Crimson Destiny (Fantastic Beasts Fanfic) [Temp Hiatus]

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DeathWalker

This is an author who puts time, effort, and thought into the work he has created. He doesn’t just write a fic in order to make his own story but, yet he creates his own world that you fall in love with. Keep doing what you always have done, and never doubt the works you’ve made. Skal.

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SupremeGacha

Written as of chapter 5. Since it's starting way before any HP cannon events, it feels very fresh and exciting to experience the world of that time. It has a bit more grim dark heavy feeling to it than cannon, witch is to be expected at that age. The MC is still very young, but because her past she is well above her mental age. Witch makes it much more enjoyable to see her thoughts and interactions imo. The characters feel alive, and there dialogues real with there own personality. Grammar is easy to read and with very few errors. The only thing i would nitpick about, is the lack of building the immediate environment/surroundings in the scene changes. Does not need to be extensive, but just a little to build the "frame" of the picture at the very least. Like i said, this is a nitpick. Because it's not a complete lack of it, but just enough to make you feel a bit lost at times. Thank you Author! I hope to read and enjoy your novel for a long time ^^

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Shreyash_Patil_1204

It's an absolute delight to read it, you just connect with the characters you know, you don't care about morals or what's right or wrong(at least for me) you just care about how she lives, how she does things, her thoughts, her drive, it's simply amazing. You're brilliant and I look forward to reading more.

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TATTERWING

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LV 14

lstreader

This is honestly one of the best HP fanfics I've read. I love that fact that it takes an alternate route to the common going to Hogwarts fanfics. The main character has great personality and character development, and both the story and world building are fantastic. The only reason I didn't give it five stars is because I would like if the author posted more often, but in the end if they trade off better quality for more chapters I would say to stick with the higher quality chapters with less frequent posts.

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krish_digwal

I don't read fanfics. But this story is really great. It is a Harry Potter fanfic, but plays before the books or Phantastic Beasts which I find is way better. The chapters don't come daily, but the writing quality is good and the chapters are long, so all good. The characters are cool and easy to imagine, I really like Grindelwald's and Destiny's relationship

LV 14

GAMING_IS_MUST

the book is awesome so far, it's going great and although the chapters numbers are low right now the length of each chapter makes up for it, Just Pleeease don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Weaving_That

Normally I don't read novel without some meta knowledge. But this even with topics that I don't normally like it's awesome. It kept me glued to the screen for as long as possible because I needed to read more. Congratulations.

LV 4

Fu_Hua_

A Good Book 👍 ......................... Of course I don't need to explain why, just go and read it if you want to know why.

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Destiny_Ryu

I have never read a fanfic so well writen. I found the harry potter books unreadable because I had problems immersing myself in the story (still got the main info on the universe thought) but your book is perfect. I was caught on the first line. Please keep writing you have a talent for it and thank you for this masterpiece.

LV 15

SleepySolstice

I would throw money for this book to be updated more often. The story is amazing, with an interesting take on a time period you dont see explored too often. The grammar is really solid especially for this site. I just cant get enough of it and wanna see where the author takes this story in the future!🔥🔥🔥

LV 2

Perpetual_Nseboh

this book is absolutely mesmerising. you will just be absorbed whilst reading. it is worth the while. the plots and sequence are to die for.

LV 4

Tito_Falxus

GREAT fanfic, I love the view from the "daRK LoRds" side, it's really fresh to read about the MC having her OWN race (magic people in general) in higher esteem that the Muggles that burn them, and everything make sense you cannot blame her, she is doing the right thing from her point of view. Writing: 5 stars, nothing much to say, errors ? some minor ones... who cares. Updates: 5 stars, 1 chap per week ... BUT the chapters are long they count as 5 chaps of other fics. Story dev: 777 stars so far (13 chaps I have read) it's perfect. Character Design: 5 stars. Love them all the MC, the OCs, Gellert Grindelwald, I like all of them xdd don't know what more I have to say. World: 5 stars, HP world and the author is making his/her own changes in something that we don't know much as the Fantastic Beast series.

LV 4

Toxic_318

Awesome novel. It has a good plot and is written in an interesting way. This novel deserves the support

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homeofthelostqueen

I ONLY HAVE ONE THING TO SAY TO SOMEONE LIKE YOU!!!!! THAT IS....DO NOT DROP I REPEAT DO NOT DROP OR I WILL KICK THIS PUPPY!!!😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Samarcev

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The_Dark_Hydrax

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trudny1

Great story and character development. Unique story with Harry Potter/Fantastic Beasts universe. Though those that dislike female MC's with yuri - you might be disappointed.

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lilspinn

A J.k Rowling verse fanfic like non other, with a power system simple but efficient. We can see a future in the plot, by the way quite the good idea to start from the Grindelwald era cause he is a real dark lord not like Riddle who clearly lack the charisma of a Lord.