Danmachi: I have a Simulator!

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DaoistFNur0O

The main character is obsessed with Hestia for no reason. I hope it will be fixed as the story continues ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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darknightofAnime

Harem or Non-Harem? ???????????? ?

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Zader

The Simulation system is a literal legitimate CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) story system but one with actual tangible rewards base on how well the MC does. And I gotta say that is an amazing concept that I've never seen before. I am worried about how the plot will work out as a system like this IS fascinating, but easily and quickly will/can run into "The Gamer" issue of the MC reaching a point so unbelievably powerful in such a short time that the writer HAS to railroad ways in such that the MC at least has a chance to loose/fail, and even those that are done correctly are very few in number. Or the writer just doesn't try and the story becomes nothing but wish fulfillment power fantasy that a 10-12 year old would think is the best thing since a pizza and ice cream party/birthday. Those CAN be fun once in awhile too no matter how old you get/are. The dialogue comes out a bit strange so far, with the MC literally SAYING he is a new arrival to someone and them responding by asking the MC if they are new here... And that is just one of many instances. So dialogues need re-orderings if not full rewrites. Otherwise treat it like a half CN translated story and turn part of your brain off when reading... Here is to hoping that things turn out great and looking forward to reading more, if for nothing else than because of this story's spin on a simulation system. This was written after chapter 10 (just after starting chapter 11 Rewards)

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Arc_Dragon

You are doing a good job and I just don't like the character too much but it's not ypur fault .It's too much Hestia this Hestia that but she is great legal Loli well there is Illiya from Fate who is cute but then again she is illegal in some stories .Also can you tell me the MtL Version? I like to loose my Iq quite a bit

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Defective_Angel

everything is good, the only flaw was everything that MC got from his simulation went to hestia while he IS member of Hephaestus family, and mc might or (if not) already quit and joining hestia

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Raz752

Amazing read with a different take compared to others. Looking forward to read more of this.

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Lizrock

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Mattgz

Muy buena la novela. Sigue asi. Recomiendo Fairy Tail y dxd para una simulación .............. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Trey_Jenkins_3492

I don't know who needs it but you can go to mtlarchive.com and read upwards to over 300 chapters

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Tante_Hilda

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HaremIsLifeDAO

Come back author!!! I can't stand looking for something decent to read, and only finding rubbish! You write so well man! Forget about your other stories and focus here for a bit! Please! Hahaha Congratulations on the work here!

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MythicalFanFicGod

A great read.

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guarek03

Great story. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. I'll never say no to a good danmachi fic, there aren't many................................

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Felhavon

Awesome story! Your best work so far. Keep it going!

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mickro

The story started out great and had a good premise but the progress of the MC's power was to fast and by his second simulation world Danmachi is no longer even important to the story and the future of the story would rely on him using the simulator as he is already the strongest adventurer after just 1 month and Bell hasn't even came to Orario yet. He can no longer level up in the dungeon and needs to do simulations for achievements as he is as strong as a level 7 at level 2 destroying the worldview. He also has a weird obsession with Hestia but hardly ever interacts with her. The world of Danmachi at this point is no longer even important to the story and has become a slice of life harem world for his enjoyment the only real story left is his future confrontation with Freya I guess and maybe him killing the dragon.

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Sallas

This a solid and well built story with a interesting plot.

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The_Dark_Hydrax

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H4M4T0R4

Great story, the only problem I found was the quick development of the character, despite the 154 chapters... I think it could have been developed more in the main world part, the MC has little Interaction with everyone, so in my opinion, whoever is reading feels less attached to the development of the MC.But I really like the story a lot

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HaremIsLifeDAO

It has a lot of potential! The relationship that the MC builds alongside Hephy is step by step, which is very rewarding! It's not forced... I hope the author continues, it's one of my favorite Danmachi stories!