Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]

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Elementary72

it's a great story like the integration of the characters and the slow build up of the narritive. The action sequences seem perfectly tought out and flow pretty smoothly

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priyabolagani

The way it started is truly captivating. The synopsis is well written. It shows what u can expect. And the way the author build the story, characters everything is just beautiful. all the best author..

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tsukareta

The writing quality is honestly amazing and is definitely above average. Everything is very descriptive to ensure a greater, visual experience for readers, which is nice. The plot seems interesting and diverse as well, because it incorporates different gods from around the world as well as the author’s own ones. So far, the stability of updates is steady, but it is too early to make too many comments on it. However, there are still some errors that I found, while reading through the book. This includes grammatical errors (e.g. tenses, some unsuitable use of words and accidental, extra spaces) and punctuation mistakes (e.g. missing/unnecessary commas and full stops as well as capitalisation errors). Just as a reminder, don’t worry too much as there’s just some and everyone makes mistakes. Good luck on writing the rest of your book!

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Wise_Weed

The first scene was moving and a wonderful start to a novel. The many Gods and goddesses appearing got me excited for more. I am looking forward to Xaloc's meeting with Jamal. Don't stop writing Author!

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DaoistvODbDR

I really like your book more so the beginning, and storyline is good, it's very catchy and intriguing, I love, will read more chapters from you.

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RockieAuthor21

I really like second chapter of this novel Great writing quality better than other than others and chapter flow nicely reading forward to know more about this nice novel...[img=recommend]

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LeftPinky

I really liked the first chapter. Especially with the first scene, I really hope the rest of the novel continues like this....

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Passingsands

Story flows nicely with the touch of the godly pantheons for the first six chapters and it is immersive. Follow Xaloc on his journey, for now it is the start!

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Ben_Gomes

This was an amazing story. I very much enjoyed reading it!

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Zhiqing_Xu

I love how detailed this novel are, and it become one of my favorite novels I ever read, thank you for making this wonderful novel!!!

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GoneWild09

A good story, fun to read, and fresh for everyone. The pacing is smooth, not rushed, and not delayed. The characters are enjoyable to follow. The plot is interesting. I recommend this to all readers out there.

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IkuSaari

okay, the only reason why I won't probably read too much of this is that if I take on another book with any romance for serious reading, my brain will explode. but it's good. the names of people and things give me a nice, mythologically inspired boost. the storytelling is vivid and with every sentence, there is something poetic about this world being pointed out. this book cured my headache and made me feel a lot better today. thanks for that.

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meeksbrandy96

Good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mpho_Mantle

Good read 📚 👍 👌 👏 😀 🙌 fantastic world build

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Helen_Paul_1167

interesting, waiting for your next novel

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Beast_B

Amazing story from beginning to end, I simply couldn’t put it down. Everything had a purpose and everything flowed perfectly. I wasn’t expecting the story to be what it was based on the cover and description but I’m glad I took the chance. Only criticism I have is that there were a lot of typos and name mix-ups that could have been easily remedied with a good proofreading, even so the mistakes that were there weren’t bad enough to take away from the story. Besides that I genuinely enjoyed the characters, the world, the theology, the plot, and the twists and turns here and there, I wish we got more. Thankyou for this book, it definitely deserves more attention then it gets.