Webnovel Author: CouchPotatoDandy

4min

Posted

I've lost interest in the first five chapters. The synopsis didn't explain much to anything, so I went in blind to the story. The Kramer was good but the plot itself failed to capture me to give me motivation to continue reading.

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Contractor

Anime & Comics · WutDelusional

CouchPotatoDandy

15min

Commented

Mmm how can then she say he honestly trained everyday so hard till exhaustion and still attending school? School easily burns out half a day attending...

ch 0 2 Remake Birth of the Average

Jujutsu Kaisen: The Contractor

Anime & Comics · WutDelusional

CouchPotatoDandy

27min

Posted

The story was with no grammar mistakes that I could find, which is honestly something I consider a must when reading a story, so this is good. At chapter 11 I started to see how the MC acts childish for some reason and not in line with his personality. He started making rash decisions and acting immaturely, totally not fitting for a reincarnated mature person... It felt like from chapter 11 the quality of the story dropped with the MC doing illogical things. Luckily it all stop at chapter 25+ where him got older and so acted more mature. (But that still doesn't fix the fact he acted immaturely and not like his mental age while his physical body was younger) Anyway moving on, the MC power level. It feels like the author didn't know exactly what to do with the MC in his early years and accidentally nerfed him so he won't be too strong, and then made him super powerful later on (which is good). Now moving on to the plot. With the MC future knowledge one would expect him to plan well and do certain actions to prevent future events you didn't want to happen, but he almost never managed to stay ahead and is always taken by surprise. Once or twice is still okay, but all the time?? It feels like a lack of creativity on the author part to make new story arcs, making him fall back on existing ones. Hance forced to make sure those anime arcs still happen to the MC. Even with all that, I still found myself enjoying this story as I haven't found anywhere a good jujutsu kaizen fanfic as this one. Overall I will give this fanfic a solid 4.6 star review.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

CouchPotatoDandy

1h

Commented

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

ch 91 The God of Speed

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

CouchPotatoDandy

1h

Commented

Another chapter on boring side characters fighting... Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

ch 90 Takada-chan

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

CouchPotatoDandy

1h

Commented

Thanks for the chapter, loved it! Hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

ch 89 Ryomen Sukuna

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

CouchPotatoDandy

2h

Commented

I've already written it in previous chapters but I would still say it again. I still think it shouldn't have been so easy for Naoya to get a Domain Expansion even if he trained extremely hard for 3 years. There is a reason why 99% of jujutsu casters doesn't have one all their life, it's because it is too hard to get!

ch 56 Long Time no See

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4

CouchPotatoDandy

2h

Commented

Even though I agree he shouldn't kill her, but letting her off with just a punch to the face is way too likely in my opinion. Torturing her and taking an arm, a leg and an eye would be all right.

ch 70 I'm Out