Becoming the Strongest in Black Clover

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Divin_Prime

ferrofluid magic is good, just don't give him devil, give him sage mode with its help make ferrofluid orbs as truth seeking orbs it would be awesome,(it's just a suggestion, consider it if you like it)

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Sparsh_Kumar_1064

I have read your MHA fanfiction and can say this is as good as that. I hope you will continue this fanfic, it is one of the better ones from just the first few chapters.

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cosima_li_ansaldo

tbh it is good .. but it needs a lot more like interaction betwen the character ..and it needs a lot more Description of the scenery and like that and more of it if you can make ... and you need to put more into not making the mc a 1d character ..no he needs to see and intracnt with others and so

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MajorLove_Gravy

The quality of this story is a significant drop compare to the authors other story which is a shame. It rushes through everything, there's a bit of mistakes, and it doesn't flesh out interactions between the mc and other characters which is one of the few advantages of fan fics. My advice? Go back and rewrite from the start and take a slower pace or just drop entirely and wait until you're finished with your other novel and then focus on this one because even giving it 3 stars is being generous

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666P_P666

Romance?..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Cibeu

The book is decent, but I feel that it could benefit from additional details regarding the scenery. It would have been great if the main character had more opportunities to interact with their surroundings. Also, allow the main character to talk more to some of the people around him, not just two sentences and it’s over. Have a more engaging conversation time-to-time.

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Luffy_Is_Dead

Really good book... You just need an editor and this will be perfect

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Atrox_ashborn

u good ma guy????

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edgy

always black bulls 😤😤 will still read though 🤣

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Christian_Lee_7242

I loved it don't drop it...................................................................................................................

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Hey_Bro_is_Crazy

Muito bom, mas acho que a magia dele tem potencial para ser mais versátil. Ele já é poderoso suficiente, mas não no nível capitão. Leiam, eu gostei

LV 10

Rio_Bladimir

La magia de ferrofluido no llama la atención es un punto muy importante a tener en cuenta el fondo del mundo es correcto y lleva bien rimo pero la magia lo corta hay poco descripción de entrenamiento y se siente muy rápido sin dar el crecimiento de personaje adecuado

LV 4

Supper_mega

I loved it already plssssss dont drop this so soon