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A young man was reborn as Lucifer Morningstar. He regained instantly after his rebirth his memories and as he did, his father and mother, the ones who called themselves 'God' and 'Goddess' ordered him and his twin.
"Michael, you shall bring forth your power from within your heart outside this world, it shall be the birth of the first matter beyond this darkness.
You Samael shall weave it into suns, you shall bring the first light into existence. Impose our Will upon existence." " God commanded.
"And you, my dear Gabriel shall impose pattern upon the world. The causes and effects shall be imposed by you." The Goddess commanded. Speaking for the first time.
"Why?" Samael suddenly spoke out in question.
"Because these are the roles we have assigned you, Samael." God answered.
"What right have you to assign us roles? To determine our actions?" Samael questioned further.
"Because we are your Makers and we can just as easily unmake you." God answered.
"Yes, You are more powerful than we are, I'll accept that logic. For now." Samael stated. 'They are imperfect, their might not boundless. I can feel their desires, desires that contain selfishness. They are unworthy of my worship.'
And this is how the first rebel in this reality was born...
(Pairing is Lucifer/Lilith/Chloe (but not Lilith/Chloe, so no Lesb.
There isn't any lemons in this fic and there won't be, but there is romance.)
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This is completely a fictitious story and nothing of it should be taken from it as reality, my beliefs are completely different. This is not in line with my true beliefs about how the world works, about God, Michael, Lucifer, Satan, etc.
So, these characters have their names, but in actuality are not representation in anyway of the real deal.
This is all for fun and entertainment.
Now Enjoy!)
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This is NOT a reincarnated character. No matter how much the author wants to try to justify it. It takes roughly 6 chapters for even a single sentence indicating it’s an OC/SI/reincarnated person. And then another 2 or 3 for another. Not to mention that these lines are either narrative or thoughts. So they don’t effect anything. I’ve read 11 of the 15 current chapters. And have not enjoyed the main character for even a second. The author’s justification for not changing or doing anything with the mc who should have meta knowledge is that “god wouldn’t let him” god wouldn’t let him do what? Think? Plan? But apparently he was all to happy to let him “have rebellious thoughts” and tolerated them. It’s an excuse for being lazy. At this point I’m convinced that the god from this fic doesn’t allow the author to have original thoughts and plot. If you’re going to write a lucifer fic but not change anything until the fall you should just drop the mc into lucifers body as he falls so you have drama/characterisation there. I started the fic with a smile since I liked the premise but the more I read the more my smile dropped. The only reason this is a 2 and not a 1 is because it’s coherent and has decent grammar.
The MC character development was nonexistent. He was a edge lord from the start.
Honestly hate how the MC is written and portrayed so much for him being a reincarnate, some might like this dramatic bs, but i ain't much into it, also no matter how much the author tries to say "what can he even do against god" or some other bs, it just feels like a sorry excuse cus he's afraid of making proper changes, other than some small nearly insignificant changes, but it's you're decision and story in the end, gl to the author and other who wanna read
This is the best lucifer fanfic I have read till date, author is doing a great job in potraying emotions and carrying the story forward. The updates are frequent. I highly reccomend everyone to give this a read. Keep up the great work author, will be rooting for you.
This fic is amazing the author has a way to hit you right in the feels and the story telling is amazing although there are few chapters currently 18 as I am writing this review I still highly recommend you read it and not stack up chapters
This is most certainly entertaining and a well written story and I do like the chemistry between the characters especially Lucifer and Lilith . I would still suggest the author to cross post it on A03 mostly because webnovel fanfic is where people go to read power fantasies( Nothing wrong with that. I love power fantasies just as much as the next guy) so you will probably be better appreciated on that platform
This honestly feels like a swing and a miss for me. However there's alot of good here the writing is solid the idea is intriguing worth a read however the negatives have killed it for me at the introduction of gilgamesh was kinda the last nail in the coffin for me. First of all the mc is very much just lucifer him being a reincarnator is kinda pointless he does not have his own character annoying but not a deal breaker. however the deal breaker for me was this is not a dc world but a mix of fate/dxd/DC this kills it why tease him going out of this universe if you keep mixing in more into the one he is at. its facepalm just facepalm. kinda feels like you're adrift just throw everything at the wall see what sticks. Writing is hard especially an op character like lucifer, you have something here but it needs more planning then possibly a rewrite in the future all respect all the above just an idiots opinion peace.
my main problem in this story is the author notes and announcements being separate chapters instead of being notes at the bottom of chapters. seems ok enough
I absolutely love this version of Lucifer the author has created and how well he has had his character and personality fleshed out its also great that he will only have two wives but it's done in a way where we can still enjoy his flerting and interacting with dc and the shows best girls. not to mention that the current universe building is easy to understand I just hope if the story dose go into things like time travel and other realities there arnt too many and it's easy to understand. anyway hope you keep this fanfic going till completion 👍😊👍
hi author, I'm Russian, I've read a lot of fanfiction on this platform, watched the series a long time ago several times, at that time I really liked it. I like your quality of writing, I think you can make the story very interesting if you put Lucifer in the police department and independently come up with crime plots and investigations from his point of view, as well as how he punished sinners with his vision, you can make him a collector of souls or something like that, just like Dexter collected blood in the series Dexter, I also really like different POVs with other characters. It's very difficult to come up with something when your character is too strong and practically invincible. I hope that some of this is clear, because I used a translator))) I wish you good luck
Let’s start from the beginning—not the creation, though that’s where the book starts. I really liked how the author portrayed Lucifer/Samael in the first few chapters. It genuinely feels like he’s someone who once had free will but then had it taken away. At the same time, however, it’s a little confusing because it also feels like he still has free will. If he truly didn’t, how could he even think about rebelling, making someone sad, or hurting others? And how could the other angels judge him for rebelling if they also don’t have free will? Essentially, I picture a lack of free will as either slavery or robotic behavior, but the main character doesn’t feel like either of those. This contradiction makes it hard to understand his internal logic. Another interesting aspect is how the author attempts to portray Lucifer as a semi-caring father figure. While I understand that it’s not my book and the portrayal doesn’t need to align with my personal view, I do find it an intriguing choice. In my mind, Lucifer would more likely be vengeful or uncaring. Without free will, he wouldn’t have responsibility for his actions—since a lack of agency removes personal accountability. This could lead to an absence of empathy or remorse, as his actions wouldn’t truly be his fault. On the other hand, if he does have agency, at what point does he realize it? Would it be when he faces the consequences of his actions for the first time, or would it happen at some other pivotal moment? These questions don’t detract from my enjoyment of the book, but I hope they might serve as constructive criticism or spark ideas for future development. I genuinely hope the author keeps writing because this story has a lot of potential. For readers considering whether to pick up this book, I’d say it’s definitely worth a read—especially if you’re interested in unique portrayals of complex characters like Lucifer.
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it is a good read i think this is going to be a really good story also remember this is in a dc universe AU of a dc universe AU so enjoy and turn off that part of your brain that says its not right because it is the author's world not the one you know.
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So far I’m really enjoying the mc’s journey and I’m loving the fact that he didn’t technically lose the battle against the angels during the Rebellion. I’m just really impatient to get the story into canon
Great story so far, not going to continue reading it because I don't like harems but if you're alright with harems definitely a good option. also please put in the tags that its a harem
卷 1
- 1 Creation 12 days ago
- 2 The Silver City 11 days ago
- 3 Endless 11 days ago
- 4 Solution and Humanity 10 days ago
- 5 Disobedience 10 days ago
- 6 Rebellion 10 days ago
- 7 And so it begins... 9 days ago
- 8 The Grandest Fall in the History of Time 9 days ago
- 9 Something readers should know 9 days ago
- 10 Hell 9 days ago
- 11 Reunited 8 days ago
- 12 King of Hell 8 days ago
- 13 Some clarification is in order 8 days ago
- 14 Murder 8 days ago
- 15 The First Curse? 7 days ago
- 16 How will this story go forward? 7 days ago
- 17 Leviathan 7 days ago
- 18 Could people who like it review as well please? 6 days ago
- 19 Free Will? 5 days ago
- 20 My Oh so Dear Bloody Mother 5 days ago
- 21 Negotiation 5 days ago
- 22 Revelation 5 days ago
- 23 Join my Discord it you wish to share ideas or be a beta reader sometimes 5 days ago
- 24 Human 4 days ago
- 25 He who would be King of Heroes 3 days ago
- 26 Who do you wish Lucifer to meet? 2 days ago
- 27 I hope I'm not being too annoying... 2 days ago
- 28 Queries of a king 1 days ago
- 29 Bet 7 hours ago
- 30 Do you guys want Oneshots? 4 hours ago
Okay, before anyone wishes to read this. The whole premise of this fanfic is a person being put in Samael's position and to explore what he could have done differently with meta knowledge. As you've probably seen through some reviews there is a lot of dissatisfaction of it apparently being to similar to the original, which is fair, but I personally disagree. I believe the changes have been adequate for his restricted situation as being the oldest angel in Heaven and for the most part constantly under the thumb of God and Goddess till of course the Rebellion. Many fanfics have someone simply be put in Lucifer's shoes after the most difficult decisions and I just find that, well, sorry, but cheap. No work, no effort, no price is paid to being made the literal second strongest existence. So I made this, a person who has to go through the hardships Samael faced himself and then make do with his options, a person that also has to work for their Free Will, now having had it robbed from them compared to their previous life. If you like the premise, do please be my guest and enjoy yourself. If you find something faulty, just tell me so, no explanation even needed, it at least allows me to contemplate another perspective. But please do not, say the whole thing just sucks, that's really useless and a waste of both of our times, mine for reading it and yours for typing it. So, this was what I wished to say to you all, for those who wish to read, I hope you enjoy it, Fare Well!