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Alright, writing this review to clear some of the doubts some readers have. This review should help you decide whether to pick this book or not. First, and the most important thing, The relationship between Vaan and his mother will be a completely normal mother-son relationship. I don't even know why I even need to make this clear, I never hinted at any kind of romantic interest between the two, pls. Second, this book will not have a harem. Third, MC's character might be a bit because of his history. And uhh... I don't have anything else to say... Ah right, This book is amazing. I can say it because I have read it till the last chapter. I even know the future chapters so I can tell you that this book will get even better. So you guys should read it.
harem novels take less brain cells and time, that's why the other novel is getting updated
Hlo I like the story very much 😄😄😄😄. it's funny, good speed, amazing characters , wonderful world berding.. I love if you continue story
Author isn't making clear when he is gonna start updating again or if he has dropped this novel.
I honestly wish the author would pay more attention to this novel , story was going so great
the author has never once disappointed me, all of his books are awesome I started with SHGS then this blew my mind... only downside is no new chapters are being uploaded currently and this makes me really mad. I do want to see Vaan getting into trouble and giving trouble to his enemies is his specialty ... please dear esteemed author, upload new chapters hehe
think i need to give my first review, and a negative one at that. Author dropped this novel without a word (on webnovel). an hes still around since he's updating his other novel. low score is to draw attention since most people like to give 5s on this platform
you paused primordial vampire system stating that you will restart after completion of Supreme Harem God System ,and currently after i have read your last update he will release from lust primordial illusion and then may or may not form law but the end of story is no far near while for this one earlier it was good now you post updates after weeks you post 2,3 days regularly and then you go inside core with Aeliana and stop Posting updates , that's not good
please update the chapter more frequently I know that you have your other book but atleast we can expect 4 chapters a week ryt??
so for what ever reason the author has decided to stop updating this novel out of blue. they are updating their other novel, so was an interesting choice to 'drop' this without a word. the score reflects the fact the author is no longer updating, so theres no point in reading this. otherwise this would have been another highly scored review .
200 chapters in, no complaints whatsoever. Audio friendly, minimum signs, no fillers, plot related face slapping, no info dumps, no cliffhanger, entertaining read, like literally 0 complaints! This has been a pleasure reading this!
The story is quite enjoyable; the MC isn’t a person to get pushed into a trap, which is a relief. That being said, the mc is also complete and utter trash and doesn’t deserve even 0.001% of his mother or Elara. It’s to the point that if his list of crimes included people trafficking instead of only arms trafficking, I probably wouldn’t even be interested in reading to see how he changes in his new life, because imo, he doesn’t deserve the opportunity. Cheers and let’s see where this journey goes!
This Story is amazing, the world building is fantastic everything is ok, but the rate at which new chapters are being released is way too slow, is so slow that one might just get tired of waiting for a new chapter and for get about the story so please can release more chapters and if its possible start with a bulk release then continue from releasing little by little like 2 episodes a day just like other stories, to me i believe that if not for the outrageously slow speed this story is being released it should have been in its 500+ chapters by now
This is like a Vin Diesel movie plot. This felt like watching fast and furious 1-2-3-4. Ngl I enjoyed it but its a worn our way of story telling, it felt like 2002
this book is much better than the other works of the author , has a good story and character development but lacks update stability.....
The premise is interesting, the execution has some issues. The updates are sporadic, don’t buy priv., it’s a waste of money. The early chapters are fun, it was interesting seeing the MCs interacting with his mother. The FMC yandere tendencies are fresh for the personality. What is considered the young generation in the series makes little sense, being a student between the ages of 30-50 makes little sense. This is a transmog/reincarnation isekai and the mc doesn’t seem to exhibit much of his previous experience, at least not on a consistent basis. It gets worse in the academy arc.
Its okay I did not really like it but other people will but my rating will be a 2 star one [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the start of the story is masterpiece. but it's gets boring after 200smthing chapters
The story is pretty good. The pace of the romance is good. However the path the MC takes is really stupid. He is the only mage who can move while doing spells so he decides to learn how to use a sword from his father. Unfortunately you can’t use aura and mana so this is a stupid decision. His current fighting path gives him no advantage against swordsman, in fact it puts him at a disadvantage because he is fighting them head on, and it gives very little advantage against mages. Him being the most talented mage ever doesn’t matter because he won’t ever be able to defeat a swordsman head on. Essentially he is just the strongest loser mage I a world full of people trying to kill off all the mage’s. He has an advantage over people like him but otherwise he is weak. The author constantly brings up how he can’t use aura and mana. I don’t understand why he finds it important to point it out to the readers so often that the character he wrote made a bad decision. All in all it started of good and now it’s pretty infuriating to read because the mc now has to fight enemies in roundabout bs ways because he is to weak to beat people at the same level as him head on.
have read many webnovel regarding magic, and cultivation. but this one story background is really great not just focus on level up but romance. pls don't add separation or some circumstances plot by which vaan and elara have to separate like all other novel ,almost all have like sameplot please author take plot as it's going regarding their relationship, novel world is build well and lot to explore . have read SHGS and I like work looking forward to story.
Loving the novel so far..🤩🤩 Just cant wait for the new chapters to release [img=update][img=update]
writing quality is quite good. Story is also going on at a steady rate . There is no harem and thats's good. The romance is upto the level I was looking for so I m impressed as there are hardly such romance fantasy novels out there. it's a gem . Great work author. Keep it up👍🏼
it is good. charecter development of mc and fmc. wholesome family moments and romance.
I like this kind of novels and this one is one of the best novels out there. Just i hope the author did not drop it because it has been almost one month without new updates on new chapters and I want to know how the story develops further.
this is the best novel I read and it is really interesting so goooooood
Writing quality - Like always, the content is well delivered and the way the power system and spells is developed seems very interesting and well thought out from what we know so far. Looking forward to seeing more of it. Story Development - World building has started off strong, has the foundations to be a great story. Quite interested in seeing how the MCs relationships are going to develop. Character Design - Definitely one of your best written MCs and side characters, every interaction has been fleshed out throughly, and the characters aren’t cardboard placements. The MCs personality is great, not cheesy or overly edgy. Hope to see more interactions! All in all, story has great potential and i cannot wait to see more of it!
Alright, writing this review to clear some of the doubts some readers have. This review should help you decide whether to pick this book or not. First, and the most important thing, The relationship between Vaan and his mother will be a completely normal mother-son relationship. I don't even know why I even need to make this clear, I never hinted at any kind of romantic interest between the two, pls. Second, this book will not have a harem. Third, MC's character might be a bit because of his history. And uhh... I don't have anything else to say... Ah right, This book is amazing. I can say it because I have read it till the last chapter. I even know the future chapters so I can tell you that this book will get even better. So you guys should read it.
harem novels take less brain cells and time, that's why the other novel is getting updated
Hlo I like the story very much 😄😄😄😄. it's funny, good speed, amazing characters , wonderful world berding.. I love if you continue story
Author isn't making clear when he is gonna start updating again or if he has dropped this novel.
I honestly wish the author would pay more attention to this novel , story was going so great
the author has never once disappointed me, all of his books are awesome I started with SHGS then this blew my mind... only downside is no new chapters are being uploaded currently and this makes me really mad. I do want to see Vaan getting into trouble and giving trouble to his enemies is his specialty ... please dear esteemed author, upload new chapters hehe
think i need to give my first review, and a negative one at that. Author dropped this novel without a word (on webnovel). an hes still around since he's updating his other novel. low score is to draw attention since most people like to give 5s on this platform
you paused primordial vampire system stating that you will restart after completion of Supreme Harem God System ,and currently after i have read your last update he will release from lust primordial illusion and then may or may not form law but the end of story is no far near while for this one earlier it was good now you post updates after weeks you post 2,3 days regularly and then you go inside core with Aeliana and stop Posting updates , that's not good
please update the chapter more frequently I know that you have your other book but atleast we can expect 4 chapters a week ryt??
so for what ever reason the author has decided to stop updating this novel out of blue. they are updating their other novel, so was an interesting choice to 'drop' this without a word. the score reflects the fact the author is no longer updating, so theres no point in reading this. otherwise this would have been another highly scored review .
200 chapters in, no complaints whatsoever. Audio friendly, minimum signs, no fillers, plot related face slapping, no info dumps, no cliffhanger, entertaining read, like literally 0 complaints! This has been a pleasure reading this!
The story is quite enjoyable; the MC isn’t a person to get pushed into a trap, which is a relief. That being said, the mc is also complete and utter trash and doesn’t deserve even 0.001% of his mother or Elara. It’s to the point that if his list of crimes included people trafficking instead of only arms trafficking, I probably wouldn’t even be interested in reading to see how he changes in his new life, because imo, he doesn’t deserve the opportunity. Cheers and let’s see where this journey goes!
This Story is amazing, the world building is fantastic everything is ok, but the rate at which new chapters are being released is way too slow, is so slow that one might just get tired of waiting for a new chapter and for get about the story so please can release more chapters and if its possible start with a bulk release then continue from releasing little by little like 2 episodes a day just like other stories, to me i believe that if not for the outrageously slow speed this story is being released it should have been in its 500+ chapters by now
This is like a Vin Diesel movie plot. This felt like watching fast and furious 1-2-3-4. Ngl I enjoyed it but its a worn our way of story telling, it felt like 2002
this book is much better than the other works of the author , has a good story and character development but lacks update stability.....
The premise is interesting, the execution has some issues. The updates are sporadic, don’t buy priv., it’s a waste of money. The early chapters are fun, it was interesting seeing the MCs interacting with his mother. The FMC yandere tendencies are fresh for the personality. What is considered the young generation in the series makes little sense, being a student between the ages of 30-50 makes little sense. This is a transmog/reincarnation isekai and the mc doesn’t seem to exhibit much of his previous experience, at least not on a consistent basis. It gets worse in the academy arc.
Its okay I did not really like it but other people will but my rating will be a 2 star one [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the start of the story is masterpiece. but it's gets boring after 200smthing chapters
The story is pretty good. The pace of the romance is good. However the path the MC takes is really stupid. He is the only mage who can move while doing spells so he decides to learn how to use a sword from his father. Unfortunately you can’t use aura and mana so this is a stupid decision. His current fighting path gives him no advantage against swordsman, in fact it puts him at a disadvantage because he is fighting them head on, and it gives very little advantage against mages. Him being the most talented mage ever doesn’t matter because he won’t ever be able to defeat a swordsman head on. Essentially he is just the strongest loser mage I a world full of people trying to kill off all the mage’s. He has an advantage over people like him but otherwise he is weak. The author constantly brings up how he can’t use aura and mana. I don’t understand why he finds it important to point it out to the readers so often that the character he wrote made a bad decision. All in all it started of good and now it’s pretty infuriating to read because the mc now has to fight enemies in roundabout bs ways because he is to weak to beat people at the same level as him head on.
have read many webnovel regarding magic, and cultivation. but this one story background is really great not just focus on level up but romance. pls don't add separation or some circumstances plot by which vaan and elara have to separate like all other novel ,almost all have like sameplot please author take plot as it's going regarding their relationship, novel world is build well and lot to explore . have read SHGS and I like work looking forward to story.
Loving the novel so far..🤩🤩 Just cant wait for the new chapters to release [img=update][img=update]
writing quality is quite good. Story is also going on at a steady rate . There is no harem and thats's good. The romance is upto the level I was looking for so I m impressed as there are hardly such romance fantasy novels out there. it's a gem . Great work author. Keep it up👍🏼
it is good. charecter development of mc and fmc. wholesome family moments and romance.
I like this kind of novels and this one is one of the best novels out there. Just i hope the author did not drop it because it has been almost one month without new updates on new chapters and I want to know how the story develops further.
this is the best novel I read and it is really interesting so goooooood
Writing quality - Like always, the content is well delivered and the way the power system and spells is developed seems very interesting and well thought out from what we know so far. Looking forward to seeing more of it. Story Development - World building has started off strong, has the foundations to be a great story. Quite interested in seeing how the MCs relationships are going to develop. Character Design - Definitely one of your best written MCs and side characters, every interaction has been fleshed out throughly, and the characters aren’t cardboard placements. The MCs personality is great, not cheesy or overly edgy. Hope to see more interactions! All in all, story has great potential and i cannot wait to see more of it!