The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

LV 14

Slowest_Turtle

I'm liking everything so far. Nice, unique AU. A fun MC with a well thought out background. The writing quality is very good. Nearly perfect. Some small mistakes, but nothing that ruins the story. Can't wait for more.

LV 4

Equilibrium123

Good story with a unique start. I especially liked that the mc embraced her new identity and how her being an angel effects others reactions. However the author needs to explain the nerfs and buffs the main character and villains are getting. There are a lot of times me and other readers were confused for a lot of the fights because the mc would beat up villains a few chapters before with no effort only to struggle against someone they shouldn’t. For example either Voldemort was buffed and we weren’t told or there is some confusion on the authors part when it comes to DXD angels or HP wizards and their power levels and how they would face against each other, never-mind an angel with a gamer system. Now this could be explained by the author in a few ways one such way would be to reason that hp wizards are stronger because they had to face other wizards and marvel threats that normal HP wizards wouldn’t, However this story lacks that and would be much better with it. Still for a webnovel fanfic this is good quality with no grammer mistakes and a female mc, that is rare. I just wish the author would explain or respond to the confusion of the readers (also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc)

LV 15

Falsic

This story’s about what you’d expect from someone who had a fun idea in their head and decided to go with it. It’s a fun read. Just don’t take it too seriously.

LV 15

SynthWaveRider45

Already liking this just from the first few chapters. I'll be sure to throw some stones your way.

LV 13

IzIm

this story is just bad, it gets boring after 20 chapters and is terrible at plot progression. Seriously .. it’s all over the place, every chapter something new is happening and not in a good way.

LV 1

CrowMoonrise

MC is too dumb, really frustrating to read, whether its overall development of her powers ( Light Manipulation etc. ), her actions or her thought process, its just 'ugh'.

LV 5

Solrac

well the writting was good and the consept was good but the aplication wasn't optimal

LV 4

LostWizard

I have never been so confused about what to think about a book. I ended with the conclusion that it is decent and at the same time the stupidest and most disgusting story I have ever read. The Author is so stupid, he fails basic math at multiple occasions (I'm talking not even being able to count to 30) and worst of all, he and Layla (MC) share a single deteriorating brain cell. The only reason I even continue to read is because I havenever seen such a good world build before. The way he fused DxD/Marvel and other Crossovers is just perfect. Her system, if you can even call it that, is absolutely useless. It claims to give rewards but all the stats she gets are from levels, she never increased her stats herself after the first few chapters. If she wasn't so lazy and trained, she would be stronger than without the system. The items it gives aren't even a reward from the system but what she gets as a consequence of her action. Let's not even talk about how the system is a slave to higher beings. The Ancient One accessed her Inventory, something the system thought impossible, and Lady Death can just grant Layla levels and issue quests. Then there is the obvious Misandry (Hate for Men). The Author and Layla would never admit it but there are only 4+ male characters and they all only appear for a few chapters. The male characters that are important for the story are all getting genderbent and not just for harem purposes. Instead of adopting Harry Potter, we suddenly have Heather, and instead of Issei we have Isana. Let me not even get started about the men that were supposed to have romance or are married to another beautiful woman, they all suddenly become irredeemable villains. The harem is also getting out of hand. She said she didnt want a too big harem as even her heart isn't infinite but there is still no sign of an end almost 300 chapters in. I thought after she got pregnant and had the 1 year timeskip she would just be happy with her family but no, she is now increasing her harem at an even faster rate. Do I even want to talk about how she impregnated two highschool girls? She has girls in her group that are hundreds, thousands, and even as old as time but she only knocked up the minors? Layla's habit of letting her enemies escape or life for them to return is also irredeemable. Its a never ending circle that doesnt even make sense. She sometimes moves at lightspeed but when a portal appears, the council of reeds appears, take the captured reed in front of her, and declare revenge on her JUST A FEW METERS BEFORE HER, she starts screaming "Oh no, they got away". Lets also mention that the author is immune to all critics and ignores them like a champ.

LV 14

gREcOvITSIoZo

Easy to read, enjoyable and interesting. Can't wait for more! Hope it keeps updating regurarly and getting interesting as it has so far ....

LV 4

Louisery

Good its okay story there are few stupid things here and there like how most of the woman are yuri and how big mcs harem becomes, like to me only maybe number 1 and number 3 were okay and rest were litle too much, plus author adds a new universe crossover later on and there are few stupid villains but its okay

LV 13

WitherEnderfall

SHE HAS THE ORB OF Tentacle ****** HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

LV 1

Daoisti1FhcQ

Hello, is it possible to translate your work on other resources into another language? By crediting you as the author, of course. [img=рекомендую]

LV 13

Miami_XM

A fun read, Definitely AU. Some characters have certain discrepancies that make it apparent its not a super serious read, more light hearted. Definitely recommend atleast giving it a shot.

LV 4

Fu_Hua_

I just finished reading all of the currently available chapters and I have to say this book definitely managed to capture my interest to the point I finished reading everything in the span of a few hours.Good Work 👍 You now have the Approval of the Great Herrscher of Sentience!!

LV 2

Daoiste2H4aC

loved it, looking forward to more.....................................................................................................................

LV 15

Patrick_hell123

you are getting better and better at writing

LV 1

GokuLimits

Pues no se que decir más haya de que me encanta como va esta historia 100/10 y para rellenar .............................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .c. . c. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 3

god_of_the_empty

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