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I don't know, but I don't like the mc. The writing quality is good, the mc's personality just really turn me off. Good luck with the story.
gramatica maneira, mas personagem principal muito arrogante para o meu gosto
I’d say its definitely in the top three JJK fics, the characters are well enough written and the MC has shown actual character growth and is becoming less of a Yuji copy n paste. The gamer system isn’t the focus of the plot either and the story is developing pretty good. My only problem is where the hell is Uraume and why did they get replaced by a black hair knock off
So far (chapter 19) the story is just following the plot of JJK. Sometimes humour seems out of place. Beside that, i don't like his cursed technique, strings are just boring. Translation Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 3/5
On chapter 12. Its def worth the read. Just the mc kinda annoys me. He's so far the standard shonen mc. Someone who fights to save others n stuff. His personality so far seems to be a copy n paste of yuji's. Both of them yelling at other people that they gotta save people no matter the danger. I'm hoping the author changes the mc's mindset but not getting my hopes up to much.
It is unique and is very well written. I especially liked the interactions between characters and the realistic growth of mc. Brilliant fic author-san.
I'm at chapter 14 but it's been an amazing read so far, only complaint is there's not enough chapters. Hopefully it doesn't get dropped like every other good jjk ff seems to
It's very good so far I'd read it, still perilous like original jjk. Can't wait to see the character growth the mc goes through too. The system isn't too bad either isn't instant OP growth and is similar to Solo Levelings accumulation of stats like daily trying except without loot boxes.
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A good jjk fic....I read one about shadow monarch n all but it got boring with time....this got a lot of potential....just keep posting chaps author...
Who is romance? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is more of impression after reading the first 7 chapter, the writing is good and it looks promising, give it chance we maybe on to something good.
Did the chapters disappear? I got to read chapter one, then the rest were gone. It was a good start, hope to see more soon..................
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I don't know, but I don't like the mc. The writing quality is good, the mc's personality just really turn me off. Good luck with the story.
gramatica maneira, mas personagem principal muito arrogante para o meu gosto
I’d say its definitely in the top three JJK fics, the characters are well enough written and the MC has shown actual character growth and is becoming less of a Yuji copy n paste. The gamer system isn’t the focus of the plot either and the story is developing pretty good. My only problem is where the hell is Uraume and why did they get replaced by a black hair knock off
So far (chapter 19) the story is just following the plot of JJK. Sometimes humour seems out of place. Beside that, i don't like his cursed technique, strings are just boring. Translation Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 3/5
On chapter 12. Its def worth the read. Just the mc kinda annoys me. He's so far the standard shonen mc. Someone who fights to save others n stuff. His personality so far seems to be a copy n paste of yuji's. Both of them yelling at other people that they gotta save people no matter the danger. I'm hoping the author changes the mc's mindset but not getting my hopes up to much.
It is unique and is very well written. I especially liked the interactions between characters and the realistic growth of mc. Brilliant fic author-san.
I'm at chapter 14 but it's been an amazing read so far, only complaint is there's not enough chapters. Hopefully it doesn't get dropped like every other good jjk ff seems to
It's very good so far I'd read it, still perilous like original jjk. Can't wait to see the character growth the mc goes through too. The system isn't too bad either isn't instant OP growth and is similar to Solo Levelings accumulation of stats like daily trying except without loot boxes.
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A good jjk fic....I read one about shadow monarch n all but it got boring with time....this got a lot of potential....just keep posting chaps author...
Who is romance? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is more of impression after reading the first 7 chapter, the writing is good and it looks promising, give it chance we maybe on to something good.
Did the chapters disappear? I got to read chapter one, then the rest were gone. It was a good start, hope to see more soon..................