Hidden Edges

LV 3

whoknowwhat

The first chapter really captured me and what made me want to carry on reading. This is a very promising original novel. The plot is good and makes me look forward to what will happen next. Cheers, author! Keep up the good work!

LV 3

cheshire17

I can visualize every single detail as if I'm living through it,you can actually feel the wave of emotions crashing over you. I love this book so much because of the suspense and twists at every turn, no words can describe how amazing this book is, I can't stop reading Crystal is my favorite character Totally in love with this book!!!

LV 3

Blackturtle

Hi everyone, I'm the author of Hidden Edges. I'm currently working on producing more chapters every two days and hope to hear from you guys and ladies. If you have any comments or suggestions, please leave them here. I basically check this everyday. Thanks for all the encouragement It's sugar! ;). Much love for y'all.

LV 3

Sunny_Skies

Hello! I’m from the review swap and I just wanted to say——- wow! The beginning really drew me in and I felt the bond that crystal and Dylan had with each other! Also, very creative story line! Keep it up you are doing a great job and have a lot of potential!

LV 1

kempia

5 stars. Excellent writing, pure romance, and its worth the read. From the first chapter the book is captivating and the suspense makes it more unique, wanting to know what's going to happen at the end. The plot is good and the writer is very creative making each episodes full of suspense.. A very promising novel to read.. Thumbs up 😊

LV 3

Favour_wings

My goodness Finally I've waited so long for an update from this book Phoebe you're really doing a great job Keep up the good work The story is incredibly amazing I'll definitely recommend this book to everyone Gogo Phoebe Much love 😘

LV 3

Kamatis

Yeet!!! Here comes my review!!! The beginning sure is capturing, hahaha. Before I knew It, I already finished the first chapter, nyahahaha. Your narration was very detailed and explained very well!!! Even though It's very detailed, I don't really feel that you're overfeeding the information and I'm sure the guys here didn't felt that too. Anyways, good book you have here, bro. Keep writing

I really love this book. It keeps me hooked. And the author really knows how to keep his readers glue to their screen. I love this novel. Please author keep updating more often.

LV 3

Agustusceacer

This one got me hooked from the very first chap, the story is very well written binge reading the book so far and the story is so suspenseful which get's the author get hooked, the author did a great job in describing the scenarios! Great work! I hope you continue to update very often because the plot is so addicting!! I am gonna continue reading your work!!!

LV 4

Tangent34

Dear Author, The storyline of your novel is very good and very captivating. Also the story development is in pace. It keeps one to stay stick to the coming chapters. You are really doing a fantastic job! Keep the hard work going on! Good Luck!

LV 3

Favour_wings

Oo GOD I'm starting to hate Sean now What has come over Crystal I know for a fact that she's going to regret what she's doing sooner or later I don't even know what Sean has install for her I don't want Dylan dead I'm really sad now 😣

LV 10

mrmrcia

This definitely leans more to action than romance. It's quite a good read. Although, there are several grammatical errors, but that is something you can improve right away. I think you could work more on the transitions of your scene? I got confused somewhere because of the lack of transitions. Please elaborate Crystal and Dylan's character background and I want to see their developments! Continue to be a good writer! I'm rooting for you!

LV 3

yaejin

You definitely know how to hook a reader. You start off nicely with all the mystery and a bit of a background of Dylan and Crystal. I love it! Plot wise, I have to commend you author. The mystery is just very engaging. Now, on your writing. Personally, I’m not a fan of long paragraph and I think a majority of readers online don’t either. So, if I may suggest, try cutting down your paragraph so that it’ll give an easier view. There are minor errors such as punctuation and typos. The arrangement of your sentence is sometimes off as well. Do re-check it bcos sometimes you just push everything and creates a very long sentence. Lastly, I think you need to pay attention to your diction. In the second chapter when you describe the cabin, you use “beautiful” far too many I think. However, I do love your simple way of describing the environment and the situation. It is very vivid and sharp, not verbose. Keep up the good work author! Your book is very promising and engaging. It just need a little editing. All in all, I applause for your hard work especially in writing a long chapter because I can’t do that 😭 i might hv to learn from you. I’ll be waiting on your review for my book ❤️

LV 5

ElianaG

Wow! I clearly love the plot. I just hope that everything's gonna be alright with the girl. I would recommend this book to anyone who is looking for a bright and a dark side of a book! Great job, Author! P.S please support me on my novel

LV 4

_Tesla

Let me start by saying thank you. My friend recommended this book to me and said it would be nice, I doubted him but now I'm shocked. I don't read romance much, I can write it...But it's not my favorite. I like the characters, your style of writing, expressiveness, and detail you have given. I see you like lewis {from the first chapter}. This book was a nice read, I hope it continues.

LV 3

phantom6_sensei

Now, the book was good the first chapter gave a comforting yet suspenseful feel which continued into the next chapter. The chapters were long detailed and clearly well thought out, I'm glad we were able to get an good understanding of their marriage. The only problem I have with it is that Dylan seems to have mood swings. That apart it's a great book which I'd recommend. Nice work author.