Arc_Dragon

I will change the review when anything Makes sense .Jumping from one place to another is just ridiculous.Too much susoense and no heads or tails is not a good start .Not even a clue of why is Naruto like this and what is different should be indicated not like this mysterious.If you wanted to just skip Naruto then do it no need to scam people as the first part or what happened to Naruto is just not mentioned .Hiruzen comes and tells about his mother Hiruzen dies .How the fuck would hiruzen tell him about his father during a battle when he died . You are just making mysterious stories which will get boring .It may be early but this is nonsense .I will see how the story goes then think about improving review if any at all. Nit even Flashbacks , just doing slice of life like thinks and all that what bullshit and Naruto is philosophical .Emperor of uzumaki all that by the time you move firward you will have so much to explain as atleast now everything needed to be explained

Listen people may say I am negatice but I literally have nothing to say .You are going too fast paced and even if we see in fanfiction basis and anime basis this is really unrealistic unless its a crack fic .There are many things that is just ridiculous .A 3 year old kids no matter whoever it is cannot do stuff.This is too much crack . I am not even complaining about AU stuff you added as that can be used if you put thought to it .I suggest you read the stories you write and think a little .A spar with Hokage was the most dumbest thing I have ever seen .Its like watching Original Naruto got lot dumber and insane . He is three .Even if he reincarnated .I mean swriously even in ninja world .Do you not know somethings are not possible even as four year old? . The fic idea is not bad but come on it feels like it is really written. By a three year old child. Too much Bullshit MC . Op is fine but this is too much nonsense going around

Its because it is the same Novel.There are many novels like this which were translated halfway and left. I hope thia guya doensot do that

All chineese Novels are same whethee you start as any clan member or anyone the MC will get sharingan and wood release evntually .What a waste it had to go to getting sharigan and all that .All chineese novels Mc In anyway always gets sharingan how pathetic can these peooles's brain be .I mean it was a good premiss and started well then all went dowbhill with him getting sharingan some how I gues its blood succession limit and blah blah .I am ranting the author not the translator here mind you.! Does the author doesnot know how to communicate .In most CN novels Mcs are just monologing and acting cold or smile like sunshine and handsome notbing else .I nean how delusional to be that MC is doing all this .He has no interactions with others and he is doing whatever he wants in leaf village ? What nonsense