what 50 years it should be 5 years
While walking toward the academy, Sasuke spotted Ino and Sakura ahead. The two seemed to be engaged in a friendly argument, something he had grown accustomed to seeing over the years. It was amusing to him to remember how their dynamics had changed since they were younger. Fifty years ago, he barely understood the true potential of each of them, but now everything had changed. The determination that Ino and Sakura showed in becoming stronger clearly reflected Sasuke's influence on them.
Anime & Comics · 0novice_writer
didn't he found it already in the previous house?
Satisfied with the discovery, he continued his search. Night was approaching, but Sasuke knew he needed to keep going before it got completely dark. He entered the last house of the day and, after a careful search, found one more scroll. This one was different from the others. The title stamped on top indicated it was a sword technique, something that immediately caught his attention: [Kumo Ryuu - Kaengiri] (Cloud Style: Flaming Slash).
Anime & Comics · 0novice_writer
72? shouldn't it be 42 or 52?
Konohagakure, Year 72
Anime & Comics · 0novice_writer
please release more chapters ... i am eagerly waiting for the chapters.
is the novel here as in webnovel? if yes the what's the name ?
i am writing this comment after reading chapter 16 ..... its not too bad . but there are many problems in this story . like mc's powers are too vague with too many nerfs... like left hands copy ability , i understand that it can only copy 5 ability one for each fingers but what happens to those previously copied abilities ? do they remains or get deleted afterall normal jutsus and kekke genkais are different ... normally anyone can learn jutsu but kekke genkai depends on bloodline, so what happens to them ? also why does he copies 2 uchiha bloodline (i mean he can delete the one tomoe sharingan after he copied fugakus sharingan ) .... when he copies sharingan does he copy the whole bloodline or only specific ability (i mean if he copies mangekeyo then does he gets the sharingan also or just the mangekeyo ) and explanation or description of the right hand ghost ability is also vague like ... what does it do ? is it yin related ? is it a type of energy ? is it a !ew type of energy that doesn't exist in this world or just another form of yin release similar to kato dan. theres also many translation mistakes like calling kurenai asuma's daughter or changing uchiha clans leader's name in different chapters.
whole sentence is wrong .... her surname is yuhi. also she is asuma's potential lover not his daughter
While Asuma Sarutobi's daughter, Kurenai, was not technically his girlfriend, her visit at this time would certainly be interpreted as something more ambiguous by others.
Anime & Comics · CuteSelfieCat
Wasn't the clan was bikuri uchiha how come its different now.....if its a mistake then please correct it.
A moment later, Fugaku spoke again. "The current clan leader, Fuyou-sama, is getting old. If nothing changes, the clan will elect a new leader either this year or next."
Anime & Comics · CuteSelfieCat
shouldn't be uchiha setsuna be the leader ?(i actually don't know but in most fanfic or small storys i have read this name is mentioned as the leader and fugakus father)
Late that night, the current Uchiha clan leader, Uchiha Bikuri, had visited along with Fugaku. Due to the policies of the Second Hokage, the Uchiha clan had long been distanced from the core of Konoha's leadership, so Hiruzen didn't know Bikuri well. After some formalities, Bikuri had gotten to the point: "Third Hokage, Uchiha Tenshin is a genius of our clan. We would like Fugaku to be his Jonin instructor."
Anime & Comics · CuteSelfieCat
Its a good fan-fic but can you release more chapters faster?
Waking up as Sasuke Uchiha
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