Marvel: Summoning Xandar.

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Poke_verse

The prologue for this is that a guy has a power which can manipulate realty like Minecraft creative mode. His personality is written well, the plot and worldbuilding are alright and the grammar is neat.

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Forseti_0

please read " Minecraft in essos" before this, this book is a linear story from that one. só it startup in GOT with minecraft powers and ended up in marvel.

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Great_maid_Oni

Honestly this is extremely confusing, I saw some other comments that you said you were posting this because there is already a lot of information on Patreon regarding the history of Minecraft, although still incomplete, but for those of us who have limited access it makes no sense at all.. Looking from a logical point of view, if this is based on another story of yours, we would need to start at least from a point where we would understand what is happening, prior knowledge, the way we are getting here we don't even know half of the entire state of everything…. the story basically took a lot of disconnected information, threw it in our faces and said “I don’t care if you understand, this happens”. It's impossible to read this and hope to understand something without the author finishing his other story, and considering his frequency of posts and some spoilers we had here, maybe he'll finish it next year, until then I wouldn't risk reading this here. Sorry, I like your work and I don't want to discourage you, but it was a bad idea to post this without finishing the other story

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greatcheesemaster

I like it but I think u should have done this after u completed ur previous book nevertheless it is an amazing book everyone should totally try this book but in my personal opinion the dialogue is a bit stiff and u totally ruined the surprise of who MC's love interest was gonna be for ur pervious book and I leave with wishing u luck on being able to keep stable update schedule for both books

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Salazarson

If you don't read the book "ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos." you will be confused about many characters and Mc's powers, I hope the author makes retroactive retouches and rearrangements. The kingdom of Xandar is a kingdom founded in Essos, only the name is similar, in the 5th year of the Kingdom, the Kingdom is teleported to the Marvel world and the Pacific Ocean by an unknown effect. I won't give spoilers but I will mention the parts I liked, the people of Xandar are warriors and easily adaptable people. They founded the kingdom in 2 years and built the most magnificent structures of the period and the state system was based on merit and nobility. In the remaining years, he expanded his influence and knowledge with conquest and trade. Mc has 3 extremely great powers due to Minecraft by far: 1. unlimited inventory, can create continents from diamonds or food. 2. 'enchantment of loyalty' explained this very briefly but concisely, it affects the will and personality of the person under the effect of this spell, in his experiment on wolves he wanted the wolf to jump into the lava and the wolf jumped into the lava without hesitation. Of course he saved and healed the animal but the important thing is its effect. Loyalty does not come with love or respect, only a hiryachi is formed between the commander and the soldier, but what the MC really focuses on is the welfare and safety of his people, and for this reason he is loved by his people. 3. Spawn Eggs: can summon villagers, animals, monsters from any profession with eggs. Moreover, thanks to the ease of the menu, it can be summoned in plural rather than singular, (x10, x50, x100, x1000 etc.) This is actually even more broken than the Shadow Clone technique in Naruto, think of it like this: you want to build a new city, you can instantly spawn a thousand construction villagers, materials, food and tools. Now you can give the orders and go, your talented people will do their job.

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Infinite_Seraph

the story and plot is interesting and well put it's okay in it's entirety but some points of criticism remain like why the hell is the ancient one not the first person they came in contact with. I know you're trying to further the story line but please don't overcrowd the POV's . Please stop with the wall of text before every chapter or try to shorten it it interferes with the flow of the book and the immersion for people like me who use the listening function of webnovel to listen to your book during work. Thank you for your book.