This will be about the different ships in assassination classroom, maybe with the readers and some other animes to

I hope you enjoy ♥️

If you have any writing tips and your willing to tell me it would be gladly appreciated.

Sorry if I make any mistakes because this is my first ever book I've started and this same book can be found on other apps.

Book Title: Return of the Cold Hearted Empress

Author: Ahce Darato Torres

Date Published: July 4, 2020

Book Status: Ongoing

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All Rights Reserved.

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3. Recording or screen capturing shots, and

4. Making unauthorized soft copies using html/ notepad/ pdf/ word document, or other electronic and non-electronic saving methods.

This book should not be translated in other languages and published in other sites without prior knowledge and proof of permission from the author, Ahce Darato Torres.

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1. Direct quoting a few lines from the book for critical/ literary reviews,

2. Direct quoting a few lines with right credits to the author/ references, and

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Disclaimer.

This is a work of fiction.

1. Names

2. Characters - portrayals, description and detailed characterization

3. Business Ideals - products, details mentioned and process description

4. Settings - locales, imagery of scenes and scenic visualization

5. Events - celebration, ritual events, incidents/ accidents

6. Story Plot Sequencing - Chapter Conceptualization

Are either a product of the writer's unfathomable imagination and/ or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual entities (a person; living or dead/ mythical creatures, animals, and supernatural beings) and all of the things included above are purely coincidental.

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Story Description:

She is a legendary figure who dominates business and reigns military power. With an ancient ring in her hand, she became prodigiously gifted at almost everything, but pity that she bears a curse of never falling in love. Envied by many, she is trap in a loveless family whose members maim her wings and force her to early death. However, her soul is summoned in the body of a heavily poisoned good-for-nothing miss whom everyone despises and plotted-against.

Now that she has taken over, who dares to bite her back?

Wherever she walks danger and miracles follow! Accepting a new life in another era fills her journey with endless adventure, there she meets several powerful figures who become her closest allies and help her discover the truth about her mysterious death.

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Co-author(s): None 

Editor(s): None

Translator(s): None

Country: Philippines

Region X: Cagayan de Oro City

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Writer's Social Media accounts (you can follow, DM, or support me through and negotiate about the book); 

- Facebook Official Account: Ahce Darato Torres (Aceyoung)

- Instagram: Ahce Darato Torres (@9ahcedaratotorres9)

- Twitter: Ahce Darato Torres (@999aceyoung999)

- Wattpad: Ahce Darato Torres (@9AhceDaratoTorres9)

- Webnovel: 9ahcedaratotorres9

(Ps: My accounts have the same profile picture so it's not hard to distinguish.) 

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(Letter to the Readers)

Dear Readers,

Greetings to my beloved readers, I just want to thank you for giving this book a chance to be heard. It has been a few months since Covid19 wreaked havoc around the world, tucking us into our homes for safety and security. I am delighted to be able to write and present such odd Ancient-Chinese themed novel to all of you. I know somehow most people around my age and younger are bored at home, so might as well motivate everyone to read and enhance their reading comprehension/ critical thinking skills. As an amateur Filipino teen writer I am not expecting so much from this book, but I can't help it, I want to be able to share a story to the mass and escape the world of reality for a while. Your reviews, comments and support are very much appreciated so don't forget to leave a note. I as a college student also want to improve my writing skills, so I'll thank everyone in advance. And I just want to remind everyone to avoid plagiarism, let's respect people's property and just enjoy reading, get lost in the world of imagination and have fun.

Please keep yourselves safe and follow WHO guidelines.

Love lots,

Ahce

She is a legendary figure who dominates business and reigns military power. With an ancient ring in her hand, she became prodigiously gifted at almost everything, but pity that she bears a curse of never falling in love. Envied by many, she is trap in a loveless family whose members maim her wings and force her to early death. However, her soul is summoned in the body of a heavily poisoned good-for-nothing miss whom everyone despises and plotted-against.

Now that she has taken over, who dares to bite her back? 

Wherever she walks danger and miracles follow! Accepting a new life in another era fills her journey with endless adventure, there she meets several powerful figures who become her closest friends and help her discover the truth about her mysterious death.

Book Title: Fated to Love You (命中註定愛你)
Author: Ahce Darato Torres
Pseudonym: AhceSthirteen
Date Published: May 19, 2020
Book Status: Ongoing
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2. Copying and printing hard copies for offline reading,
3. Recording or screen capturing shots, and
4. Making unauthorized soft copies using html/ notepad/ pdf/ word document, or other electronic and non-electronic saving methods.
This book should not be translated in other languages and published in other sites without prior knowledge and proof of permission from the author, Ahce Darato Torres.
Exceptions: 
1. Direct quoting a few lines from the book for critical/ literary reviews,
2. Direct quoting a few lines with right credits to the author/ references, and
3. Direct quoting for a 'hugot' post or for certain noncommercial use permitted by the copyright law.
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Disclaimer.
This is a work of fiction.
1. Names
2. Characters – portrayals, description and detailed characterization
3. Business Ideals – products, details mentioned and process description
4. Settings – locales, imagery of scenes and scenic visualization
5. Events – celebration, ritual events, incidents/ accidents
6. Story Plot Sequencing – Chapter Conceptualization
Are either a product of the writer's unfathomable imagination and/ or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual entities (a person; living or dead/ mythical creatures, animals, and supernatural beings) and all of the things included above are purely coincidental.
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Story Description:
She was a legendary figure, a genius neurosurgeon, a renowned lawyer and one of pillars of wildlife conservation. Her brainpower was too horrifying that the government saw her as an imposing threat to their jurisdiction. One day Feng Jiang Lei was sent to work for diplomatic relations with the terrorists and deal with the aftermath of risking her life to fulfill her duty. It could have been successful, but she was assassinated and died by the hands of her childhood best friend. Remembering that no matter how important a person is to you, there will come a time that love will abandon and betray you.
He was the son of an affluent technological expert, a professor from Harvard University and the heir to AdTech-Space Developers Corporation. Professor Qin Xue Rong spearheaded the expedition to Jupiter and ventured the lands of the unknown yet one night the great red spot appeared without warnings, thus putting everyone at risk. He could have saved his life, but he sacrificed his own to save his people and send them back to earthly safely. He was then sucked by the storm, bringing with him was a 17-Petaflop Titan Supercomputer and Valkyria the most advanced space humanoid robot.
But the gods seemed to have different plans. Two lost souls with untimely death were fated to meet in the era of the past and change the mistakes of the history. One became the wicked and outrageous miss who was banished to the mountains as the star of destruction. While the other was the fool who was stripped from his noble title and left to rot in the forest. Despised and plotted against, will they survive the test of time?
"What are you inventing hubby?" she asked
"A cultivation booster for my wifey!" he answered
"Will we get richer?" she asked again
"Indeed the richest!" he answered and kissed her forehead gently.
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Country: Philippines
Region X: Cagayan de Oro City
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- Facebook Official Account: Ahce Darato Torres (@Thirteen)
- Instagram: Ahce Darato Torres (@ahcesthirteen)
- Twitter: Ahce Darato Torres (@AhceSthirteen)
- Wattpad: Ahce Darato Torres (@s_ahce_thirteen)
- Webnovel: sahcethirteen
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(Letter to the Readers)
Dear Readers,
Greetings to my beloved readers, I just want to thank you for giving this book a chance to be heard. It has been a few months since Covid19 wreaked havoc around the world, tucking us into our homes for safety and security. I am delighted to be able to write and present such odd Ancient-Chinese themed novel to all of you. I know somehow most people around my age and younger are bored at home, so might as well motivate everyone to read and enhance their reading comprehension/ critical thinking skills. As an amateur Filipino teen writer I am not expecting so much from this book, but I can't help it, I want to be able to share a story to the mass and escape the world of reality for a while. Your reviews, comments and support are very much appreciated so don't forget to leave a note. I as a college student also want to improve my writing skills, so I'll thank everyone in advance. And I just want to remind everyone to avoid plagiarism, let's respect people's property and just enjoy reading, get lost in the world of imagination and have fun.
Please keep yourselves safe and follow WHO guidelines.
Love lots,
Ahce

If you didn't know, this fan fiction was made for the MLBB x Web Novel event and it, somehow, won 3rd place with my mediocre writing skills and with only 6 chapters uploaded. My school started while the contest was still ongoing thus I didn't have enough time to continue writing. My spare time was spent on my other hobbies. For these reasons, I only managed to produce 6 chapters. 

This was the first time I wrote a story, a fan fiction, a novel or whatever you'd like to call it. I was honestly surprised that it won. "Why would people like my story? This is the first time I wrote something like this, and people actually liked it?" I thought to myself. It sparked my interest for writing and I've been planning to continue working on this novel since then. But I never did because I got discouraged by my lack of 'writing skills' and writer's block, and the fact that this is just a fan fiction. 

But ultimately, after 6 whole months, I decided to take action. I wanted to write a novel, similar to the ones I've been reading for the past year. A part of me said, "But I have no writing experience. Even if you write, it won't be that good." A different part of me replied, "Well, maybe you could work on Master of Magic. You won't mind if it's bad, after all you said it's just a fan fic."

I've been working on this fan fiction for the past few weeks. Building the world, the characters, the plot, the magic system and all that stuff. Wth the upcoming Christmas break, I'll have enough time to write chapters for this fan fiction. The story will be different, and I'll start releasing them on 2020. And that's about it for the update, really. 

"Bu-but, why did you make this announcement? No one really cares."

Even if I wasn't writing, I've been using this application to read different novels and I constantly receive notifications about new collections (the count for people who saved this story in their library). And there are a lot of people who has this story saved in their collections. I'm a little bit skeptic and curious about it, so I just wanted to know if people actually saved this story in their collection. Maybe leave a comment to let me know? Heh.

Having spent life in the Enchanted Forest, Harith, a genius among the Leonins, is eager to explore the Land of Dawn. In his first night outside the Enchanted Forest, he stops an Abyssal Creature from stealing the treasures of the Moniyan Empire. As a reward, the Empire invites him to the Magic Academy which will lead him to epic adventures that will decide the fate of the Land of Dawn itself.

Hi all my beloved Readers, My name is southgamez, and because of how cheesy that names sounds I go by South. I have read all your comments throughout the story so far, sorry if I can't answer and Like all of them, but I still read them. Recently I have noticed that some of you are arguing between each other on the matter of Soren's relations and how big the Harem will get. Firstly, I will say that Soren will not be getting more than 4 members in his Harem, so if you all want to fill up the remaining spot in Dragon Ball, as I have already decided to add Vados to the Harem, then be my guest. Secondly, I only write for fun, this is not my job, I do have a real job that pays my bills so when you spam my comment section with "Answer Me" or "He's Ignoring Me", I'm not intentionally ignoring your comment, there is also a Discord that you have better chances of contacting me with questions instead of comment section. Now that that's out of the way, on to the Brass Tacks.

Q: Will Soren's Harem Increase passed 4 members?
A: No, no matter how many times you ask it will not change. Soren is not the type to think with his penis unlike Harem seeking Novels, and if I just keep getting the same question's over and over, my next book will not be Harem.

Q: Why does the Author not take the Readers ideas and put them into the story?
A: I read all of your ideas and suggestions, but like most, I can't implement them all, and your not giving me much to work with when it's based on increasing the Harem, and as for World Selection, sorry, but I have most worlds planned out, but still take suggestions and might implement them.

Q: Does the Author even care about the Readers and their suggestions?
A: Fuck no... Just kidding... I love you all, and I care for all of your opinions and suggestions, even if they are stupid as shit (You know what I'm talking about Husky XD)

Q: Is there a set Upload time?
A: No, I upload when I want to, just like I write when I want to, but I do try and keep it to 1 chapter a day or every 2 days. If this was a paying job then I would upload more often.

Q: Are you really an Unpaid Writer?
A: Yes! I get no money off of writing Fan Fiction due to the copyrights, so if you plan on writing your own Fan Fiction, be prepared to get $0 in revenue, unless you get a kind soul to Donate you money through Pay Pal.

Q: Do you beg for money?
A: No, never. I don't expect any kind of money off of this Fan Fiction, because in my opinion its complete garbage, and should be burned to the ground, I haven't even put a Donation Link into the chapters until recent due to someone saying I should, but lass, no money.

Q: Are you crazy?
A: Bat Shit! I am probably one of the most insane people you would ever meet in real life, I also like role playing as an Ancient Immortal who is over 300 years old, they don't get more crazy than me.

Q: How far have you come in writing and punctuation since the start of this Fan Fiction?
A: Far! I started off this series while using "Half" instead of "Have" up until chapter 26, and I'm too lazy to go back and change it, as for spelling. I still can't spell for the life of me, and can say that Google Spell Check wrote half of my Fan Fiction with all the miss spells.

Q: Will you do more Fan Fiction's in the future after Soren's adventures are over?
A: Who knows, but for now, I will finish off this Fan Fiction, then I will start an original Novel so I can make some money if it becomes famous, but for future Fan Fictions maybe you guys can give some ideas, and if I don't know the Anime/Manga/Novel then I will Read/Watch it before writing a new Fan Fiction.

That was all I could think of for now that you all might have as questions for me. If you have more post them in the Discord, and I will create a channel just for them and make a new Q/A chapter in the future, and if you don't like this type of chapter then I will delete it. Leave your opinions down below or in the Discord so I can ignore them XD I will also try to post 2 chapters tomorrow, good night.

The Main Character Soren was *Cough Cough* in a car when an accident happened, he was then killed and brought in front of God. God gave him 3 wishes, his wishes had some restrictions but he wished for a System that in connected to every Anime in the Multiverse and now he travels getting stronger to become a God himself,

This is my first one of these type of Novels and I do not own any of the Anime or materials used except my Character, I only made this to improve writing skills.

Thank You

TLDR: I will be taking a break for around a week due to my school assignments/examinations coming up and will remain posting on 30th July 2018. For my new Webnovel viewers, I wouldn't mind you not voting for me using your power stones next week since I won't be posting for that week!

Hi! For my QI readers, I realised that you didn't get to read how I started writing Spirit Immortal. So below is a short description of myself!


Background about myself and inspirations for writing Spirit Immortal
Currently, I am a university undergraduate, and I have been reading fiction for years. I first got into reading fiction because of anime. Initially, I was a pure anime/manga fan. But I then found out about the existence of light novels. Light novels were far ahead from the existing anime, so I started to binge read translated volumes on Baka-Tsuki. It became somewhat of a drug to me. I kept reading and eventually, fictions had become part of my daily life. However, everything changed when the Yen Press attacked… Suddenly, many of my favourite novels disappeared, and less and less light novel translations surfaced. 

Finding myself in a severe deficit of fictions to read, I found something called Novelupdates. Every few minutes, there was a new novel chapter being released. I was overjoyed. Finally, I was able to satisfy my daily fiction needs. That was how I got into wuxia/xianxia novels. Being ethnically Chinese and fluent in both English and Chinese, there was a great allure for me in these stories. When I was younger, I would frequently watch The Legend of the Condor Heroes and many what we call "wuxia xiaoshuo." So seeing that the traditional stories blend with modern themes was somewhat shocking to me. To think that such a part of the internet existed!

So I started reading a lot of wuxia/xianxia stories. I remember the early days of Coiling Dragon and Stellar Transformations. The friendly competition between Gravitytales and Wuxiaworld. But one day, I encountered Doulou Dalu. For those who have not noticed, Spirit Immortal's cultivation system is inspired by this very novel. The reason being, it was the only cultivation system that I could actually follow. It's a very simplistic system, rank 1-100. The other Wuxia novels cultivation systems confused the heck out of me. However, worry not, Spirit Immortal is not a fanfiction of Doulou Dalu. In fact, other than the cultivation levels, they are nothing alike.

For a while, Doulou Dalu was my favourite novel. To a certain extent, it still is my favourite translated wuxia/xianxia novel. But I started feeling bored. Every single book that I read followed the same format. And after many disappointing stories, I thought to myself… Hey, I could just write something I like!

Thus, the idea of Spirit Immortal started germinating in my mind. It took me over five months to finish plotting the major arcs, characters and finally the ending before I started typing my first word. Majority of the reason why it took so long for me to start writing this story is because of my procrastination and school. Additionally, I didn't know if the story was going to be well received. But eventually, I steeled my mind and said: "Whatever, as long as I am satisfied with the story, who cares?"

So yeah, currently the number one fan of Spirit Immortal is myself, and I can't wait to put the entire story I have in my head into words for all of you to read. It will take time though, so do stick around!


Issues I have had when writing Book Two
I have realised that many of you were unsatisfied with the pace of the story, saying that it is too slow and whatnot. And guess what, I agree! I have been putting the character and world development at the forefront of my story thus slowing down the story progression, However, fret not, now that the first two books are completed, the story progression would begin to expedite as I believe that I have sufficiently developed my characters!

I'm trying to be more descriptive in my writing but that is still a work in progress. Perhaps it would be the greatest hurdle for me but rest assured, I will try my best!

Another major issue I had was time management. I started writing Spirit Immortal during my semester break where I had plenty of time. I even managed to complete Book 1 during that break itself! However, once school started, I had to figure out a way to balance work, personal life and writing Spirit Immortal. There were some days where I only had three hours to efficiently write, proofread and edit my chapter before I deemed it ready to be published. Hence, there might be times where my writing quality dropped slightly but I'm trying my best to ensure that I retain and even improve on my writing quality, so please be patient with me on that one.


Future of Spirit Immortal
Once my semester break hits once more, I will be sitting myself down in order to write as many chapters as I can. Perhaps, eventually, I will take the road of creating a ******* account to allow you guys to read advance chapters and at the same time, give myself some funding to weather through the school days. 

So yeah, I can't thank you guys enough for continuing to stick with me as I continue to write Spirit Immortal. I hope that I will be able to deliver the satisfying fiction that I have conjured up and brought you as much enjoyment as I had in writing this story!

Over a million years ago, the first human contracted with the first Spirit. Ever since then, Spirit use has become commonplace. Humans used Spirits to carry items and start fires. Eventually, even start wars. Thousands upon thousands of years past and one day, one human did the impossible. He transcended his mortality and ascended to the realm above.  

In the present day, the Frie Clan was once a great clan of the Himmel empire. However, a devastating battle ten years ago crippled the clan and their numbers dwindled. To make up for their loss, the upper echelons decided to adopt young orphans and nurture them to become a future pillar of the weakened clan. Shin was one of those orphans. 

Although picked up by the Frie Clan, not all is smooth sailing for Shin and the other orphans...
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Tags: Action, Comedy, Romance, Fantasy, Drama, Male Lead, Tragedy.

For some reason, QI doesn't allow you guys to see my tags so here they are. Also, there is no Harem in this novel for those of you who are curious.

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─ Hi there! Do you like reading teen fiction novels? Then, I recommend my first novel to you! But it's not properly written. I'm just a new author here at Webnovel, I tried to write because of my boredom. So I hope you'll enjoy reading this tagalog teen fiction story, thank you! Ciao! :)

This is less an Analysis about myself and more about Authors as a whole. I only use myself as reference for the experiences a person can go through while attaining what some people call 'An Artistic Vision'.

But what is an artistic vision? I have gone through many stages as a writer, and the first step I took understanding why I love fiction was what made me less invested in a story filled with great themes but more entertained when events unfolding were simple.

My first work was a mess of a story that, when I look back to, didn't make any coherent sense except within the boundaries of my own mind. This is what taught me that writing with the thought of having another reading and giving feedback on my work was essentially a form of entertaining someone else with fiction.

So as a writer, was I supposed to be an entertainer catering to the masses? This opinion was cut down when I started to write a story that had every right to be able to catch people's eyes with how 'fresh and entertaining' it was, but suddenly found MYSELF not being invested by my story.

It was a strange paradox where what I was passionate about writing wasn't entertaining while the things that were more appealing and mainstream made what I thought to be a hobby more like self-imposed homework… and what everyone here can understand is that doing work is something a regular person would avoid if they were able to.

"I get no pay for becoming an 'entertainer', so why should I?" These were my thoughts as I continued to be on the line between writing for my audience and writing for my own amusement. Eventually, I came to a conclusion. 

"Why do I even write at all? Instead of writing something that definitely won't be a masterpiece, why don't I just read the well-known works of famous authors for my own amusement?" This thought became a unconscious thought, a worm burrowing into my mind without even realising it. I didn't even notice that I had already lost my qualification as an Author.

To write for oneself is to write a diary no one else would ever read. Although many unique ideas can come from writing this way, it ultimately lacks the understanding of readers that an Author shouldn't lack. 

To write for another is also not the right path to becoming one, as being too influenced by the opinions of others can make one fickle. A scene in your story you were proud of today could be something you want to delete tomorrow because it doesn't reach the perfection you are aiming for. If someone criticises some part of your work, then such thoughts will lead to an endless repetition of deleting and redoing pages.

The only way to overcome this paradoxical thought process is by having an artistic vision, and though I may be explaining it like it's an easy thing to achieve or something I fully grasp… In actuality, I don't…

The first artistic vision as a Author was to seek perfection in my storytelling, but the more I learnt about fiction, the more I learned of the purposeful imperfections in works that made them more memorable. To put it simply, even if an painter wants to add every colour of the world to a painting, it will only become jumbled mess if there isn't purpose behind what is being written into a story.

As an 'artist', I realised that I couldn't draw without inspiration to guide me. For I couldn't trust myself that the ideas I came up with by myself would even appeal to a wider audience. I experimented, and found that small touches made a story more worthwhile for my readers.

There was I time I wrote a story about reincartion and yet purposely left out key details about the character's past life like their name or age, even going so far as only including the parts the character was specifically affected by… The results were that a lot more people became invested in the main character's current life because there weren't two names distracting them for who the character currently was. 

They only knew the name of the character after reincarnation, and were therefore more closer to that character than any of the more 'perfected' characters I made before with literally their entire backstory spelled out for the reader.

It was then I remembered something that had truly become forgotten in my brain in the time I had been analysing tropes and what made story's appealing, I had forgotten that fiction wasn't 'art', but storytelling.

Subtext is created when the reader wants to know more about the characters themselves and looks for clues to figure out things that aren't explicitly 'told' to them. When a character is first introduced and they stutter in their interactions, it makes the reader unconsciously think that they aren't used to talking or are scared of something. When writing videos talk about 'show and not tell', it was THIS that they were referring to.

However, a story is essentially the Author 'telling' a reader a story through narration anyway, so how could I leave out information about a character's backstory in their introduction. The answer I found is that no real-life person is 'introduced' this way, most people I meet in real-life are those I can say I 'know' but only when talking about what I have found out about them at present.

It is through interacting that people know more about each other, but how can fictional characters inside my head form meaningful conversations when the entire point of them are to relay exposition that the narrator hasn't yet spoke of. It was hard to get past this problem as an artist, but as a storyteller, I found that the solution to this was changing who 'I' was interacting with.

I wasn't interacting with my characters, nor was I interacting with the fictional world I made. The true person I was interacting with was the individual I was narrating to… The person, who isn't me, that would read the text I was writing down to form a story.

Since I realised I was interacting with my readers through my narrations, I decided to switch things up and make them more lively. Instead of writing a summary of the events unfolding, I changed those events to fit the short attention span of new readers who wanted explosions every second, but as I followed along this path I realised that the 'narrations' I have became less genuine over time as story beats started feeling out of place and my own desire to write waned.

To become a storyteller isn't an easy thing, as I was still bound by the opinions of my audience. I became a comedian that tried to make my readers laugh, but found that my own laughter had died out in the process.

What was I supposed to do when becoming a storyteller was so much similar to becoming an entertainer? My answer was to go back to my roots and find out: What was I before an 'artist'?

I thought long and hard about it, then in a stroke of epiphany I had came to a conclusion: Was I not a kind of 'musician' that sought my own entertainment rather than the acceptance of others? Wasn't story's something I wrote purely for my own enjoyment?

And now, my artistic vision had matured. Rather than trying to 'entertain' an audience, I wanted the future me who had forgotten about my story to look back and enjoy it just as I have enjoyed the works of others.

Whether it be sci-fi, mystery, fantasy, or comedy… I want to look back on the story I told and see something that can make me feel emotions I had forgotten in the years that went by. If it's a Greek Tragedy, then I want to feel the helpless in knowing the flawed perspectives of the world that could caused the tragedy to happen.

Similar things could be said for mystery or fantasy. If I had a purpose when writing a story, then I don't want a glossary which either outright tells me about the world I built. Instead, I want to be entertained, moved, and more intrigued by the story anyone else!

After all, once I've finished writing the story, I am no longer the 'musician' or storyteller. I am the reader!

But even with this realisation, there was a chance I'd relapse if I didn't keep my previous lessons I learned in mind. If I was to chase 'perfection' again and think too hard about whether I'm talented or not, there wouldn't be any stories written to prove that I can overcome those who are only a tiny bit more talented than me but put in less effort.

If I sought too much for recognition and inspiration from outside sources, then I'd might as well send my work to a publisher rather than keeping my work a hobby.

And if I truly wanted to write a story that isn't going to be dropped, then I must plan a consistent story in mind that has a beginning and end. I could only choose to write for my future self rather than the readers that might or may not be interested in my work.

Thank you for reading any be sure to comment if you want to request your own Analysis blog. Peace out~!

(Cover by Darkstar Dust)

This is a story I worked on ages ago that has been refined and edited by adding foreshadowing to events while also simplifying the power system better than before. This story can be considered a prequel to An Adventure Beyond Greatness as it takes place years prior to the events of that story.

Short Synopsis:
After retiring from the battlefield, my life became empty and lifeless. The regrets of my past haunt me in my sleep. Then a change occurred, a King from another world summoned me to fight for his kingdom, but I died even before I could give him my answer. Now, after a fake God allowed me to reincarnate (albeit imperfectly) with my memories intact, into a world filled with magic and swords.

Long Synopsis:
This is about a flawed protagonist who only knew to rely on others and not socialise who gets a second chance to change himself in order to live the life he aimed for in his past life. The narrator isn’t exactly trustworthy since it is purely in his bias perspective while other perspectives given by others fill in the blanks that he either leaves out or twists to suit the situation.

The story itself can be considered a parody of Isekai’s classic tropes which are given a sense of reality as time goes by. As there exists no ‘Demon Lord’, there is also no black and white, only characters opinions and counter-opinions throughout the story.

Hello everyone.

I've always wanted to do something like this, the afterwords of a fanfiction/fiction I wrote.

An Immortal's Tales of Demons and Gods is a perfect example of what I don't want to do while writing.

It's nowhere perfect, but neither is it the worst. Why did I say that above?

From ch.50 something to ch.120 something, there is basically no relation to the original story. I deviated badly. I never focused on the actual characters like Li Piao(Lu Piao? I later found out I messed up his name for like 100 ch T-T) or Du Ze.

Heck, even Ye Ziyun was basically never MENTIONED.

For me, the journey I went through the months of writing this novel was extraordinary. October,November,December.

I peaked somewhere around October/November where I was so excited to write.

 I remember many occasions were I was weirded by my readers. Some complained about a vase, some about 'harem'. I can safely say I got rid of the latter discussions by ch.150...

Yes, the ending is extremely rushed.

I missed many details by simply shrugging everything, ignoring all the background I wrote. NEVER did the Abyssal Void Lord make an appearance.

If I were to be serious, I could've easily pushed the novel to ch.300, including the revelation of the Abyssal Void Lord, an epic battle with the Sage Emperor, experts from the Divine Realm, ascending there, battling... Exploring...

Yet I didn't do any of this.

Why?

You might all have looked forward, but I didn't. I get nothing from writing, writing while having a writer's block is not my ideal condition.

Especially when I earn nothing.

To be fair I find a rushed ending after 250k words much better than simply dropping it halfway or just ch.5 and disappearing from the world.

Thanks for all the support through these 3 months, I definitely did appreciate all of this. Hopefully you will be able to carry this support to my future works.

-MGA Fanfiction
-DMWG Fanfiction
-Original Fiction. 

AVL.

He died in his first life, as an ordinary human inside an ordinary planet.

In his second life, he swore to live a life of supreme power, and so he did. He reached the apex and exterminated his enemies to oblivion.

Dying, he was reincarnated in a world which could use Chakra. He became The Overlord Of Every Being, Ruler Of 6 Universe.

Unfortunately, he died. Using a mysterious method, he was reincarnated once again inside the world of Tales of Demons and Gods.



P.S I don't own Book Cover, all rights go to the proper artist of this image who made it for me!

White, very white, other than that there's no way Zhong Yue can describe the place she's in. Chair white, table white, book white, ceiling white, walls white, fan white and a strange floating orb also white. She can guess what happened to her.

"Host, can you hear me?" A childish voice sounded across the room.

I can hear you quite clearly, but must I believe so, Yue thought.

"Host, do you want to know how you died?" An intriguing tone came.

It's a system. I must have died in my sleep after all.

"Host?"

"Do tell." Although she can guess, she still wanted to know.

The white book flashed and floated from the table in front of her. Pages flipped and stopped and on it, a picture started moving. It was her on her bed. Black curly hair, cream pale skin, long black eyelashes, slender hands and legs curled up in a ball. A beauty, she is.

And then, she rolled... off the bed. Her head struck the floor and like that she died?!

Yue could tell that now her eyes must have enlarged quite shocked at the scene.

Can't believe I died that way!

"Host..."

"Say which system are you? What do I have to do? Is there's a beginner's pack? And any rewards at the end?" She didn't want to hear any comforting words about such an awkward incident. She wanted to know what would happen from now on. She had no regrets. Although she still wanted to do much more in her life.

"Host, I'm Hong Yue, #0078 Treasure Saving System. I will help you across the worlds in saving the treasures that should have protected the world in incoming crises but because of the protagonist of that world, they were used up or destroyed leading to the world's destruction afterwards."

Quite a protagonist they are, destroying the world instead of saving it.

"Since the host don't has any specialities that may help ahead, I will provide the host with 3 skills to choose from which you can learn and 1000 points as starting value."

Saying I don't have any specialities that may help is very rude.

"Host, you will be able to save yourself from death upon collecting enough life points at the end. And, host may shift between the real world and other previously visited worlds upon collecting their fragments."

So, I have a chance to resurrect and cross in-between the visited worlds. Not bad!

The pages again flipped and a page recording her information came up.

-

Name: Zhong Yue
Age: 17
Occupation: Inter School Student, Host #0078
Specialities: Reading novels fast, Writing short stories and poems, Great at English, Good in Academics
Points: 1000
Items:
Skills: Music (Not practiced), Computer (Not practiced), Dancing (Not practiced)
Life Points: 0/100
World Fragments:

-

Dancing, too lazy to do.
Music don't want to.
Computer can do. It's something she like. After all, novels can be easily searched through it.

Yue slightly touched on 'Computer'. And three options came up. Hacking, Coding and Hardware Designing.

"Hong Yue, do you know which world I have to go?" She can choose her skills according to the upcoming world.

"Host, right now, you're eligible to choose a world from these three.

World 1: Blue Rose (Campus Romance)
World 2: Black Code (Gaming)
World 3: Pearl Ring (Showbiz)

Host, these all are at beginner levels and you won't need any help on these."

Campus Romance, while she's a fan of such but it's still tough to go against the protagonist in these as they will be supported by their lovers heavily. Showbiz absolutely can't be because she's not good at acting. Only gaming is left.

"Hong Yue, I will choose the second world."

"Host, what about skills?"

"Coding."

"Coding is further divided into three.

Coding (Beginner): Exceptional game play, Dialogues, Animations, Simple Apps and Programmes
Coding (Intermediate): Digital Graphics, Life-like Skills, Interactions
Coding (Advanced): Virtual Reality, Thoughts, speaking without typing, Creating Another World

Host will have to start from the Beginner to move on to Advanced. Host may confirm the commands."

"The Black Code and Coding (Beginner)."

"Command initiated." That was the last childish voice Yue heard before she was sent in a room alone with a manual for coding and PC for practicing.

It was tiring and stressing.

She spent a whole week before she was able to finish learning Coding at Beginner's stage. She was now adapted at creating a game with exceptional game play, dialogues and animations. And simple apps and programmes were too easy to make. At least, now she was able to recreate a Tomb Raider II from her skills. It turned to be very beneficial for her to bind with this system. After she goes back to her world, she will be exceptional in her studies and will be able to outshine others very well.

The white book flashed in front of her. It was now able to come before her whenever she thought of it. More convenient than Hong Yue.

Pages flashed and stopped at her details.

-

Name: Zhong Yue
Age: 17
Occupation: Inter School Student, Host #0078
Specialities: Reading novels fast, Writing short stories and poems, Great at English, Good in Academics
Points: 1000
Items:
Skills: Music (Not practiced), Computer {Hacking (Not practiced), Coding (Beginner), Hardware Designing (Not practiced)}, Dancing (Not practiced)
Life Points: 0/100
World Fragments: Black Code (Not Collected)

-

"Host, are you ready?" Hong Yue asked.

"Yes."

"Initiating transfer... 2%, 5%, 7%..." A monotonous voice sounded as Zhong Yue lost her consciousness.

Zhong Yue, an addicted novel reader, died by a silly accident. She fell off her bed. Opening her eyes and finding herself in a white room, she realised that she was chosen. But why? She had yet to know. Will she find as she travels through the worlds? Or will she discover another life?

- Cover is picked up from Pinterest. And then edited by me.-

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