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Heaven Destroyer

Fantasi 222 章 2.0M ビュー
作者: Eternal_Demon

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Warning: Novel is a harem, contains R-18 scenes, gore, and violence; no rape or NTR

Ayaan entered a portal that lead him to the world of magic. There, he received the legacy of the greatest demon to have lived under heaven, a magic library system he can use to level-up his magic powers.

But great power requires one to pay a great price, too. Resulting in him losing his humanity!

"Wh-what did I become!? A-A do...


This is the story of the ordinary boy who will walk an extraordinary path. This is the story of love, betrayal, revenge, and tragedy.


Follow Ayaan on his journey and find out dark-secrets of this unknown world.
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The cover isn't mine. All credit goes to the artist.

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CeeBee_Aries

First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel.. Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this.. The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap. ** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'

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Blazing_1NS4N1TY

absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace 😉

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ErjasD
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I decided to review because I finally saw the r-18 tag come to light after 130 chaps[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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WEBUniverse

The book is basically about an MC who is a simp. The abandonment of his humanity to become something rlse.....trust me, it’s not that great. He is just a lovestruck simp

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the_demon_lord

mmmm, a new type of novels, power, love, fight, wars, death i really liked your novel auther and wating more from you, we are all here, so erntren us good heheheh

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The_Procrastinator

i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^ i love this novel! Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^

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WiLeYBiGhEaD

A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.

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Idiosyncratic

MC is a simp. Grammar/spelling is terrible. Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details. Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over. Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.

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Aschirg

Writing quality is bad, very simple sentences with a good amount of mistakes. I am unable to even care about the story as every sentence is hurting my brain while trying to correct it.

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Saltybolty

Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.

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Ne_ly
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It looked like it might have been a bit interesting. Until I actually started to read it. The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par. Needs a lot of improvement. . . . .

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Ian_Abarsosa

it's an overall good book but the development if too fast. The world background is kind of lacking although it's still new I guess in the near future this would be fixed. Keep up the Good Work!

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alphavires

The story has lots of potential but the MC is such a little bitch. I was expecting someone much more domineering after all the novels name is "Heaven Destroyer" but all I got was someone who the author tries to force the "willpower" cliché on without any willpower to speak of. Guy literally has to have his plot armour jump in twice in the first 20 chapters. The author tried to make him seem ruthless but idk man, he seems pretty pathetic. I'm hoping he gets better but atm, I'm about to drop it

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HeikyZX

I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction. The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself). Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system... Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.

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The_BP
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Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used. All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.

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Saverius

I discovered this novel yesterday and i found it interesting so far. Throughout the story i hope the novel as good and interesting. I recommend this novel to all the fans of new stories.

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Blazing_1NS4N1TY

If you have had a bad day, are thoroughly annoyed with someone or something, or possibly just want to read a great book, then this is the novel for you. The book is great about murder gratification. Person bothers the mc? Not for long. This book brings a fresh look in the 'new world' genre and I am very much looking forward to see where this novel leads, or at least how it gets there!

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Chapter 219: Betrayal 3 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Magic Library 4 years ago
  2. 2
    Trial of Suffering 4 years ago
  3. 3
    Heaven Destroyer 4 years ago
  4. 4
    Runes and Elements 4 years ago
  5. 5
    Death Rune 4 years ago
  6. 6
    New Quest 4 years ago
  7. 7
    Rebecca 4 years ago
  8. 8
    Concept 4 years ago
  9. 9
    Quest Completed 4 years ago
  10. 10
    The Hidden Enemy 4 years ago
  11. 11
    Phoenix Princess? 4 years ago
  12. 12
    Too Evil, Too Ruthless 4 years ago
  13. 13
    Forming the Death Rune 4 years ago
  14. 14
    Peril 4 years ago
  15. 15
    Battle 4 years ago
  16. 16
    Torture 4 years ago
  17. 17
    Journey 4 years ago
  18. 18
    Death Eyes 4 years ago
  19. 19
    Couple Inn 4 years ago
  20. 20
    Night in the Inn 4 years ago
  21. 21
    Northside of the Izhale 4 years ago
  22. 22
    Emergency Quest 4 years ago
  23. 23
    If You are a Demon, Let Me Become a Demoness. 4 years ago
  24. 24
    Blue Phoenix!! 4 years ago
  25. 25
    System Evolved 4 years ago
  26. 26
    Undead Plane 4 years ago
  27. 27
    Skeleton Brigade 4 years ago
  28. 28
    Rebecca in Trouble 4 years ago
  29. 29
    Fury! 4 years ago
  30. 30
    Diviners 4 years ago
  31. 31
    Revealing Secret 4 years ago
  32. 32
    Potion Making 4 years ago
  33. 33
    Overpowered Skeletons 4 years ago
  34. 34
    Undead Rise 4 years ago
  35. 35
    Spirit Fire 4 years ago
  36. 36
    Princess Noor 4 years ago
  37. 37
    Capital Doham 4 years ago
  38. 38
    Misunderstanding 4 years ago
  39. 39
    Uncle Goldward 4 years ago
  40. 40
    Business of Potions 4 years ago
  41. 41
    Hustle-Bustle 4 years ago
  42. 42
    Noble Families 4 years ago
  43. 43
    Lionsteel 4 years ago
  44. 44
    Fruit of Invisibility 4 years ago
  45. 45
    Soul Power! 4 years ago
  46. 46
    Dark Shade 4 years ago
  47. 47
    Shadow Bat 4 years ago
  48. 48
    Shop 4 years ago
  49. 49
    Heavenly Potion Shop 4 years ago
  50. 50
    Summoner!? 4 years ago
  51. 51
    Speed Increasing Potion 4 years ago
  52. 52
    Miserable Boy 4 years ago
  53. 53
    Three Potions 4 years ago
  54. 54
    Trying to slander me? Banned! 4 years ago
  55. 55
    Trying to snatch my woman? 4 years ago
  56. 56
    Why don't you buy a healing potion? 4 years ago
  57. 57
    Sheep in the skin of a tiger 4 years ago
  58. 58
    Facing the Ancestor of the Ferlee Family 4 years ago
  59. 59
    Rebecca's Strength 4 years ago
  60. 60
    Armori Hunt 4 years ago
  61. 61
    Skeleton kingdom 4 years ago
  62. 62
    Devouring Spirits 4 years ago
  63. 63
    Skeleton Dragon 4 years ago
  64. 64
    Strange Energy! 4 years ago
  65. 65
    Time Artefact 4 years ago
  66. 66
    Talk 4 years ago
  67. 67
    5th Level Great Mage 4 years ago
  68. 68
    Lawson Family 4 years ago
  69. 69
    In Your Dreams, Fucker! 4 years ago
  70. 70
    Reunion! 4 years ago
  71. 71
    Amazing Time Watch 4 years ago
  72. 72
    Sleeping between beauties 4 years ago
  73. 73
    Heavenly Palace 4 years ago
  74. 74
    Life City 4 years ago
  75. 75
    Talent Crystal 4 years ago
  76. 76
    Supreme Bloodline or trap? 4 years ago
  77. 77
    Entering the Heavenly Palace 4 years ago
  78. 78
    Crossing the Grassland 4 years ago
  79. 79
    Kill! 4 years ago
  80. 80
    No one can survive after hurting my women! 4 years ago
  81. 81
    Punishment 4 years ago
  82. 82
    Graveyard! 4 years ago
  83. 83
    Elementless 4 years ago
  84. 84
    Sixth Level 4 years ago
  85. 85
    Evolution? 4 years ago
  86. 86
    Evolution Completed 4 years ago
  87. 87
    Leafwhisk 4 years ago
  88. 88
    You talk too much 4 years ago
  89. 89
    Legacy Altar 4 years ago
  90. 90
    Heavenly Frost Sutra 4 years ago
  91. 91
    Disciple? 4 years ago
  92. 92
    The Path of the Strongest 4 years ago
  93. 93
    Played by the Dog 4 years ago
  94. 94
    Choose Your Weapons 4 years ago
  95. 95
    Who said you could use your magic energy? 4 years ago
  96. 96
    Amazing Sabre! 4 years ago
  97. 97
    I am me because of him; without him, I am nothing 4 years ago
  98. 98
    The Whole World in a Single Screen 4 years ago
  99. 99
    Attacking the Vigon Kingdom! 4 years ago
  100. 100
    Massacre! 4 years ago
  101. 101
    Strength is Supreme! 4 years ago
  102. 102
    Demon Released! 4 years ago
  103. 103
    Nolan 4 years ago
  104. 104
    God? 4 years ago
  105. 105
    Eva 4 years ago
  106. 106
    Sorry for your missing jewels 4 years ago
  107. 107
    Bewitching Flower 4 years ago
  108. 108
    Even My Fart Is More Primeval Than You 4 years ago
  109. 109
    Enraged Leafwhisk 4 years ago
  110. 110
    End of the Demon 4 years ago
  111. 111
    World Of Life And Death 4 years ago
  112. 112
    Ball-Breaking Punishment 4 years ago
  113. 113
    Fighting with Isobel 4 years ago
  114. 114
    It's Too Cliche 4 years ago
  115. 115
    Face Slapping 4 years ago
  116. 116
    Ruthless 4 years ago
  117. 117
    Rampant! 4 years ago
  118. 118
    Crazy Killing 4 years ago
  119. 119
    Duped 4 years ago
  120. 120
    Beauty and the Beast 4 years ago
  121. 121
    Rebecca's Story 4 years ago
  122. 122
    Poor, Miserable and Helpless 4 years ago
  123. 123
    Ghost Purification 4 years ago
  124. 124
    Raid 4 years ago
  125. 125
    Failed? 4 years ago
  126. 126
    Soul-Search 4 years ago
  127. 127
    Motive of Central Region 4 years ago
  128. 128
    Slutty Smile 4 years ago
  129. 129
    Ticket to Heaven(R-18) 4 years ago
  130. 130
    An appetiser (R-18) 4 years ago
  131. 131
    Dripping Wet(R-18) 4 years ago
  132. 132
    New Techniques 4 years ago
  133. 133
    Cultivator's Heart 4 years ago
  134. 134
    Final Step 4 years ago
  135. 135
    See the Owner Before Punching the Dog 4 years ago
  136. 136
    See the Owner Before Punching the Dog(don't read this chapter, it's same as the previous chapter) 4 years ago
  137. 137
    Long-term Investment 4 years ago
  138. 138
    Embryonic Realm 4 years ago
  139. 139
    A House in the Desert 4 years ago
  140. 140
    Ghouls 4 years ago
  141. 141
    Ghoul Federation 4 years ago
  142. 142
    Encounter 4 years ago
  143. 143
    Isobel Fights 4 years ago
  144. 144
    Ghost Area 4 years ago
  145. 145
    Ghost Hunting 4 years ago
  146. 146
    Ghost King 4 years ago
  147. 147
    Lesbian 4 years ago
  148. 148
    Inside the Cave (R-18) 4 years ago
  149. 149
    Time Watch Appearing Again 4 years ago
  150. 150
    Threesome(R-18) 4 years ago
  151. 151
    Slaughter 4 years ago
  152. 152
    Dark Element 4 years ago
  153. 153
    Chase 4 years ago
  154. 154
    Fire Body 4 years ago
  155. 155
    There is no saving you 4 years ago
  156. 156
    Intense Fight 4 years ago
  157. 157
    Slaughter at the Entrance 4 years ago
  158. 158
    Coiling Snake 4 years ago
  159. 159
    In the Mayor's Castle 4 years ago
  160. 160
    Easy Kill 3 years ago
  161. 161
    Hot Kiss in the Morning 3 years ago
  162. 162
    Snow Lake 3 years ago
  163. 163
    Trouble 3 years ago
  164. 164
    Unknown Horror 3 years ago
  165. 165
    Demonic Skill 3 years ago
  166. 166
    News About Heavenly Palace 3 years ago
  167. 167
    You are still my Isobel 3 years ago
  168. 168
    Heavenly Hamster 3 years ago
  169. 169
    Handsome 3 years ago
  170. 170
    New System 3 years ago
  171. 171
    August Emperor 3 years ago
  172. 172
    Bandits in Odoport 3 years ago
  173. 173
    Merciless 3 years ago
  174. 174
    Fight! 3 years ago
  175. 175
    Conclusion 3 years ago
  176. 176
    Goodwill Energy 3 years ago
  177. 177
    Ghouls Once More 3 years ago
  178. 178
    Peril! 3 years ago
  179. 179
    Slaughtering Jackals 3 years ago
  180. 180
    Jackal King! 3 years ago
  181. 181
    Summoning 3 years ago
  182. 182
    Delicious or Cute 3 years ago
  183. 183
    Mountain Digging 3 years ago
  184. 184
    Underground 3 years ago
  185. 185
    The death you say, heh? 3 years ago
  186. 186
    Larva Realm 3 years ago
  187. 187
    Ice Essence 3 years ago
  188. 188
    Leaving Seclusion 3 years ago
  189. 189
    Green Forest 3 years ago
  190. 190
    Someone From Heavenly Palace? 3 years ago
  191. 191
    Talk in the Palace 3 years ago
  192. 192
    Lion King 3 years ago
  193. 193
    More Journey 3 years ago
  194. 194
    Remember 3 years ago
  195. 195
    Fight on the bridge 3 years ago
  196. 196
    Fight! Fight! Fight! 3 years ago
  197. 197
    There is no honour in dying 3 years ago
  198. 198
    Three down, one more to go 3 years ago
  199. 199
    More Fighting 3 years ago
  200. 200
    Self Detonation 3 years ago
  201. 201
    Conclusion 3 years ago
  202. 202
    Causing Troubles 3 years ago
  203. 203
    Chaotic Lord 3 years ago
  204. 204
    Battle! 3 years ago
  205. 205
    Sucking and Kissing(R-18) 3 years ago
  206. 206
    Fucking and Sucking(R-18) 3 years ago
  207. 207
    Battle! 3 years ago
  208. 208
    Defeated Armori 3 years ago
  209. 209
    Bara 3 years ago
  210. 210
    4th Elder 3 years ago
  211. 211
    Leader 3 years ago
  212. 212
    Visitors? 3 years ago
  213. 213
    Miserable Elders 3 years ago
  214. 214
    Bait 3 years ago
  215. 215
    Battling with Elders 3 years ago
  216. 216
    Human Against Eater 3 years ago
  217. 217
    Killed? 3 years ago
  218. 218
    Heaven Destroyer 3 years ago
  219. 219
    Betrayal 3 years ago
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