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One Hero Is Not Enough To Save The World.
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Amael, the hero, singlehandedly wiped out more than half of the entire demon race all on his own and even won against the demon king. This should have put him at ease but unfortunately for the human race, the demon king and his race were fated to come back to life again after thousands of years, just like it's always been.

"You may have won this time Amael, but the next time, there'll be no one as powerful enough as you to save this world" the demon king cackled with a malicious laughter as he faded away.

"This is only a temporary peace..."

"Very well then... If this is what I must do to completely eradicate them, then I will"

Amael then made a decision. A decision he had hoped would ensure the safety of the future for generations to come.

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"We were supposed to be dead, but when we both woke up, we found ourselves in this new world... a world that was all too familiar to both of us"
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Author Note: The first few chapters (Around 20 chaps) will be written in 1st person POV but after the introduction of more characters, I will seamlessly switch to the third person POV. Also, as you might've noticed, there will be two male leads. I really hope you enjoy reading the book as much as I enjoyed writing it!

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    Caeruleum_

    Pft! Of course I was going to leave a shameless review. I do want my book to get enough exposure afterall. That being said though, this is my very first book and I would be super grateful if you all could support me and help to make this story better. I also urge you to point out any flaws, plot holes and anything you find odd about the novel. Your feedback really will go a long way. Criticism is nice and all but do not break my fickle heart. I beg of you. Constructive criticism will be very much appreciated though. That's all from this shameless author! Hope you enjoy the book!

    1yr
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    KanTakeAHint

    After reading all the chapter in this novel, i only have one thing to say

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    Zurbluris

    Its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, the novel looks like one that will be amazing too

    1yr
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    DaoistxjmnAv

    you should mention who is speaking it's kinda confusing but looks promising

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    ItzWaqaz

    this one is a good novel and has good storyline just dont discontinue this work because this is my favorite ...... we are waiting for new chapters

    8mth
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    SHiRa155

    Good, good. A good novel little duckling. Keep going, i really like the concept of two mc.

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    David_Hughes_9017

    An absolutely amazing novel. loved it start to finish. Highly recommend

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    Yazukoto

    Alrighty! As promised I will leave a review! I’m sorry it took so long T-T please don’t make a character named Jason and kill him brutally for revenge! Overall: This is an amazing novel. I’m shocked that the author was able to focus on both mc equally and make us love both of them. I have nothing to say in this regard besides I love it. World building: the author goes in depth to where I can literally imagine what’s they’re explaining. I would love if there was a picture in some instances tbh cause some times my imagination goes wonky and I’ll imagine crazy things. Grammar: I don’t see much issues tbh. It’s a very enjoyable reading. Spoilers down below Cons: I NEED MORE FLUFFY MOMENTS WITH THE LOVERS! Also now that they’re getting ranked up more I hope you don’t put the adults and parents to the side. I would personally love to see the parents swoop in and save them if things were going bad for the mcs. Like when they were younger and the dad stomped the guy for trying to kill his son. I need more of that. Give them some screen time and make them feel more useful please. I wanna see the parents also be of help rather than just using authority or having one moment of action.

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    ItzWaqaz

    glad i came to know of this piece .[img=update]

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    WorldLegacy

    The book cover is stunning! Looks promising too. Wish that there would be more clarity on who is speaking, but otherwise, pretty good start.

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    Vainglory0

    Stable updates, splendid writing quality, and peak character designing. The story development is consistent with plenty happening so far(46 chapters). The only this I can nitpick about is the slightly long training arc but that's more of a subjective issue. As for the world building, there has been plenty so far so, definitely not lacking on that aspect either. Overall, a great story with marvelous potential. Excited to see what the author has in store for as going forward.

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    m_P3rch
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    Great novel. 2 MCs, which is not often seen, had at first scared me a bit that author would not be able to handle it. But author managed it perfectly so far. Intriguing plot, decent pacing and good writing

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    Liam_Hem

    A good novel. A new and novel twist to the magic one could form in a concept called series is what I liked about this.

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    DaoistYmLy3X

    kerja bagus [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

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    Akane_Ryuzaki

    In response to the author's plea on chapter 38, I decided to leave a review here. Of course , it'd be a solid 5 stars for me if I read a bit further, up till chapter 38 was enough to earn this overall rating of 4.6 stars. One selling point I could give you would be the tearjerker I was hit with on probably chapter 3-4 ish. I mean, the author made me tear up at the brothers' reunion so early into the story, and ever since then, I've been invested in it.

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    Wen_Qing

    Finally finished reading the 1st volume! All I can say about this book is it's worth giving coins/free pass for 😂 The pace is a bit slow for some, but it's necessary for world building. The thing I like the most is the fact that the brother's relationship is good. The romance aspect is also not bad. Not the focus of the whole plot, but they still have decent development.

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    Succulent_Peaches

    I am so glad you stopped having the pov changes like that. The pacing seems to be just right a little slow at times but it is a good novel. If you could do two chapters a day that would be massive.

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    Ana_MZ_27

    It's a good story so far can't wait for more chapters 🙂👍[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    The_Golden_Age_

    Very enjoyable read. Unique to its genre and we'll written.The novel follows the story of two brothers who both transmigrated into a video game/novel. I love their brotherhood and family dynamic so far and I'm looking forward to it in later chapters. Hopefully author doesn't decide to kill them off.Highly recommended 👑⭐

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    DaoistxjmnAv

    it is good one [img=update][img=update][img=update]with good start currently following it but you should make the character more detailed

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    1. 1
      Chapter 1 - Hero & Demon King 1 years ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2 - Brothers 1 years ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3 - Heaven 1 years ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4 - Conversations 1 years ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5 - Apology 1 years ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6 - Resolve 1 years ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7 - Encounter 1 years ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8 - Two Alchemists 1 years ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9 - Mana Veins and Combat Art 1 years ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10 - Aiden Vs Flynn 1 years ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11 - Family 1 years ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12 - Goodbye & Good Riddance 1 years ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 12.5 - Old Hurts 1 years ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 13 - Spells 1 years ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 14 - Contract I 1 years ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 15 - Contract II 1 years ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 16 - Our Sons 1 years ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 16.5 - Foreshadowing 1 years ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 17 - Missing 1 years ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 18 - Barbecue 1 years ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 19 - Searching 1 years ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 20 - Saved 1 years ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 21 - Clean Up 1 years ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 22 - Revelations I 1 years ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 23 - Revelations II 1 years ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 24 - Weapon Arts 1 years ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 25 - The Tower 1 years ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 26 - Fissure 1 years ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 27 - Butler Frank 1 years ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 28 - Back To The Basics 1 years ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 29 - Memories 1 years ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 30 - Sweet Tooth 1 years ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 31 - Mana Sense 1 years ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 32 - Father's Lesson 1 years ago
    35. 35
      Chapter 33 - Bloodlust 1 years ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 34 - Completion 1 years ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 35 - Spell & Dagger 1 years ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 36 - Progress And Growth I 1 years ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 37 - Progress And Growth II 1 years ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 37.5 - Fun 1 years ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 38 - Snow and Two Years 1 years ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 39 - Invitations 1 years ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 40 - Making An Entrance 1 years ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 41 - Socializing I 1 years ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 42 - Socializing II 1 years ago
    46. 46
      Chapter 43 - Socializing III 1 years ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 44 - Pandemonium 1 years ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 45 - Fast & Furious 1 years ago
    49. 49
      Chapter 46 - Mother's Rage 1 years ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 47 - Beatdown 1 years ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 48 - Aftermath 1 years ago
    52. 52
      Chapter 49 - Just Getting Started 1 years ago
    53. 53
      Chapter 50 - Umbra & White 1 years ago
    54. 54
      Chapter 50.5 - NOTICE! 1 years ago
    55. 55
      Chapter 51 - In The Shadows 1 years ago
    56. 56
      Chapter 52 - Briar 1 years ago
    57. 57
      Chapter 53 - Unexpected Visitor I 1 years ago
    58. 58
      Chapter 54 - Unexpected Visitor II 1 years ago
    59. 59
      Chapter 55 - Lakeside 1 years ago
    60. 60
      Chapter 56 - Proposal 1 years ago
    61. 61
      Chapter 57 - A Peculiar Note 1 years ago
    62. 62
      Chapter 58 - Waves 1 years ago
    63. 63
      Chapter 59 - Arcana Academy 1 years ago
    64. 64
      Chapter 60 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams - Prelude 1 years ago
    65. 65
      Chapter 61 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams I 1 years ago
    66. 66
      Chapter 62 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams II 1 years ago
    67. 67
      Chapter 63 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams III 1 years ago
    68. 68
      Chapter 64 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams IV 1 years ago
    69. 69
      Chapter 65 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams V 1 years ago
    70. 70
      Chapter 66 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams VI 1 years ago
    71. 71
      Chapter 67 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams VII 1 years ago
    72. 72
      Chapter 68 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams VIII 1 years ago
    73. 73
      Chapter 69 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams - Epilogue I 1 years ago
    74. 74
      Chapter 70 - Arcana Academy Entrance Exams - Epilogue II 1 years ago
    75. 75
      Chapter 71 - Marriage Proposals 1 years ago
    76. 76
      Chapter 72 - First Day, First Class I 1 years ago
    77. 77
      Chapter 73 - First Day, First Class II 1 years ago
    78. 78
      Chapter 74 - A Peculiar Instructor 1 years ago
    79. 79
      Chapter 75 - Quests, Districts & Dorms 1 years ago
    80. 80
      Chapter 76 - Bryan White 1 years ago
    81. 81
      Chapter 77 - Villain and Vixen 1 years ago
    82. 82
      Chapter 78 - Pushing Back 1 years ago
    83. 83
      Chapter 79 - Turning The Tides 1 years ago
    84. 84
      Chapter 80 - Shatter 1 years ago
    85. 85
      Chapter 81 - Darius Strikes 1 years ago
    86. 86
      Chapter 82 - Pocky Stick 1 years ago
    87. 87
      Chapter 83 - Two Seniors 1 years ago
    88. 88
      Chapter 84 - A Strange Quest 1 years ago
    89. 89
      Chapter 85 - Novier 1 years ago
    90. 90
      Chapter 86 - Crystal Caverns I 1 years ago
    91. 91
      Chapter 87 - Crystal Caverns II 1 years ago
    92. 92
      Chapter 88 - Trepidation 1 years ago
    93. 93
      Chapter 89 - Triumph 1 years ago
    94. 94
      Chapter 90 - Astral Plane 1 years ago
    95. 95
      Chapter 91 - Quest Completed 1 years ago
    96. 96
      Chapter 92 - Girl Talk 1 years ago
    97. 97
      Chapter 93 - Napping Montage 1 years ago
    98. 98
      Chapter 94 - Pinballs 1 years ago
    99. 99
      Chapter 95 - Advancement 1 years ago
    100. 100
      Chapter 96 - Sketchy Website 1 years ago
    101. 101
      Chapter 97 - 100 VS 1 1 years ago
    102. 102
      Chapter 98 - Student Council 1 years ago
    103. 103
      Chapter 99 - VR Training 1 years ago
    104. 104
      Chapter 100 - Delving 1 years ago
    105. 105
      Chapter 101 - Avalanche 1 years ago
    106. 106
      Chapter 102 - Ogre Yeti 1 years ago
    107. 107
      Chapter 103 - Evie Lockhart 1 years ago
    108. 108
      Chapter 104 - Flowers & Affection 1 years ago
    109. 109
      Chapter 105 - Misunderstandings 1 years ago
    110. 110
      Chapter 106 - Couples 1 years ago
    111. 111
      Chapter 107 - Long Overdue 1 years ago
    112. 112
      Chapter 108 - A Valkyrie & A Time Lord 1 years ago
    113. 113
      Chapter 109 - Award Ceremony Banquet - Prelude I 1 years ago
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      Chapter 110 - Award Ceremony Banquet - Prelude II 1 years ago
    115. 115
      Chapter 111 - Award Ceremony Banquet I 1 years ago
    116. 116
      Chapter 112 - Award Ceremony Banquet II 1 years ago
    117. 117
      Chapter 113 - Award Ceremony Banquet III 1 years ago
    118. 118
      Chapter 114 - Award Ceremony Banquet IV 1 years ago
    119. 119
      Chapter 115 - Award Ceremony Banquet V 1 years ago

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      Chapter 116 - Gaia 1 years ago
    2. 121
      Chapter 117 - Airships, Sky Pirates & Phantasms I 1 years ago
    3. 122
      Chapter 118 - Airships, Sky Pirates & Phantasms II 1 years ago
    4. 123
      Chapter 119 - Mysterious Words... 1 years ago
    5. 124
      Chapter 120 - Flenor Islands 1 years ago
    6. 125
      Chapter 121 - Festival 1 years ago
    7. 126
      Chapter 122 - Prove Your Worth 1 years ago
    8. 127
      Chapter 123 - Battling A Valkyrie 1 years ago
    9. 128
      Chapter 124 - Well Earned 1 years ago
    10. 129
      Chapter 125 - Pivotal Questions, Shocking Answers 1 years ago
    11. 130
      Chapter 126 - Turning Gears 1 years ago
    12. 131
      Chapter 127 - Beach & A Couple's Conversation I 1 years ago
    13. 132
      Chapter 128 - Beach & A Couple's Conversation II 1 years ago
    14. 133
      Chapter 129 - Auction Events I 1 years ago
    15. 134
      Chapter 130 - Auction Events II 1 years ago
    16. 135
      Chapter 131 - Auction Events III 1 years ago
    17. 136
      Chapter 132 - Auction Events IV 1 years ago
    18. 137
      Chapter 133 - Auction Events V 1 years ago
    19. 138
      Chapter 134 - Auction Events VI 1 years ago
    20. 139
      Chapter 135 - Auction Events VII 1 years ago
    21. 140
      Chapter 136 - Auction Events: Epilogue I 1 years ago
    22. 141
      Chapter 137 - Auction Events Epilogue II 1 years ago
    23. 142
      Chapter 138 - The Railgun 1 years ago
    24. 143
      Chapter 139 - School Trip Experiences (Boutique Incident) 1 years ago
    25. 144
      Chapter 140 - School Trip Experiences (Touring Aquilith Haven) 1 years ago
    26. 145
      Chapter 141 - Dreams Of A Long-Forgotten Past 12 months ago
    27. 146
      Chapter 142 - Descent Of A Deadly Ray 12 months ago
    28. 147
      Chapter 143 - Pandemonium! At Flenor Islands! 12 months ago
    29. 148
      Chapter 144 - Contingency Plan 12 months ago
    30. 149
      Chapter 145 - 'Spooking' A Prime Minister 12 months ago
    31. 150
      Chapter 146 - Shadowmaws 11 months ago
    32. 151
      Chapter 147 - Phase Two 11 months ago
    33. 152
      Chapter 148 - Frying Pan To Fire 11 months ago
    34. 153
      Chapter 149 - Man On A Mission 11 months ago
    35. 154
      Chapter 150 - A Dramatic Entrance 11 months ago
    36. 155
      Chapter 151 - Old Friends, Current Enemies 11 months ago
    37. 156
      Chapter 152 - Unexpected Twist 11 months ago
    38. 157
      Chapter 153 - Stopping The Railgun 11 months ago
    39. 158
      Chapter 154 - An Earthquake? 11 months ago
    40. 159
      Chapter 155 - Destroying The Railgun 11 months ago
    41. 160
      Chapter 156 - Wrapping Up 11 months ago
    42. 161
      Chapter 157 - Amael & Beelzebub 10 months ago
    43. 162
      Chapter 158 - Events Of A Long-Forgotten Past I 10 months ago
    44. 163
      Chapter 159 - Events Of A Long-Forgotten Past II 10 months ago
    45. 164
      Chapter 160 - Events Of A Long-Forgotten Past III 10 months ago
    46. 165
      Chapter 161 - Wide Awake I 10 months ago
    47. 166
      Chapter 162 - Wide Awake II 10 months ago
    48. 167
      Chapter 163 - Visitations 10 months ago
    49. 168
      Chapter 164 - Truth Of Our Existence 10 months ago
    50. 169
      Chapter 165 - Schemes And Plots 6 months ago
    51. 170
      Chapter 166 - More To Be Known 6 months ago
    52. 171
      Chapter 167 - Readjustments 6 months ago
    53. 172
      Chapter 168 - Inferno Dragons 6 months ago
    54. 173
      Chapter 169 - Abducted 6 months ago
    55. 174
      Chapter 170 - Crossroads 6 months ago
    56. 175
      Chapter 171 - Synergy 6 months ago
    57. 176
      Chapter 172 - Evening The Odds 6 months ago
    58. 177
      Chapter 173 - Flash Freeze 6 months ago
    59. 178
      Chapter 174 - Curveball 6 months ago
    60. 179
      Chapter 175 - Restrictions 6 months ago
    61. 180
      Chapter 176 - Pleasure To Meet You 6 months ago

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