Naruto: The Tale of an Otsutsuki

LV 2

ANIMESHNIK_TOPCHIK

let's say it this way: 1) the translation is excellent, no doubt about it. 2) the plot and logic in the novel itself are not particularly developed (I read 137 chapters of the original). 3) this novel does not have a complicated plot, as always in Chinese fanfics there are 2 main types of writing, either the main character gives everyone a slap at first sight, and others are stunned and idolize him, or the main character is always on the edge and gives a slap purely on the reputation from his past slaps to other characters. in this fanfic, the first type. 4) mdeee, out of nowhere and without questions appeared and he immediately ate the chakra fruit, where is the logic? 5) it's annoying that in one chapter he reflects a little on the transience of mortals and himself gets romantically close to Ten Ten as much as possible according to Chinese fanfic rules. 6) Damn, and no one cares that some puppy picked up on the street easily scattered the patriarchs of the clan specializing in taijutsu in one-two? And it also gives away that after he scattered them, joining Guy's team, he showed his combat power much lower? 7) The main character has no ambitions at all, he just follows the flow/plot, in other words, he doesn't really interfere in anything unless ordered. 8) Compared to other decent fanfics (Chinese) on Naruto, this one is about below average. 9) But I can say that the translation is excellent, respect to the translator.

LV 1

DaoistbNiRsr

This is going be a hit or miss for people. It's a solid naruto fanfic. It all depends how many fics you have read before. If you are rather new to fics you will probably really enjoy this as there is solid writing. If you are jaded with the amount of naruto on webnovel then I don't think there is enough here to eat.

LV 11

Sukuna_R

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LV 4

DaoistnRqEOk

Very good, keep it up. But you already know the romantic partner you're going to give him.