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A guy who was sent to one piece with special powers.
i have been getting a lot of bad reviews about how the mc is nerfed but just read up to 20 chapters story gets way better.
I do not own one piece and any of the characters except our mc
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Mc gets flying thunder God and lighting logia fruit as powers. And what does author do, directly nerf him. Like ever heard of flying thunder God jutsu with a distance limit of 5 m and only usable once an hour. A logia user spends half an hour dodging a tiger without haki. I mean come on logia user have all attacks pass through them without haki.
MC is neutered as ****..he has flying raijin and lightening DF but author neuters him so much, plus MC is bland, there not personality to him......................... Author, u shouldnt neuter him, I suggest rewrite cause as this is, its bad,
Author nerfed the **** out of MC, he is supposed to be lightning man with flying thunder God, and still can't travel 1/100 the speed of lightning, even more that author doesn't consider Devil fruit's abilities, he trained for like a year and still only knows how to throw lightning bolts thatt only burns trees, and there was enel, who could literally vaporise island using it without training. Flying thunder God was neutered so much that it is actually better to not use it in battle as it is '''stamina consuming'''. And he doesn't even receives a observation boost of lightning DF like Enel, I feel that enel might be a better DF user than MC.
trash novel and the author seems he doesn't know anything about physics and one-piece retard mc and in the middle, it will turn into harem to cover his poor writing and creativity as usual
This is the most boring **** I ever read it is basically wish fulfillment with my killing everyone except Luffy family and crew. Also the writing quality is beyond **** it even surprised me.
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I hope the author study more about the powers of the mc. I'm still at early chapter but the development is very very poor. It makes my IQ so low. I hope it will improve soon. you nerfing him TOO MUCH doesn't make sense at all. I'm okay with the stamina part but the observation haki, ew. Enel literally covered the whole sky island with his haki after he ate the devil fruit. And I believe he didn't even train that much in it at all. The ftg part, I don't know how did you got the idea to add that. If you didn't know the meaning of putting a mark at a specific target, then I just wish you didn't include the ftg at all. That's all. I hope the story gets better as the chapters goes on. And please no more nerfing as it is really a major turn off to majority of the reader. If you are nerfing him, I hope you give us an acceptable reason/s. Have a nice day!
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Well, I am the author of this Fanfic so I will give it five stars. Please do read my fanfic this is my first time writing so please be lenient on me.
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common one piece power( Rumble-Rumble fruit again) and common naruto power (flying thunder god).Op lame combination and yet mc is afraid of a typical lame tiger.
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i am great enough to kik his ass and i dont like this anime at all.but this novel is way too great than real anime.yeah **** u. and sital is great character in that novel but i think sital should be main character.He is best among all other character.
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Honestly word of advice before reading this story do not listen to the reviews bringing it down cause before i started reading this story i read the first few reviews and almost didnt start reading and by god that would of been a big mistake cause honestly it is a gem of a one piece fanfiction.
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ive only read it till chapter 3 but all i can say is your choice for the power is pointless cause if you got the logia lightning fruit ur basicly so fast that its like teleport already and i understand why you make him weak in the beginning so you have room for the training development but it would have been better if you didnt make him have the lightning power first cause it kinda ****ed up the story you should have train his body first then when his ready let him take the devil fruit, like how sabo got fire logia he became immune to normal attack right away but here its like the devil fruit thats supposed to be at lvl 50 from the start became level 1 which doesnt make sense
Es genial la historia pero espero que mejore más con el tiempo,....,................ ... ............................................................................................................................
The MC get Nerfed then buffs then Nerfed again, the inconsistent power that MC have is kinda SHitTy. Atless you got one consistent about the MC that's his power and personality "Bland ".