DivineByakk0

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
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just because someone is good at being stealthy doesn't mean they are an assassin, but just about every class in any game requires stealth for one reason or another.so him being a warrior type is fine and if you want to incorporate more stealth to zeyu make him have abilities tied to shadow.

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

my condolences this is an awesome story

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

TFTC. I think an interesting twist would be if old Kai showed up and got in the way somehow, but I am curious when radditz learned the spirit bomb

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter, but raditz fear seems a little forced. super buu or kid buu without the grand Supreme Kai has no access to God ki and even if he did by separating from the grand Supreme Kai and good but he just made himself target practice for goku's spirit bomb and if raditr learns it from watching goku then for him to, because like it was stated by raditz earlier in the series the spirit bomb is the perfect counter to kid buu cause he is pure evil and that is what the spirit bomb destroys

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter. so you know by making it so he has Yamamoto's abilities he instant becomes op cause he was basically handed a nuclear warhead that has multiple uses and that is still without using all the bankai abilities. the ideas that he should have gotten his bankai latter with senjutsu is good because as far as I know no one in naruto can survive the heat of the sun and that is what Yamamoto's shikai is supposed to be as hot as.

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Replied to SixthSense1029

it is no problem it was just a shock to see that it had caught up and you are doing a absolutely awesome job in crafting the story I am curious how your going to do the doctor ichigaki fight with genkai not being in the tournament.

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
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great chapter, and it has caught up with your patreon as well.

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

there is so much skipped it ruins the the flow of the story

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

I hope she starts feeling better. you take the time you need for family. This is a great story that I am sure is only going to get better.[img=recommend]

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DivineByakk0
1 years ago
Commented

great story wish there was more chapters though.