I read the free chaps and the novel is full of inconsistencies. Characters are flat and have no development or personality, the writing style is standard gpt, and the class system is dumb. You can tell that the author is lazy and doesn’t put much effort. MC went from basic class to SSS class, but got no skills, no bonus attributes and no improvements, while others apparently get skills and stuff. There’s really no thought put into the development of the world and the game itself, and you are left with questions all the time about how things are or should be. Author also often forgets things he mentioned in earlier chaps and contradicts himself, making you unsure of what to believe. Not worth the money. Just another casual novel written for quick money with no effort or interest.
It was mentioned that they got killed with guns…. Man, this author is really lazy and can’t think
In his past life, Richard had hired 500 armed guards, and they had all been slaughtered: guns were useless against these creatures.
Fantasy · ChampionDog
So, some level 30 mage gives 30K xp… while the lvl 40 guy gives only 600? Bruh, this author is brain dead
[You have slain 'Death Revenant', gained 647 experience points!]
Fantasy · ChampionDog
Which is the 9th level? There are only 8 there
Yeah, the reasoning is completely stupid. Completely ignored and moving on... Quite pathetic tbh. Author's thought process is very often flawed in his novels. Sometimes simply foolish.
Nothing more gpt than this... copy paste straight away..
Her aura, radiating authority and dominance, was palpable, and far beyond anything an ordinary person could muster. Nearly everyone in the room was stunned into silence.
Fantasy · Whisk92
Ehm.. About that...
'How is he canceling out my Dragon's Authority?!' Long Yejun thought in disbelief. 'Even though I've suppressed my cultivation, my soul strength should still be vastly superior!'
Games · MyLittleBrother
I did read a part of it. Did not see yuri yet, but the MC is unbearable, and the story is very cringe in itself. I don't recommend anything this guy writes... tried quite a few and dropped every single one for most of the same reasons.
I mean.. there'a ambiguous s3xual tension created with his mother.. If the direction is not that, then what's the point of having such developments in the first place? Feels random and pointless, as most of the novel itself.
She wanted to look away but something called her attention and she turned back to me, her eyes glued on my shaft and her jaws dropped, she wanted to look away but she just couldn't.
Fantasy · Crimson_Blue
So, how does it work with both father and grandfather in the family, but MC will take their women and they do nothing? I wonder why they exist tbh, if Mc will take the women from them. They are also supporting chars, so i am hoping they won’t be sleeping with their wives by the time Mc decides to make a move.
I AM A MAGE BUT WITH MILF SYSTEM
Fantasy · author_210