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Rise Of The Broken Sun

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Autor: _King_Ace

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“Dada, the sun is rising again,”

“Uh? Oh, it always rises,”

“Won’t it get weak and broken?”

“I don’t think so,”

“I wonder what happens if it gets broken?”

“Well, I think it’s going to rise,”

“What?”



Hiro wakes up on a battlefield with no memory of anything. He manages to survive but ends up extremely wounded.

Adopted by the Lu family’s patriarch, Hiro gets to have a family. A father, a mother, a sister and a grandfather.

When he meets Seraphina, a phoenix that takes him as her parent, he becomes a father. Her growth surpassed that of any phoenix.

“Wasn’t she just a four year old? When did she…?”

He became friends with Tanji, who unknown to him was living his second life after dying years into the future. Shin, a talented boy in the way of the sword and Mia, a member of Tanji’s household. Somehow she has a relation to Hiro’s past and it is by no means in a simple way.

“Long time no see, hus…”

His origin beckons him and with that comes a threat to his life and that of his new family and friends.

As time goes on Hiro’s memories slowly returns and he realizes his origin isn’t as simple as he thinks. Was it possible to be born twice? It wasn’t, right?

“It means none of these were placed in here by someone else. These two set of memories belonged to the owner of this soul space, you.”

Several great evils seek his life for reasons unknown to him. “Find Me, Before They Find You!”

When, faced with both old and new threats to his life, Hiro is determined not to let them prevent him from achieving his goals. He seeks immortality, total strength and honor to his family. He was going to get them no matter what, those were his goals.

Well, it was easier said than done.

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AnnieQuin

First Review... Yes! Well I've read through all the chapters that has been uploaded for now, and all I can say is, I'm waiting for more... And the MC is a rather interesting and weirdly funny character.

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BLACK_ALPHA

The story is interesting it had that thing of page turning which always made you wonder what happens next. Enjoys the read good job Author.

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Alex_Destro

Writing Quality is good but could be better. Not quite easy to read as people need to think or focus more before understand the content. I like the story and plot development. The start of the story similar to some RPG or fantasy game but also make it interesting. The MC has interesting personality (Some may call him Dumb). As for the World Background, it is quite interesting having some eastern power level with the touch of a little bit western culture. The setting also pretty realistic with the war and stuff though it could be improved. (Recomended for those that like fantasy story with realistic and logical stuff.) There still many thing unexplained and worth to read to find out more. It will be great if the author update more often.

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little_black_horse

The story is interesting and unique. I love it, but there are some inappropriate uses of punctuation. The character portrayal also lacks depth, so the reader doesn't feel what the character is experiencing. But overall interesting. Keep up the good work author!

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MKmanyr

Grammatical errors are minimal and the baattle scenes are interesting however I hope the author can add more details to the scenery

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The_Novel_Man

A good start it is, lots of blessings for your new novel.

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_Gie
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What can I say? Let me start with the bad. First off, there are minor errors the author should work on to better improve this story. Though they don't really affect the general point of the story. Author should work on the world background and character design too. Before I continue on the good, I would like to say there was a review I saw that talked about how this book had both the eastern power level and a bit of western ideas. To be honest I read this book because of that review. I was curious at how the author did it and I'm glad I read this book. The story is developing quite well. Sometimes you read a book and it's like it's moving too fast or too slow but this isn't like that to me. The writing quality is on an okay level to me The storyline is good, I find the main character Hiro to be strange but intriguing to follow. So far my favorite character will be Lu Dei, though he had little screen or novel time. I hope the author plans extending that in the future. Well there's another person whose actions I find strange. Ming Lu, I'm going to watch her. All in all this is good book to read and you should check it out. Don't worry, you won't regret it

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ZoeTinnah

I have only read the first two chapters but the novel is pretty good. The beginning is interesting and the character not know who was... Nice work buddy.

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ChadGuy45_

Short but funny synopsis lol, I had to read the book when I saw that. And some of the chapter titles is a bit sus, but the content is top tier, Bravo Kp, keep up the good job.

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rithik_k

read the first few chapters and its great

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joshua_jt3

The writing quality is not exactly top notch but at least it's easy to ready and has a wonderful flow. The story development is superb, even for the so little chapters that have been released (please update frequently) The story's wonderful, easy to understand though has room for improvement. Keep up the good work Ace

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mattfuncool

The story has interesting points. I give it that things seem alright, so just give in more details on things and always double-check grammar, ok

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Última versión:
Chapter 71: 71. Somewhere Between! 8 months ago

Volumen 1

  1. 1
    1. The Beginning. 1 years ago
  2. 2
    2. Call Me Hiro… Hiro! 1 years ago
  3. 3
    3. Sweet Round Balls! 1 years ago
  4. 4
    4. Stand Up, If You Don’t Want To Die. 1 years ago
  5. 5
    5. Promise? 1 years ago
  6. 6
    6. Forfeit Present Gains For Future Gain. 1 years ago
  7. 7
    7. Let Her Be. 1 years ago
  8. 8
    8. I Thought You Knew. 1 years ago
  9. 9
    9. Learning. 1 years ago
  10. 10
    10. Son Of Enji. 1 years ago
  11. 11
    11. Chance. 1 years ago
  12. 12
    12. Aiming The Stars. 1 years ago
  13. 13
    13. Bad Habit. 1 years ago
  14. 14
    14. Pride! 1 years ago
  15. 15
    15. Not An Option. 1 years ago
  16. 16
    16. Family 1 years ago
  17. 17
    17. One Enemy Less 1 years ago
  18. 18
    18. Gift 1 years ago
  19. 19
    19. A Night Of Screams. 1 years ago
  20. 20
    20. Bao Ren’s Family 1 years ago
  21. 21
    21. A Distraction 1 years ago
  22. 22
    22. Den Of Lions 1 years ago
  23. 23
    23. Acknowledging One’s Title. 1 years ago
  24. 24
    24. Not For Free 1 years ago
  25. 25
    25. Eliminating Dangers 1 years ago
  26. 26
    26. Can You Be My Younger Brother? 1 years ago
  27. 27
    27. I Love You 1 years ago
  28. 28
    28. Opportunity Comes Knocking. 1 years ago
  29. 29
    29. My Pills Can Not Be Included 1 years ago
  30. 30
    30. Useless Ores. 1 years ago
  31. 31
    31. You Want To Fight? 1 years ago
  32. 32
    32. Clear Sky Sword Technique 1 years ago
  33. 33
    33. The Cursed Son Of Zhang! 1 years ago
  34. 34
    34. August Visit 1 years ago
  35. 35
    35. Don’t Get Her Angry. 1 years ago
  36. 36
    36. From A Rich Family! 1 years ago
  37. 37
    37. I Knew It Wasn’t… 1 years ago
  38. 38
    38. Abnormal Friends 1 years ago
  39. 39
    39. I Didn’t Give Up 1 years ago
  40. 40
    40. Great Opportunity Lost. 1 years ago
  41. 41
    41. Aren’t Scared Anymore? 1 years ago
  42. 42
    42. Rue 1 years ago
  43. 43
    43. Keep Who Waiting? 1 years ago
  44. 44
    44. You Are A Boy? 1 years ago
  45. 45
    45. Turn On Others. 1 years ago
  46. 46
    46. Emperor’s Order. 1 years ago
  47. 47
    47. What Is Death? 1 years ago
  48. 48
    48. A Mother’s Love 1 years ago
  49. 49
    49. Everything We Do Matters. 1 years ago
  50. 50
    50. Legacy. 1 years ago
  51. 51
    51. I Like It 1 years ago
  52. 52
    52. Aren’t Getting Closer 1 years ago
  53. 53
    57. Dao 1 years ago
  54. 54
    53. Alchemist In Their Midst 1 years ago
  55. 55
    54. Spirit Flame. 1 years ago
  56. 56
    55. The Hands From Heaven. 1 years ago
  57. 57
    56. The Peak… 1 years ago
  58. 58
    58. Blessed With Knowledge 11 months ago
  59. 59
    59. Shaman Stage 11 months ago
  60. 60
    60. Glib Tongue 11 months ago
  61. 61
    61. The What And The What? 11 months ago
  62. 62
    62. Two Beings? 10 months ago
  63. 63
    63. Why? 10 months ago
  64. 64
    64. Nothing… 10 months ago
  65. 65
    65. Core Formation Realm 10 months ago
  66. 66
    66. Bird Of Fire 9 months ago
  67. 67
    67. Another Stirring 9 months ago
  68. 68
    68. Memories 9 months ago
  69. 69
    69. Improving Physiques 9 months ago
  70. 70
    70. I Can Do This 8 months ago
  71. 71
    71. Somewhere Between! 8 months ago

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