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ArtoriaPendragon_

Your average, shameless author review! Nothing to see here!

1yr 23

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QuaziY

Nice story. Hope you continue this.

1yr 15

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SHADILLAC09

I will preface this by saying this is a good story! If you are looking at reviews to see if you should read this or not then yes read it especially if you like an OP MC. Despite this being a good story I do have some issues with the story telling. Spoilers ahead. It annoys me how much the author keeps emphasizing how much they hate Landon. I get it!! You dont need to mention it so much especially when you make EVERY interaction with the character as toxic as possible. If I could offer any piece of advice towards this then I would say that the author missed a huge opportunity here. If you hated the character so much why not change it? Who says you have to do EVERYTHING as it happens in the show? You even have the convenient excuse of butterfly effects of a new character being thrown into mix. You could have written the character in a way that made you and your audience happy. The constant persecution of the character just feels like the story was written to spite him instead of telling the story of your OC. The story is great. And while I want to offer more constructive feedback on other aspects of the story like the pace at which the MC's relationships escalate. The MC is cool with whoever you like most from the story and barely acknowledges anyone else. She doesnt feel like she is part of their story at all. She feels like an outsider who just came to bang Hope. But I feel like it was done in a way where the MC had to get in there before Landon. Again, it just feels like since his name was mentioned in the story everything just became about keeping good things away from him.

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9mth 4

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Omar_Alflh

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10mth 3

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DaviToledo

a novel tá boa, mas se tivesse um problema e que tem poucos capítulos, tirando isso tá bom.

11mth 3

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david_cuenca

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11mth 3

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MANI_BALI

I really love this Fanfic Novel of yours, every single minute I keep on thinking as to when ur next update will come! I really can't wait for the updates for this one! once again I REALLY LOVE U AND UR THIS FF! THX

2mth 2

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Leon_Harris_5385

Now that the story is getting going, with character interactions, the recent chapters, 7 onwards are quite enjoyable. I've deleted my old review, as now people can keep reading after the initial power building. Looking forward to what comes next

11mth 2

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ghostensaop

love it

1yr 2

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Glitch_8959

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1yr 2

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WulfricTheodore

pretty meh, but for a legacies/tvd/originals fanfic, its an okay read. but like them, ut has glaring flaws, too much bashing (landon's to be exact, especially when their is no point to, because writers wrote him to be hope's elena and he did surpass her in terms of usability/character.) breaking the world power structure by introducing too much bs. it should have been like instead of becoming op, she needed to get points by changing/not changing the story and when she completes the world, then she can jump, not by being a wish fullfillment wannabe. its not as bad as introducing lucifer in tvd, lie what the hell, writer should just say it out loud he is trying to compensate for his nonexistent d**k. another problem is fmc's existence is kinda pointless other than f**king hope since plot remains the same(ish), no creativity. i short, if you have nothing to read, this fic wont be the last thing on the list, but, don't expect much (which i did seeing the lack of some other flaws, 1 star reviews or just the effort author put in writing words.) while on that note, author doesn't proofread enough to remove the redundancy in his words/sentences.

2mth 1

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enock

The book is great author . I would however appreciate it if you would stop neglecting it and start updating regularly like old times.I know you have been focusing more on Gwen than Talia but we like Talia more so pliz more updates

5mth 1

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LUBT

not my cup of tee mc is a futa milly alcock, the plot is not realy like the name of the novel leads on the uniqueness is the futa part the travel part comes first after 55 chapters and the worlds are not realy interesting to me more for female/they,them audience TVD legacys and shadowhunters

7mth 1

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Alex_Simmonds

Love this story so far. Pacing is very good, develops rather quickly but in a logical way. The character's personalities are exactly as I had watched in the show, to a very impressive degree! I hope the author continues as the quality makes me check the book twice to three times a day.

11mth 1

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Tiny_Tim_5672

I like it …………………. I like it …………………. I like it …………………. I like it …………………. I like it ………………….

1yr 1

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GodOfDao

The "Daddy" thing is a little weird but i love the Rest.

1mth

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12sebas12

I've already read the other two stories by this author and thought both were really good. When I started this one, it didn't catch my interest right away, and I stopped reading a few times in the beginning. But once I got into it, I found the story just as good as the others. Although I have to say, of the three, my favorite is Spider-Gwen: I Have a System. Still, it's worth reading all three stories d=(^o^)=b

1mth

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