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Alice Lost in Nightmares
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In a land of blood and rust, a girl with no memory of her past awakens to horrible nightmares beyond her imagination that only she can see.
Whimsical creatures straight out of a twisted fairy tale relentlessly stalk her, each calling the name 'Alice'.
With no idea of what is transpiring, the young girl must battle to survive.
In a world with no hope, the girl must struggle in a nightmare that she may never wake from.
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Hello! Thanks for checking out my novel! This story will be a dark and twisted take on Alice in Wonderland. I hope to make this story about how a innocent girl gains the strength to survive in a twisted world filled with death and nightmares. How will she come out in the end of it all?
My Goal is around 5 chapters a day or so. Maybe more if i can but we shall see. Till Then enjoy! :)
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Story has a lot of good elements here and there that set it apart from the average dark fairy tale retelling you generally get with these type of 'edgy' re imaginings. Good start so far besides maybe a few pacing issues early on that kinda made the action hard to read. but otherwise enjoyable as a whole so far!
Interesting Take on Alice in Wonderland. Read the first 15 chapters and im pretty interested so far and cant wait to see where the story will take go in the future. Keep up the good work!!!
Usually I am not a huge fan of this type of story but I am enjoying it nonetheless. The World is interesting and the Action is exciting so far. Love the twisted yet familiar characters popping up here and there
A book with a great idea, just needs some more touch ups perhaps and we'll have ourselves a great book, keep it up author can't wait to see where this journey leads us.
Great read really good world building and characters. The premise is interesting even if I don't understand whats happening so far. Is she a clone? What is the 'something' that killed the Hatter? Cant wait for more!
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Surprisingly a good read so far. There are times when it feels like the story may be moving a little too fast, but all in all, its been pretty enjoyable when it does get going.
Jilid 1 : The Rabbit
Jilid 2 : Hatter
Jilid 3 : Humpty Dumpty
Jilid 4 : The White Queen
- 21 Welcome to Wonderland. 1 years ago
- 22 You and not you. There and not there. 1 years ago
- 23 The Bishop 1 years ago
- 24 Lady Iberis 1 years ago
- 25 You’re too much of a tease for a senior! 1 years ago
- 26 Battles aren’t always decided by pure power 1 years ago
- 27 Are you Alice…? 1 years ago
- 28 Still Another Alice 1 years ago
- 29 Too Strong 1 years ago
- 30 A Wish For Death 1 years ago
- 31 “Let me engage in combat too.” 1 years ago
- 32 Touched by the Nightmare 1 years ago
- 33 Sever all! 1 years ago
- 34 I won’t kill you right away 1 years ago
- 35 A buddha’s face is three times 1 years ago
Jilid 5 : Twins
Jilid 6 : Red Queen
- 43 “Alice” is dead…? 1 years ago
- 44 I’m also a… Nightmare… 1 years ago
- 45 What kind of person was the 'real' Alice? 1 years ago
- 46 I am ‘created’ from the same material as her 1 years ago
- 47 I think that girl needs a chance 1 years ago
- 48 You’ll be safe. I’ll protect you. 1 years ago
- 49 What is this… 1 years ago
- 50 I have to fight 1 years ago
- 51 Alice is the one who will suffer the most if you die 1 years ago
- 52 This is a lie 1 years ago
- 53 You are naive. You’re human after all 1 years ago
- 54 I will not be defeated… by the unreasonable! 1 years ago
Jilid 7 : Magical Beast (Jabberwock)
Jilid 8 : Mock Turtle
- 61 I was hoping… you’d come to your senses by now 1 years ago
- 62 That girl is not Archi-Alice. 1 years ago
- 63 Don’t you find it strange? 1 years ago
- 64 Perhaps in direct combat, I am far superior to your forces. 1 years ago
- 65 People with no familiarity… are obnoxious. 1 years ago
- 66 There is an Original Nightmare here… 1 years ago
- 67 We are living to eradicate the Nightmare. Don’t you understand? 1 years ago
- 68 Alice. I will definitely protect you. 1 years ago
- 69 So they aren’t the kind of people who would risk their lives. 1 years ago
- 70 What the… hell! 1 years ago
- 71 What has she done…? 1 years ago
- 72 I have accepted your reply. I shall now kill you all with all my strength. 1 years ago
- 73 I’ve achieved my goal. It’s good. 1 years ago
- 74 You’re a… complete Nightmare! 1 years ago
- 75 Congratulations on your honorable… death 1 years ago
- 76 He is the “demise of the Apocrypha” 1 years ago
- 77 Did you finish it? 1 years ago
- 78 What the hell is… that! 1 years ago
- 79 I asked who you are! 1 years ago
Jilid 9 : Gryphon
Jilid 10 : Duchess
- 86 But now I’ve got the power. I can fight. 1 years ago
- 87 I am no longer afraid of anything… 1 years ago
- 88 It’s futile to run anywhere huh 1 years ago
- 89 The enemy is upon us! 1 years ago
- 90 I’m going to slash you so deeply that you won’t be able to regenerate! 1 years ago
- 91 Your opponent is me. 1 years ago
- 92 I’m going to be killed. 1 years ago
- 93 You are a ‘human being’ after all 1 years ago
- 94 I’ve made up my mind. 1 years ago
Jilid 11 : Unicorn
- 95 That’s how the support program ended up being ‘Nightmare’. 1 years ago
- 96 You can’t slip off.. 1 years ago
- 97 Have a good day. 1 years ago
- 98 You are… wrong. 1 years ago
- 99 Today is a fabulous day! What a fantastic day! It’s a HAPPY DAY! 1 years ago
- 100 I’ll kill you at that moment. 1 years ago
- 101 Call Lewis Carroll. 1 years ago
- 102 The price for this is high… 1 years ago
Hello DetectiveJones here with a Shameless Review! I Hope you all enjoy reading this as I enjoy writing it. This story is obviously a darker take on Alice in Wonderland. With that being said, there is a deeper element at play here and all may not be as it seems on the surface. Alice may take a little to get her bearings as a character but she wll slowly come into her own and figure out the origins of herself and the Nightmare that haunts her.