A random pokemon journey

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Kwetzal_Lag

Alright, time to dive into another story

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Webnovel_Baller

Avid fan of the author here. I’ve read a bit of this story and I just want to say, it reads like a train wreck. Theres just something wrong about how the sentences are structured and the frequent syntax errors. Im sure the story will be top tier given the authors track record, but unless the writing quality is improved/revised, then its going to be a huge immersion killer.

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Jackoftrades

It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out

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InternetSaint

With a "SYSTEM" story.

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adn53

I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.

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DaoistWsow5U

It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.

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sandesh_gavali

way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences

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JustDK

giving this story 5 star across the board because of how unique it is. Has a system but everything is randomize. Not a collect them all pokemon style fic, but rather a few (currently) op close pokemons. So far gym battles are few in number unlike other stores where they go for 10 or 20 chapters just for a few battles. More focused on the wild life aspect.

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Phoenixslayer4

That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC

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PsychicPanda28

I rarely ever post reviews but this author deserves them. No typos, consistent uploads, good length chapters, quality story with a solid flow. The author also responds to and listens to readers suggestions. 10/10

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bored_af89

love the story, not much fanfics are like this, the writing is a 4.9-5, not many mistakes, the development is going well so far, the story's kinda new so we can't judge much. Character design.. idfk how they look like and I'm too lazy to read appearances, updates are well, 1 chapter every 1 or 2 days, background is good as well. keep up the good story bro

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Scar_Justice

Looks really promising. I've been wanting a good pokemon ff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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adn53

I like.

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Tartar_Dart

Isn't it supposed to be a no harem story? Why is Mc showing his interest in having lot of conquests?

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1Redhead1

is this polyamory???????,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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SimpleReaderPassin

Have to say, I never expected to fall into a diamond and one of my preference at that after The natural. Chapters are long and I enjoyed every moment of it

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javier823

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Cocoerloko

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Lox_Of_Sins

Haven’t read yet but From Ring maker this is going be fire! 🔥

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BIG_DREAMER

To be honest it’s just too much and the thing that makes me mad is the freaking fact that he’s giving his Pokémon nicknames each and everyone of them and it turns out other people is like how you expect us to remember.. Typical Chinese stuff stories again nothing out of the ordinary and author try to make the legendary Pokémon seem like super op but seriously man if they were how did raquaza got captured. But if you like your choice this is all just in my opinion.