Holy shit the translation errors have drastically increased, by god.
"This man, Lord Kayvaan Shrike, is the leader of the Space Marine Corps," Joe said, gesturing towards Lee. "So, can we go in now?"
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Before the Unification Wars, I think even before the radiation war that occurred during the birth of slaanesh that forced the Emperor to become the Emperor of Mankind by unifying the warlords of Terra and then beginning his great crusade.
The next day, Kayvaan declined Darius's offer to show him around Terra. He wasn't in the mood for sightseeing—not when his own future was so uncertain. Besides, Terra wasn't exactly a tourist haven anymore. The planet had been transformed into a sprawling political and religious megacity, stripped of its natural beauty. Mountains had been leveled, seas drained, and every corner of the planet was covered in towering buildings, orderly streets, and ornate sculptures.
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It is by the looks of it, since the MC's actual name is Li something (an earlier paragraph used the Chinese name and not the warhammer name)
If Kayvaan were still powerless and imprisoned like he had been just days ago, this noble probably wouldn't have paid him much attention. But now? Now he was a leader—a leader of a Space Marine regiment that was about to be established, with authority over three entire galaxies.
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heck all that experience he lived while going through Kaayvens memories and yet his personality and ideals didn't change, im sorry but that isn't human, his thought process would've changed had he experienced all of that 🤔
But returning to the battlefield, shedding the last drop of blood for the Empire? That wasn't what he wanted anymore. Maybe the original Kayvaan—before this body had been possessed—had that kind of resolve. But the current Kayvaan wasn't the same. He was a young man from a peaceful era on Earth. That level of sacrifice and duty wasn't something he aspired to.
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Question Author, how close to Ultramar are these systems? In case he needs back up he could always reach out to the Ultramarines if they're close enough 🤔
The old man nodded. "That's correct. While you hold claim to three star systems, they're located in a remote corner of the Eastern Fringe, far beyond the reach of the Emperor's direct influence. To the Imperium, the Eastern Fringe is an undeveloped frontier, often considered untamed. The systems under your control are in an especially isolated region."
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You're not wrong chief, Big E has full access to warp which means he's got full access to past, present, and future, similar to that of the Chaos gods. Best part, I bet you he was in league with Slannesh in opening the rift, since Slaanesh is the most likely one to work with him since the Prince of Excess has a bone to pick with the other 3 Chaos gods 🤣
At first, the reward seemed incredibly generous—three entire star systems, a prize of staggering proportions. But as they studied the map, the reality became apparent. These systems, while vast, were strategically insignificant. They were so far from the Imperium's core that even the Emperor's reach grew faint.
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This is funny coming from a tech priest, heretic filth
"We can't allow this," the General continued, his words deliberate. "Granting one individual such immense authority—a leader of an Astartes chapter who also holds the title of Imperial Commander—is reckless. This person would oversee three entire star systems, not to mention commanding an elite military force that answers only to him. Such autonomy invites disaster."
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Incorrect name here
"Of course," Kayvaan interjected earnestly. "The Empire would never neglect a war hero from the legendary era like you, Captain. If I may ask, sir—what's your final decision on my application?"
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It is 20, 21 physically, and now there are roughly 23/24 Primarch level existences. Of the original 20 Primarchs, one of the embryos split and turned into the Twins, which is why we physically have 21, and then we have Belarius Cawls false primarch (his personal guard), Abbedon is supposedly drawing close to the size of a Primarch, and Erebus (fuck that guy) who received buffs thanks to being Erda's guard.
In the days of the Great Crusade, the Emperor created twenty Space Marine Legions, each led by a Primarch—genetically engineered sons of the Emperor. Each Legion was a massive force of thousands of superhuman warriors. They swept across the stars, reclaiming lost human worlds, crushing alien threats, and expanding the Imperium's reach. But that was before the Horus Heresy.
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original Conquest of the Lich King
What happens if everything you've been told has been nothing more than a lie? What happens when you become the nightmare that they all fear? What will you do to set yourself free? Eric has only just taken his first steps unto his new path, but he must come to quick terms with the hidden secrets that the lords of all don't want to be known. Can he overcome the lies that chain him down, and that hounds him whenever he takes a step closer to the truth, to the freedom, to where God has gone? Or will he just become another corpse buried six feet under? Or will he become the corpse that rises into the heavens? Only the fates know, and time will be able to tell us, for the world is changing and war is coming, and darkness is descending.24 Chs 40 Collections
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Divine Demon God
Magic, Cultivation, Witchcraft, Sorcery, Alchemy, Pill Concoction, Forgery, Enchantment, Glyphs writing, Ruin casting. Different names for similar methods, yet with different results. What could give people such great power? It's the Divinity. The connection between everything both alive and not alive. A rock has a divinty as thin as a strand of hair, a human as thick as the pinky, a demon as wide as a man's shoulders, an angel a span of creek, and a god as extravagant as raging river. But how does one achieve divinity, how does one become immortal and powerful enough to do as they please? Again there are many ways, yet none are as powerful as the path of the Divine One. Follow Hunter on his journey of becoming the Divine Demon God and showing the world that fate is never truly set in stone. Hey everyone this is my first work so I do apologize for how it turns out, I look forward to the guidance and questions left in the comments and will do all I can to release as many chapters quickly, however the college life is rough and so I can't promise chapter releases every day, let alone every week. I am excited though so I will be working hard on this story in all the spare time I can. The first few chapters maybe a little boring as I'm using it to set up character backstories and overall story building, but I promise the action and adventure will all pick up as the story goes. This is a mix of both Western and Eastern fantasy, with a little spin of course. Also I have a general outline of how I want the story to go, but I will be looking at comments and seeing what you guys are wanting to happen and may incorporate some of those wants into the story. (If I do I'll give a shout out to the person who gave the idea at the end of the chapter, gotta always pay tribute to where the ideas come from.) This is a fictional story, names used in the story have no intentional connection to people in real life. Locations on Earth will be used, however they will not be entirely accurate so do not use this for planning any trips or vacations. Locations not located on Earth, in the story, are fictional and also have no intentional connection to any place in real life. I hope you enjoy, and I'm always gladly accepting constructive criticism. P.S. This is also an original work, so no Translations. English is my first language, however we're all human so I do apologize for any mistakes or errors.38 Chs 39 Collections
An Astartes, even a recruit, would never bitch like this. Either the translator doesn't know much about the works and is just going for easy wording or the original author had no clue about anything 40k and just wanted to write their own shitty story without having any idea of jack crap.
The guard froze mid-step, his expression shifting to panic. "Captain! These two tried to force their way in, and… and he attacked me!"
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