/ Fantasy / Astral Merchant
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Larcen was a man who took on low-paying jobs to earn a living. But he had a goal, and that was to become a diver, an occupation filled with uncertainty and high mortality rate. While it was dangerous, he had two reasons to pursue it. One was for riches and the other was because of the screen that floated in front of him.
{System will unlock once the user goes to another world}
He expected to get something that could help him evolve but little did he know that he would receive something far more versatile and powerful. Something that had the potential to overthrow the high-humans, the beings who had a hold on most of the Astral Dimensions.
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レビューを書くI like the premise, i can get behind the whole thing, i just wish it was better explained on how the replication works? it's confusing me, the story seems chaotic and hard to follow . really turns me off tbh
okay the first thing to say is starting, it really was great especially the running naked part it really made me laugh 😂, the fighting scenes were made really good and narration is also really good, as for stability it is new so I don't but I Will give it 5 star believing in daily updates, keep up author.
This is a great book. Judy saved it for more updates and the only thing I can say is that the quality of writing is to my liking. Also a very likeable, and funny character.And room for character development... hehe
A bit strange but in a good way, with the awakening of the world and the divers concept. Still too early to give a more in-depth review, but I hold hopes about this one and what happens off-world or the "aliens" there.
So far reading 5 chapter, the story is queit interesting, especially the opening its hook me up into the story. I'll waiting for the future update and just collect it to my library for now.
It has so much potential but it came out as a disappointment 😔 . The writing quality is quite good but there some scenes where we will be lost without explanation.... Not to mention the prologue which we don't even get a glimpse even after 230 chapters
ネタバレを明かすI am gonna give it 4 cuz it's ok making stats less than 1 feels a bit too underwhelming, not to mention he doesn't get op in 40 chapter even after he killed so many monsters
I always love a good merchant book but if I'm going to be honest this was kind of meh I will preface I only got through about 37 chapters but it started off with a really interesting concept but as it went on it just felt like your standard apocalypse story now I'm sure later on they'll probably reintroduce those earlier topics but it was kind of boring and the way he used his merchant system would have been fine if the system was some other moniker but there really did not feel like a merchant-based story felt more like a weaker version of one of those everyone gets transported to a new place to play some game and the main character has a superpower and then sells a bunch of stuff in the global channel like the novel shelter in the Apocalypse except for because it's not one of those type of novels it's significantly less fleshed out
Best novel ever, where do i start bruh, everything is great, the writing the wording the plot the chars, I'm hoping to see more of this in the future, thanks to the writer for this amazing piece of work, all the best!
The story so far is very unique and I’m loving the characters interactions and the world building. If you like a laid back story where it’s perfectly balance and not overly descriptive, with a sprinkle of post apocalyptic, this is the story for you.
Wowwww amazing, I just finished reading your up to 9 chapter, and I couldn't help but feel incredibly amazed. This novel is a true gem, and I hope it reaches as many hearts of readers as possible. Keep writing and do not drop it.
The synopsis is hooking. I love how the idea is set in a fantasy world yet somehow integrates the idea of capitalism in real world. Nice subtle metaphors
Incredible writing quality and the pace feels just right! I'm really enjoying this so far. Thanks for the great novel, author, hope you keep this up!
作者 PsionicMind
Just following traditions but there will always be room for improvement as an author. Firstly, I would like to say that the first few chapters lack action so I hope you stick with it for a while. Here is what you can expect from this book: Anti-Hero and Villain: He is a complex character who can be both based on the world he is in and the situation. Overpowered: Weak at the start if we consider stats but he becomes strong pretty fast so I decided that OP suited this better than weak to strong. Magic: Will be introduced on Earth and refined in the other worlds. System: Larcen is kind of a system administrator but with perks over the shop only. Cultivation: Like Magic. Will be introduced on Earth and refined in other worlds. Transmigration: This was the tag that came closest to how diving works. If you have any questions or if you want me to make an Auxiliary chap for something specific, just ask me.