice a female, but he even managed to dub her crying!"
"F*cker! When I watched this episode, I almost died from crying, now you're here to earn my tears again!"
"Crying from listening +1!"
"Crying from listening +69!"
"I'm used to it, if Meng fatty dubs all the famous characters from Japan, I wouldn't even be surprised!"
"Haha Meng host is brave in his dubbing choices, as long as he continues imitating, I can say that I'll be able to recognize any voice!"
"I just want to listen to his impression of Mr.Ohashi."
"I want to hear Mr.Yoshizawa."
"I'm different from you guys. I want to hear him impersonate Mr. Ogi."
After dubbing this segment, Meng Fan ended tonight's stream.
This was the fifth live broadcast he'd done in the studio. On the fifth broadcast, from domestic to foreign, from TV series to movies, and from animations to the ghost stories circulating on 8th Station, he was unable to count the number of clips he'd dubbed.
After logging off, he checked the time for [Studio Bug]. He was already at 9500 minutes of experience and was only 500 away. In about 8 hours, he'd be done.
He drew until 3:00 am.
Better take a nap. When he wakes up, the experience will be full.
Meng Fan flopped over and prepared for bed, but was woken up by the alert in his mind, signaling the completion of a task.


To reward Meng Fan for his bravery before his heroic death, the cosmos rewarded him with a 'system', sending him back in time to three months ago, alive.

Foo, a bright young man that happens to be a computer genius, who excels in life by taking shortcuts when possible. If life was a game, he would definitely pick the easiest mode.

        Exams in school? Just read all the books once, and make sure you don't forget the contents.

        Looking for a job? Make sure everyone around the boss knows just how perfect you are for the job. Having others bragging about your excellence is more trustworthy and gives plausible deniability.

        Quiz time? Let me just start my special search engine's voice recognition.

        Competing in soccer? Aw, how unfortunate, the opposing team 'somehow' got their clothes filled with itch-inducing powder, leading to a walkover.

        Playing a FPS game? Well, lets just have my own mouse driver software get some headshots while I watch a movie. It's perfectly legit, as it just speeds up the response time so that it clicks before I even get to the computer.

        Gambling sites and online casinos? Data-mining, number-crunching and image recognition! By utilizing computer knowledge, solving problems is easy!

        Some might get jealous, but hey! Just be like me, and use your brains for once!

However, in the modern era, the gangsters and other shady businesses are moving their turfs towards the internet and gaming circles.

What happens when they realize that Foo was a threat to their profits?

Well, no suspense here, they killed him.




That's the end of story... if you are to believe the god that greets him after his death.

However, can this story get a fresh new start when Foo somehow ends up in a game-like medieval fantasy world?

Or will the lack of modern tools, like his beloved computers or other modern conveniences, cut his story short yet again?








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Also, thanks to SageDrunkKitty and Remteldanmarkius for proofreading the synopsis! Any errors still there are their fault!
The fact that I might not have listened on them does not automatically make it my fault, okay?

Foo, a bright young man that happens to be a computer genius, who excels in life by taking shortcuts when possible. If life was a game, he would definitely pick the easiest mode.

        Exams in school? Just read all the books once, and make sure you don’t forget the contents.

        Looking for a job? Make sure everyone around the boss knows just how perfect you are for the job. Having others bragging about your excellence is more trustworthy and gives plausible deniability.

        Quiz time? Let me just start my special search engine's voice recognition.

        Competing in soccer? Aw, how unfortunate, the opposing team 'somehow' got their clothes filled with itch-inducing powder, leading to a walkover.

        Playing a FPS game? Well, lets just have my own mouse driver software get some headshots while I watch a movie. It’s perfectly legit, as it just speeds up the response time so that it clicks before I even get to the computer.

        Gambling sites and online casinos? Data-mining, number-crunching and image recognition! By utilizing computer knowledge, solving problems is easy!

        Some might get jealous, but hey! Just be like me, and use your brains for once!

However, in the modern era, the gangsters and other shady businesses are moving their turfs towards the internet and gaming circles.

What happens when they realize that Foo was a threat to their profits?

Well, no suspense here, they killed him.




That’s the end of story... if you are to believe the god that greets him after his death.

However, can this story get a fresh new start when Foo somehow ends up in a game-like medieval fantasy world?

Or will the lack of modern tools, like his beloved computers or other modern conveniences, cut his story short yet again?








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Also, thanks to SageDrunkKitty and Remteldanmarkius for proofreading the synopsis! Any errors still there are their fault!
The fact that I might not have listened on them does not automatically make it my fault, okay?

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