/ Book&Literature / Hogwarts' White Lord
Synopsis
After crossing over into the wizarding world, Ivan acquires a system that allows him to grow stronger by adding points.
Snape: "What's with your magic? Why is it so powerful?!"
Voldemort: "I can't lose in a duel of spells!"
Dumbledore: "Here, take my position as headmaster!"
Grindelwald: "A Seer, an Animagus, a Legilimens, a Metamorphmagus, what else have you hidden from me!"
Hermione: "My Ivan! That's my Ivan!"
Luna: "I haven't kissed anyone.. will you teach me, Ivan?"
Fleur: "Although I look like this, I.. I'm still a virgin!"
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MC has Merlin's bloodline and is OP with a system.
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MTL: The first white lord of Hogwarts
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Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plot😅💀
Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.
Damn! Finally, someone who understands the lore of HP books. Most of the fkers start writing fics just from watching the movies... This is great,
The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.
Y'know, I went into this expecting nothing. But damn did I get hooked. This story is one of the few that captivates you and pulls you in. It captures the feel of the Harry Potter books perfectly in how magical everything seems. Although this is a translated work, it does not change that it is a work that needs to be appreciated. The Writing quality, or better yet, translation quality is impeccable. you can't even tell its a translated work unless something really particular pops up. The story development is great. although hard to stick to in the first 10 chapters, when it gets rolling, oh it gets rolling. I couldn't even tell how fast I read through this and when I reached the end it left me craving for more. The Characters are very nicely interpreted. all of them capture the Essence of the originals and even the side characters feel like they're alive. although sometimes it may feel like the side characters glaze the Mc too much, that's just part of the fun and is framed as being perfectly logical. The updating stability is good. not much to say about it. There is a chapter every day. As for the World Background, this is literally the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read that takes many elements from the books too. Everyone else just watches the movies and calls it a day in terms of research. this is very well fletched out and the gaps in knowledge are allowed to be filled in by the author. all in all, 5/5. One of the best, if not the best fanfics, I've read on the platform. It simply draws you in and doesn't let go. would recommended.
everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it
A hard find [img=nervous]. It seems to be well thought and has a lot of potential 🔥🔥
So i was just minding my own business until i saw Hermione's cover so I thought? How about myself some time to relax instead i only got hooked by an interesting plot😅
Good translation I also checked out the mtl version and thats also nice and readable (miracle) Pretty good novel so farrrrr
Easy top 10 HP fics. If you are reading the initial chapters and think there is a lot of info, trust me, you will thank those infos later 'coz in later chapters you'll be able to tell what stat will help at what time♥
JK ROWLING will be PROUD .... love the world building and tge authors take on Spells and Magical theories . its a refreshing and completely new POV to the Series . also its great that thr authors picks the best of both , the books as well as the novel !!
3-2-3-5-5 Writing is okay, there are similar terms written differently, and sometimes they mistake on the same chapter. Story is below average to me. IDKW I kept seeing 5 stars when there's barely any story in it. almost 50 chapters in and we're still on 2nd day in Hogwarts. Pacing is super slow. I like MC most of the time, too bad he went the simp road. Updates are fast. World Background is probably the best part of this fic, most theory and MC's inner monologue about The Wizarding World is spot on.
The writing is suffering in its flow with wierd phrases, maybe because of translation or something but it tends to make the story lifeless. Hopefully it Will improve
This is kind of boring in my opinion. The magic part is good, but the main character is just too perfect. There is no suspense, humor, or original characters. If you want to read about a gender-bent Mary Sue, then this is it, but if you want some exciting wizard battles, I can't recommend this.
Just one word is all I need to speak of this fanfics excellence and that's "perfect". This fic DON'T need me to over glorify it's nature to others because it speaks for itself.