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Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

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The God of Magic stopped blessing his believers.

The Tower of Magic, where the mages gathered and worshiped him was destroyed.

Magic Fell.

The surviving Mages were looked down upon by the rest of the world.

Normal Mages, that is.

The Mages from the Strongest Magic Family, the Vesta Family, were an exception.

For 5000 years, the Vesta Family continued to produce exceptional Mages that were strong enough to resist other forces which came after their family heritage and treasures even without the Blessing of the God of Magic.

Now, however, the Vesta Family found themselves in a difficult situation where they didn’t have a single capable heir.

That was until, Christopher Davis, an underworld Gang Leader, transmigrates into the body of Vaan Astra Vesta, a well-known pushover and the ‘waste’ of the Vesta Family.

Christopher, now Vaan, soon realized that he could see otherworldly magic spirits with knowledge so vast that the Magic books that the Vesta Family treasured for 5000 years were nothing in comparison.

That, combined with Vaan’s own God-like Talent,

The ‘Hope’ was born.

A prodigy strong enough to not only protect the Vesta Family and its treasures,

A prodigy who will restore Magic to its former glory was born.

“Haa!? Who da fuck said a Mage can’t use fists!? That crab-like face of yours, I’ll punch it till it is deformed into something better looking!”

And of course, Christopher’s gangster-like tendencies won’t just disappear.

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    MrZeeb
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    Writing quality - Like always, the content is well delivered and the way the power system and spells is developed seems very interesting and well thought out from what we know so far. Looking forward to seeing more of it. Story Development - World building has started off strong, has the foundations to be a great story. Quite interested in seeing how the MCs relationships are going to develop. Character Design - Definitely one of your best written MCs and side characters, every interaction has been fleshed out throughly, and the characters aren’t cardboard placements. The MCs personality is great, not cheesy or overly edgy. Hope to see more interactions! All in all, story has great potential and i cannot wait to see more of it!

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    SleepDeprivedSloth

    Alright, writing this review to clear some of the doubts some readers have. This review should help you decide whether to pick this book or not. First, and the most important thing, The relationship between Vaan and his mother will be a completely normal mother-son relationship. I don't even know why I even need to make this clear, I never hinted at any kind of romantic interest between the two, pls. Second, this book will not have a harem. Third, MC's character might be a bit because of his history. And uhh... I don't have anything else to say... Ah right, This book is amazing. I can say it because I have read it till the last chapter. I even know the future chapters so I can tell you that this book will get even better. So you guys should read it.

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    SleepDeprivedSloth

    Hai Hai! I will be writing the 10th review myself. My book? Definitely 5 Stars. (Biased I am, kukuku.) Anyways, I can confidently say that this is my most well-thought-out book out of all I have written so far, the world-building is great, I gave my all to write a likable characters with their own flaws and potential to grow. The magic in the book isn't just normal, "Fireball!" And boom! I have tried to explain Magic Theories, Magic Circles, Inner Circles, Magic Patterns, and all that to make it as immersive as I can. Honestly, I will just say one thing, Trust your sloth friend and read the first 20-30 chapters, I am sure you will not regret it. Thank you~ Have a great day~

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    Antaka

    Here's a detailed review.I have got nothing bad to say about it. The mc is likable, uses his brain, is witty and most important of all is far less cringey than Nux and far less edgy than Azriel. In short a well balanced and a well written Mc. The story itself is very interesting and world background seems very wide from the little info we got. The characters do not seem 2D altho i dont know if it'll be the same in the future(i sincerely hope it does). Its very easy to read and not very complex. One thing i'd like to advice to author sama is this time please flesh out characters and give them depth through various events, be they from past or present, so the readers can emotionally connect to the characters. Internal monologues and POV changes is one such way of doing things. Ofc creating an entire rough file for the character traits and personality makes it easier for the author to decide which actions a certain character will take in various situations. AND ofc thanks for giving us another banger, hope to see more of you soon.

    1yr
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    Dev_Sankhla

    5 Stars from me cause I really like 'SHGS'as for the book so far it's good, but i hope you drop more chapters fast cause 18 chapters is very few for me to build intrest , well you can drop atleast till 30 chapter really fast.and finally the MC personality there's nothing to complain really likable.keep up the good work

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    EnergyDao

    5 stars cause it fits my liking and has high quality while not mincing the social factors of the story development, although a bot slower than the usual for the author development quiet a nice read.

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    Retlom
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    what a great read so far your writing improved by a lot. this might turn to my favorite novel from you [img=update]

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    Pewkmon
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    Thought i reviewed already. Either way, a book made by Mr. Sloth is bound to be a masterpiece in writing. Altough found some things about the book that i didn’t like, they were minimal and didn’t ruin the experiance in the slightest. I find this to be a great book

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    FOOL01
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    think i need to give my first review, and a negative one at that. Author dropped this novel without a word (on webnovel). an hes still around since he's updating his other novel. low score is to draw attention since most people like to give 5s on this platform

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    giveantake

    so for what ever reason the author has decided to stop updating this novel out of blue. they are updating their other novel, so was an interesting choice to 'drop' this without a word. the score reflects the fact the author is no longer updating, so theres no point in reading this. otherwise this would have been another highly scored review .

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    Aditya_7228

    love the book!! was hooked instantly,, but can change the name, sounds pretty lazy.. .other than that amazing also I m heading to read your another book heard it's a great read so i off..

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    The_True_KING_

    Another great work by Sloth. It's great but still too little chapters😭 and thank you for another great read

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    Gyraton

    Made by sloth makes it an automatic 5 idc about anything else. But the story is good for anyone that wonders.

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    AeonAeon

    Author isn't making clear when he is gonna start updating again or if he has dropped this novel.

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    AkiraaYue

    Sigma Mc, op mom and a cute waifu, what else does a man need.. 10stars!!!

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    Eitay
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    This story sure shows the development of the author in writing, so far (24 chapters) it is well written

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    ACE_KinGz

    selfish review I like overpowered MC and 18 tag............,.........................................................................

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    Vaishu_Wankhedhe

    Want moreeeeee.. you will love it.. I specially liked the cool names.. I hope the spirits have too. like having their own background would be kinda cool.. imagine a cute little spirit saying in a cheeky way "I am Aqua Oceansia" my frnd recmded it.. it's awesome she was bragging as if she wrote it on her own. .

    1yr
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    AkiraYue

    Loved it... Mc is an absolute chad. btw harem?

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    B0mbaCl0ck

    I'll give a 5 for good luck.Question: Is there harem? Will his mother be in it? Asking for a friend.

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