The Kingmaker: Legend of the Undefeated Commander

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Daoistl4XZch

not often I feel like giving a review, however this one decidedly deserves one. amongst a myriad of mediocre novels found on this app, this one is most certainly one of the finest hidden gems I've come across. story pacing feels just right, not rushed nor slow. likeable and distinguishable thought out characters. our MC is smart and observant in how he acts yet not so smart that it feels overdone, and the comedic timing aswell as the action scenes are overall very well written.

LV 7

Drunkenturtlefist

This story is a lot of fun to read. The main character is decently smart, so you don't have why did he do this in your head all the time. Hes not super Op either hes good at somethings and bad at others like a normal person. It's also nice to see a Mc use a weapon that isn't a sword. The game world seems to make sense which is also a plus. So in my opinion this story is worth a try.

LV 13

HomieLv1

A fellow games author! Nice! We need more gaming novels! All golden three(title, synopsis, cover) look good! Let's dig in, brothers and sisters!

LV 4

Lucinda_Hacker

Love the novel! Great work author! Could use a bit of work on spelling and grammar tho.[img=recommend]

LV 14

Rhys_k

well written with few errors. very enjoyable story so far.

LV 13

Wise_Weed

Are you bored of the same old same old VRMMORPG Tropes? The ones where MC is just an OP character with zero faults and everyone around him just exists so he could show off? Maybe try this one.

LV 13

Ankit_Bhanot

untill now its very and interesting and I have special place for Indian authors or novels.. but I want to know is novel still updating..?? I can see the last update is 16 days ago..

LV 4

Insolent_Evil

Great work honestly, and yet is not getting the love it deserves.