Yesnth

Yesnth

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Inspired Author in training. Preparing for an official novel through fanfictions. Salted fish~

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Yesnth
Yesnth
4 days ago
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As a reply to the comment above me, but also to speak directly to the author, I think this is a good decision. OPM and Overlord only truly work because they are heavily focused on the side characters and how they tackle challenges. While OPM plays on a comedic value, comparing the heroes and Saitama's efforts to provide entertainment, Overlord leaves one waiting for the opposition to be crushed through brutal efficiency– both of which, as far as I can say from my experience reading webnovels, are unviable in a fanfiction. Not sure about Eminence in Shadow though.

With this i think i explained the current situation as well found a plausible explanation to avoid becoming op too fast as that would be boring.

Solo Leveling: Monarch of Knowledge (What If)

Solo Leveling: Monarch of Knowledge (What If)

Anime & Comics · Mr_Graythorn

Yesnth
Yesnth
6 days ago
Posted

This is such an engaging piece of work that I cannot recommend it enough. It reads like fairy tales your grandmother would recite as a bedtime story, incredibly refreshing and so so so entertaining. The dialogues are like those spoken in old plays and tales, over the top yet don't fray away from the seriousness. The characters and the world, although may seem unrealistic, is exactly the kind of worldbuilding this work needs. The whimsy of magic is also highlighted. It's so refreshing to see a work that doesn't frame magic as a means of sole destruction. 5/5 would recommend.

Yesnth
Yesnth
6 days ago
Commented

I feel like the paragraphs are too long. It's nice for some of them to be large, but if every single one of them is so large, it breaks immersion as the reading process seems too daunting. It's an easy fix though. And curious to see how everything develops.

Yesnth
Yesnth
7 days ago
Commented

So he's an idiot... Well, can't expect everyone to be like Klein I suppose

In his shock, Elliot whispered the name involuntarily. "Amon…"

Lord of the Mysteries: The Omnipresent Force

Lord of the Mysteries: The Omnipresent Force

Book&Literature · AnonymousPhoenix

Yesnth
Yesnth
10 days ago
Replied to cojamo5160

? I said you're free to drop if you desire. I don't really care if you do.

'They seem to be helping me a lot...' Shuichi narrowed his eyes.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Anime & Comics · Yesnth

Yesnth
Yesnth
13 days ago
Replied to Meh2007

Nah I won't drop. As for the Tensura, I've watched the first season and half of the 2nd one. Other than that, I've seen some lore videos on it and the various skill explanations. The power system is well thought out, but it's ruined by how the story itself is given to you. Although it's one of the more recognized isekais, I can't help but find it mid. Lastly, preparations are going great! thanks for asking!

Worst case, I'll just make a new fanfic lol

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

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Yesnth
Yesnth
13 days ago
Replied to PeterGriffith

I don't think that'll fix the issue. To begin with, I didn't enjoy this arc in tog, much less writing it. I feel like that's the real problem here, but the deeper complications are in the progression.

I still have an outline of the major events, but now, the further I get into the tog storyline, the more trouble I have filling up the in between.

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

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Yesnth
Yesnth
13 days ago
Replied to Smart1914

I mean... there's not much point to continuing. With the rate he's progressing, he will become the Lord of Mysteries by chap 170. Even if he ascends to godhood, tog just gets negged

Anyway, there's not much I can do to fix that now. Rest assured, there will be an end to this story and it will hopefully coming in this year itself.

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

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Yesnth
Yesnth
14 days ago
Commented

right* eye. Amon never wears it on his left eye. Klein put the monocle on his left eye to scare medici, but didn't dare put it on the right one in case Amon took notice.

Yesnth
Yesnth
14 days ago
Replied to cojamo5160

OK? I mean... you're free to do so if you want

'They seem to be helping me a lot...' Shuichi narrowed his eyes.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

Anime & Comics · Yesnth

  • Tower of God: Sequence Strength original

    Tower of God: Sequence Strength

    Others ACTION ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI ANIME

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    What do you desire? Money and riches? Honor and Pride? Revenge? Or something that transcends all these? Whatever you desire... Is Here! The Tower of God welcomes you! ~~~ ~~~ In a sense, the Tower was a saving grace; a disgusting prank played on Winston Heath when he was suddenly transported to these strange lands. Now, climbing a tower where any wish could be granted so long until the top was reached, Winston yearns to find a purpose for himself. However, Irregulars have always brought changes in the tower! How will he fare? Especially when armed with the three pathways of the Lord of Mysteries?! ~~~ ~~~ Volume 1: Vistas of the Test Floor What terrifying sights lie beyond, and what whispers within the waves? In the endlessness of the tower, who could pass through the trials? Amidst the flowing waves of the divine water, who could achieve the unthinkable? On the floor of tests, dangers lurk both in the dark and in clear sight. ~~~ Volume 2: Hunter in the Waves Who lurks in the shadows and what peers from the mist? The dangers of the tower are many to name. When a Hunter sets the bait for the fish, the blood will attract sharks all the same. When bait is thrown into the sea of fate, the ripples are bound to bounce back. Amid the expansive tower, who can unravel the Mysteries? In the epicenter of conflict, who will come out on top?

    116 Chs 7.7k Collections

  • Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception original

    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG OVERPOWERED ANIME JUJUTSU KAISEN

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    Shuichi, a normal man gets reincarnated to the world of Jujutsu Kaisen as a boy from the Zenin clan, except he gets thrown out of the clan as soon as he gets transmigrated. Unfortunate right? Well, lucky for him, he has a system to help him survive! How will a man with a system at hand change the world of jujutsu kaisen, and more importantly, those around him? . . . . JJK does not belong to me, I only own the oc. Some changes might be there, seeing as its a fanfic. The cover art is mine.

    58 Chs 11k Collections