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A 16 year old boy named Nakada Ichirou, died in a plane crash, because he was one of only few who deserve a second chance, he gets reborn in the world of MHA with a few wishes.
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This is my first time writing a fanfic, I plan to stay consistent and release one chapter a week
It won't be harem, I'll focus on only one love interest, I'll make it so the MC doesn't get super OP right away.
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What's wrong with everyone, because they love the idea of being killed by a god so much? Second, why do you want a god in person to grant your wishes? Do they have any need to feel chosen? And finally, they realize the tremendous narrative hole that is the idea of God and desires.
I really enjoyed it but honestly i feel like the training arc was really dragged out, you could have shortened it and spent some time in the earlier chapters setting the story up for a more developed plot rather than just it being training I personally like it when the MC grows slowly but i also hate it when too much useless detail is put into it we have time skips for that I am also getting tired of the harem genre where you split the time and character development meant for one girl into multiple giving them less meaning in their character. That's pretty much it for my review hope the uploads are more consistent and faster
It's okay, there are definitely better fanfics while there are definitely worse ones as well. It feels more like a list of things that the characters do, the characters themselves are similar to cardboard cutouts with few to no defining things that make me care about them. The story is fairly generic being a reincarnation, god gives me 3 wishes but it really expands to 10 wishes, there is the common I wanna learn martial arts trope. All in all, it is completely and utterly average.
Incredible start.Please make the Ogre by Yujiro Hanma. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Honestly, I felt the author nerfed his MC too much. Also, who receive three wishes and ask for such stupid things? It would have been better if God gave him three random powers instead.... Since for me the first five chapters weren't logical I decided to stop reading.
Good story writing, but kind of stupid MC. Unlike most novel where side character got their IQ lower, in this one, the MC IQ got lower instead to get the side character some shine. The reincarnated trope kind of not work correctly, since the MC IQ reverse back into a kid, and also act like a kid. It would have been better if the MC start off as a kid instead, and just have some idea that he in an anime work, or die while he still a kid or in sick bed and never experience childhood. Since that way, it feel okay to be a naive. Another kind of hateful point is similar to other fanfic where the MC train very hard, with his own training arc and stuff, but got BALANCE when fighting real battle. In this fanfic, it not too bad, but we can still feel the nerve a bit. Another point is, the story is too bland, since it mostly the MC slice of life moment, and it poorly made, since it all build up to a fighting fanfic. Another point is the sign of something bad happening, it done poorly, those sign should be miss by the MC, but author made the MC aware of it and do nothing about his suspicions . It very frustrating when novel done that, it only make reader complain. It make the MC look dumb/careless. It made the reader feel that the mc should have done better. Also, I got a feeling that in this fanfic, the MC is not gonna have control over his own destiny, he will always be blackmail or have something holding him back wasting his potential etc type of cliche. The type of cliche where we are given a very promising start, but MC will always face setback that always take something from him for character development. That why mc shouldn't be a reincarnation in the first place, because reincarnation itself is the biggest setback, and develop the character already. That why reincarnation trope always push out perfect MC which rarely change character, and never naive, at most, they don't have enough information to do much, or else, they will try their best in most case.
i absolutely love this book ten out of ten but the reason I am dropping is because of the love interest I have literally not read a single ff where the love interest isn't momo i am f####ing sick of it sorry not sorry
this isn't even a fan fiction anymore dude just took characters from other series and inserted them into mha. it literally took 25 chapters just to begin the story and then right after that we get this hidden serial killer who apparently has some game dimension based powers????? yeah I'm just done it was going pretty well but the further it went the further the quality dropped
I started months ago and came back after more chapters were written. The quality of weighting isn’t that good, lots of obvious errors but it dosnt really matter. Ive completly quit in the middle of the author ark. This ark reveals two things. One pro, one con. The pro is a pretty cool original perspective on the world and building it into something cool. I wouldn’t know how well it has been incorporated into the story, due to leaving early. But it has good potential, though I do NOT trust that the author will take advantage of it. The CON slash reason I’m quitting this story. Is the protagonist submitting to somebody else’s will with out question basically becoming a slave. Now the Author villain concept in of itself isn’t bad. It’s just the submission of the protagonist. Even though the protagonist could very well step up for himself. And if it eludes you, I can and will explain… Firstly the protagonist just trusts the villains word and dosnt question anything. When he can very well use the leverage the villian has over him to leverage the villian back. Because the villian wants something, and by holding something precious of the protagonist, the protagonist also wants something. Their basically on equal terms. So the protagonist can very well negotiate with the villain to garentee his intrest, in exchange for the intrest the villian is intrested in.
honestly i don't want to leave a review because but here i go writing - readable 5 ⭐ story - slow pace = boring and in usj incident the mc is kinda weak character - idk what to write here 4 ⭐ update - 40+ chap so 4 ⭐ world - the author take some anime characters for other anime so it feel like not mha 4 ⭐
Great F.F with an unique MC who have the power and the knowledge and balance , i really love this and wish the author will release more and more[img=update]
I like it so far, good power but not op right off the bat, and mc has a normal life unlike other fics that make mc some kind of god at 10
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I do find it kinda annoying when authors say "the MC will get OP slowly" It really makes me not want to read the book when the author has to specifically say that. Butttttt you can take that with a grain of salt Butter if you agree with that maybe JUST maybe you could like this comment, It really makes my day when I get on web novel and see new notifications either a like or reply because that shows someone took their time to respond to me.