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I have read over 30 different versions of douluo dalu so far and this is the second one I have enjoyed reading. The story is well though out, excellent work author-san.
*This isn't a book review so much as a 'request' for the author, but my rating stands.Hi Author😁Have you ever considered continuing with the story on your own? I don't even know if it's possible, but it was a really enjoyable read, and I was disappointed to see it end so abruptly.
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While I don't like harem stories, I cannot deny that this story is a good one and deserves to be praised. I do wish you can post the link to the original story.
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I read a few chapters... but I can already say that I will most likely not like this. divided chapters, following canon with one or 2 lines from the MC (I'm still in primary academy), I like it to keep a little of the canon yes, but at least consider the butterfly effect. if you're going to follow the canon on this, you'd better just skip time and give a rundown on what's going on.
On MtlNovel the novel was changed to ongoing, so the author might be feeling better and might put out a new chapter for the novel. Or im getting my hopes up and its just gonna stay on hiatus. either way its some sort of new right?
As far as I understand, in all key moments, Xiao Feng will come out and proudly win everyone with one blow. Will take the kitty from Mubai. And will throw pretentious phrases and knowledge that everyone already knows from the original work? And to all the enthusiastic compliments, he will say - "Nothing special." Lousy disgrace. 4.91 is just complete .... Broaden your horizons, look for normal jobs, it's just a shame. Raised this squalor to the top, other authors are probably just delighted with such tricks on this site.
It's by far the best douluo dalu fanfic I've read and it makes me quite sad that the author can't continue it
Looking for some popcorn wish fulfilment super fast cultivation mind boggling novel with comments from mob about how OP the protag is by comparing to the mc and characters from the novel Well this is it This novel is for u
I'm using you to keep me busy while I wait for more chapters to my other novels and fanfics. __________________________________________
no more chapters will be uploaded because it was dropped by the original author. :( Its very good, but it is incomplete. Read it if you have literally nothing else, otherwise it will be a heart break 😞
Do anyone know link for this novel in uukanshu? I remember reading this once on that website 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Was interesting but then twords the end it just became stupid and ridiculous. The mc pretends to be his own grandpa for no reason (he's already said he's on par with the strongest people in the world and isn't afraid to be besieged) before then turning to the oldest and dumbest cliche in the book, hiding his strength for no reason other than to reveal it later and face slap people. It sucks that such an other wise interesting novel was almost totally ruined by the end.
Very good novel Keep it up 😉😉🤠 Add some extra thing.... 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Bagus sekali bagus sekali bagus sekali bagus sekali.. Hshshajsbj good.. Very good.. Nice work if i can say.. ........... ...................
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Actually this is good novelbut if you visit MTL. This fanfic already dropped. So hmmm, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This story has good background, it updates quite regularly, the quality is immaculate and there aren't many errors (although there are some here and there) and the development of the story is very good. I love the plot of the story and it is very enjoyable to read. People who love fanfics should definitely give this fanfic a chance,
Great what is the new fin fic dd1 called the plot was good and slow but since you said it will end soon does not make sense because there is still the tournament sea god island god realm the sea and other countries and cities.
For me the fanfic is nice, translator notes though are a different story. They make the translator look like an overcompensating wannabe though guy. It's geniunely pathetic, but if you just ignore the misplaced jealousy of fictional characters and ignore the fact that the translator seems to missremember the majority of DD1 and judges it on standards of DD2 and DD3(you know 10k and 20k years later) then the story itself is alright. MC is abit OP though but that's alright.
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honestly I just finished this even though it hasn't been updated in like 2 years I really enjoyed this.
I have read over 30 different versions of douluo dalu so far and this is the second one I have enjoyed reading. The story is well though out, excellent work author-san.
*This isn't a book review so much as a 'request' for the author, but my rating stands.Hi Author😁Have you ever considered continuing with the story on your own? I don't even know if it's possible, but it was a really enjoyable read, and I was disappointed to see it end so abruptly.
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Membuka SPOILER While I don't like harem stories, I cannot deny that this story is a good one and deserves to be praised. I do wish you can post the link to the original story.
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I read a few chapters... but I can already say that I will most likely not like this. divided chapters, following canon with one or 2 lines from the MC (I'm still in primary academy), I like it to keep a little of the canon yes, but at least consider the butterfly effect. if you're going to follow the canon on this, you'd better just skip time and give a rundown on what's going on.
On MtlNovel the novel was changed to ongoing, so the author might be feeling better and might put out a new chapter for the novel. Or im getting my hopes up and its just gonna stay on hiatus. either way its some sort of new right?
As far as I understand, in all key moments, Xiao Feng will come out and proudly win everyone with one blow. Will take the kitty from Mubai. And will throw pretentious phrases and knowledge that everyone already knows from the original work? And to all the enthusiastic compliments, he will say - "Nothing special." Lousy disgrace. 4.91 is just complete .... Broaden your horizons, look for normal jobs, it's just a shame. Raised this squalor to the top, other authors are probably just delighted with such tricks on this site.
It's by far the best douluo dalu fanfic I've read and it makes me quite sad that the author can't continue it
Looking for some popcorn wish fulfilment super fast cultivation mind boggling novel with comments from mob about how OP the protag is by comparing to the mc and characters from the novel Well this is it This novel is for u
I'm using you to keep me busy while I wait for more chapters to my other novels and fanfics. __________________________________________
no more chapters will be uploaded because it was dropped by the original author. :( Its very good, but it is incomplete. Read it if you have literally nothing else, otherwise it will be a heart break 😞
Do anyone know link for this novel in uukanshu? I remember reading this once on that website 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Was interesting but then twords the end it just became stupid and ridiculous. The mc pretends to be his own grandpa for no reason (he's already said he's on par with the strongest people in the world and isn't afraid to be besieged) before then turning to the oldest and dumbest cliche in the book, hiding his strength for no reason other than to reveal it later and face slap people. It sucks that such an other wise interesting novel was almost totally ruined by the end.
Very good novel Keep it up 😉😉🤠 Add some extra thing.... 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Bagus sekali bagus sekali bagus sekali bagus sekali.. Hshshajsbj good.. Very good.. Nice work if i can say.. ........... ...................
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Actually this is good novelbut if you visit MTL. This fanfic already dropped. So hmmm, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This story has good background, it updates quite regularly, the quality is immaculate and there aren't many errors (although there are some here and there) and the development of the story is very good. I love the plot of the story and it is very enjoyable to read. People who love fanfics should definitely give this fanfic a chance,
Great what is the new fin fic dd1 called the plot was good and slow but since you said it will end soon does not make sense because there is still the tournament sea god island god realm the sea and other countries and cities.
For me the fanfic is nice, translator notes though are a different story. They make the translator look like an overcompensating wannabe though guy. It's geniunely pathetic, but if you just ignore the misplaced jealousy of fictional characters and ignore the fact that the translator seems to missremember the majority of DD1 and judges it on standards of DD2 and DD3(you know 10k and 20k years later) then the story itself is alright. MC is abit OP though but that's alright.
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honestly I just finished this even though it hasn't been updated in like 2 years I really enjoyed this.