You clearly lack perspective beyond your own. But I won’t argue with you; not much point. Let’s agree to disagree.
For a prideful devil? No, it’s the worst thing they can experience, especially if you remove any potential for combat growth. Ex. If their physique was like Motohama
You can have them ask Neuvilette to make him a powerless human. That would be far crueler than anything else from their perspective.
It's called sarcasm.
If reasonable constructive criticism is all it takes to set someone off to where they're threatening to stop writing the story, why are you concerned? They're just looking for an excuse to stop. They could easily ignore what they don't want to see, especially when no one's throwing insults or jeers. If the author isn't happy writing (which they're clearly not), you shouldn't let them hold you emotionally hostage. Let them pursue whatever passion relaxes them on their busy schedule.
The writing is more feminine than you'd normally see with these types of works, so you may be wrong here. This doesn't come across as a dude trying to write Yuri. Doesn't mean it isn't or that there is anything wrong regardless; it's just not as offensively obvious as you make it sound.
To reinforce this point, the author has issued the 2nd (last) warning after receiving constructive criticism. They will stop writing if they get any more, so it is not an exaggeration to say it's take it or leave it.
I'm a little confused on this statement. You're asking for honest improvement items here, but when we comment inside the work with constructive criticism, you threatened to stop writing entirely out of fury. Your ask for honest feedback here may need to be revised. Otherwise, you may be creating a self-propelled situation for yourself.
I... think you should clarify what you define as nitpicking. People from different countries define it differently. What's the difference to you between healthy criticism and nitpicking capable of erasing your motivation. Excuse my candor, but are you not looking for any constructive criticism whatsoever? Authors see more than what ultimately turns up in the review pane, so maybe Im missing something, but from what I saw, there isn't anything particularly nitpicky.
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I’m curious. Is there a reason you chose ‘the fatui’? Fontaine has several organizations to choose from.
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