バッジ 6
Moments 381
hmm.. not sure, to omit, because I wanted it, to be like same old same old. like normal dialogue and conversation... Like I am saying, I am same, old same Promezus.. here in this dialogue, I wanted to repeat as a normal human, who make mistakes but still convey their feelings. But Thank you... so muchhhhh,...
"I am the same old same first queen," the voice answered, cold and unyielding. "Having all the knowledge of god power, and you are still crying?" There was a harsh edge to the queen's words, like a blade cutting through the air. "Do you want to be labeled as a crybaby?"
Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
hundred times thank you, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you, thank you, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you so much, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you, fixed
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you but I don't know this language :)
Yes... power system will be based on various trials...
Ravenna's breath hitched. This moment was beyond her wildest dreams, yet it carried a burden she could hardly fathom. "But to make it yours and prove your worth, a journey awaits," the statue declared with unwavering resolve.
Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you thank you for your feedback
Fixed :) and Thank you for providing feedback. *Nightmare Activated (:
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Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus
Thank you so much, I hope, I shall worthy for this review :)
yes, yes, I got you.. I also realized that.. XD my paragraph length are longer.. I will edit in previous chapters as well.. Thank you for you feedback....
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Another World
Journey To Become God Of Destroyer
Fantasy · Promezus
Always, :) but I value the suggestions and feedback of readers. There is no such think a author without reader. You invest your time and money ( on contracted novel and unlock the chapters ) so if it is not up to your standards, it is as a me, a author fault. So you have every right to do so, and as a author it my job to fix it and improve it. :)
"I am the same old same first queen," the voice answered, cold and unyielding. "Having all the knowledge of god power, and you are still crying?" There was a harsh edge to the queen's words, like a blade cutting through the air. "Do you want to be labeled as a crybaby?"
Princess of Fallen Kingdom
Fantasy · Promezus