/ Fantasy / SSS rank Mother-In-Law to an Invincible Family
概要
[sexual content and lemons warning]
Warning: Sexual content, lemons, Comedy, MILFs, Genius Mc and his harem.
Possessive MC, Large Harem, Capable Harem members, No Conscience towards men, Mc is a Chill guy until anything happens to his women.
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I GOT CLICHED!!!.
When Xu Qianghua opened his eyes, he found out that he was reborn back in time before the game Immortal Odyssey: Paths of Destiny merged with his world.
With only a few items left with him, Xu Qianghua is stunned and unhappy because he had a good life and was not like those who either betrayed or died to some really powerful monster.
Until he saw the introduction of them:
Family Token (Chaos): A small world with Immortal veins and high-level spirit crystal mines….
Key of the Ancients(Chaos): A mini-world with infinite monsters and riches to collect….
While Xu Qianghua also deals with his wives
Xu Qianghua: Mother-in-law this is wrong
Sister Meiying: This is not wrong, I need to check if my daughter can be satisfied.
The jumps on Xu Qianghua
After a few hours
Liu Anwei: Brother Qiang, what were you talking with my mom about?
Xu Qianghua: Nothing, your mother wanted you to have a new sibling, so she asked for my help
Liu Anwei: What?
Read as Xu Qianghua and his now new try again with a different path from his past life which might lead them to ruin or become the strongest family out there.
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No NTR
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PS: This is my first novel so I will have a lot of mistakes, so if you find any please feel free to comment and I will fix it as soon as possible.
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Hey everyone author here, this is the first time I wrote a novel and I love doing it. So if you are a new reader Welcome to this novel where you will be introduced to a Main Character with a laid-back personality but with a goal as he is reborn back to a month before the merge with a mobile game. This novel has a harem and a huge one at that with the female leads being just as overpowered as our MC. So please enjoy this novel and I am looking forward to your feedback and comments on this novel Thank you Anime_timez24
Read until chapter 55, nothing really happens. Auther just keeps on rambling about the future and events that play no significance to the current events. MC is your typical useless luck struck plot armor MC. Outside of making money through the stock market, which he pawned of to one of the female characters, he really doesn’t do anything important. The flow of the story is on the slow side and the events are so random that it ruins the reading experience. For the Auther. Don’t explain so much useless information. Show your story don’t tell. Show the MC having a meeting and telling each individual their goal and when they need to accomplish said goal by. In other words, you’re trying to make your MC this great leader without them showing any leadership skills. Don’t tell us why a character is going to be important or how they’re related to the MC, show us through their interactions with the MC. Example, when you had the two neighbors scene talking to his parents, don’t explain who they are. Instead just leave them until they show up in the main plot of the story. Then inform the readers using the interaction between the MC and the other characters. That’s all I’ve got for you. In summary it’s not a bad story, the author just needs to learn how to write better. An editor would help but I’m aware of how expensive that can get.
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Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)
i have really enjoyed the story so far. i really can't wait until the world finally merges. Because I'm excited for some action to happen.
I haven’t even read this yet, but let me just say, I find it so crazy that people can’t even stand a kiss between two harem members, like do you guys not find that attractive? You say liking yuri in a harem is being a cuck? I wonder which of us is the bigger cuck then…..
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A truly cultured text with nice characters and world building. No ntr Certified. Definitely a fantastic read from a new author. Thanks for this great text author
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Guys if you are a fan of harem and good seggs ...then read this one ... Writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Sex quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Explanation ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Characters.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
To be very honest the story in getting quite bland because till now it revolves around kingdom building and management of resources and their no major issues for the MC and no good fights but I hope the world building will be worth the time and I story will pickup the pace.
I just love the way the author developed the plot . i really like how u explained everything in details regarding the background settings like how the game mixed with reality and soo on. even though the story might feel like it was just all positive with no challenges for MC but come on dudes we have enough where all those MCs are fighting hard and can't protect their loved ones . I am not criticizing, those plots are very good and i enjoy them too but i find this one more appealing. and finally the author keep up the good work, I hope u get more popular and write more interesting novels like this u have our support my personal request is that u don't drop this novel , i want to see the ending 😁. and one last thing bro i really appreciate the way u unified all the content under one without any nation on top . i really hate when some authors praise there own nation but criticise other nations . i respect there patriotism towards there mother country but don't go showing hostility towards others nations . this may lead to unnecessary disputes .
This novel is an absolute delight. The storytelling is smooth, and the way everything unfolds is just captivating. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Truly a remarkable read.
I really enjoy this novel and how everything is explained. The story flow is also perfect. Waiting to see more of this novel. Overall, it is an amazing novel.
I, Melon Dao approve of this scripture and decided to add it to my forbidden library of culture. This venerable is very pleased as you are doing an honorable job of teaching and spreading culture and hope you continue this sacred quest. This scripture belongs to the genre of game to reality and Mc will develop an invincible family with different kinds of waifus (especially, Mother-in-law) Last but the least, This Scripture Has no NTR.