In the Marvel Universe as Wonder Woman's boyfriend

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XElenea

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.

LV 4

Lion_Comet

Starts out good but after chapter 1 it suddenly went too Cringe where he is suddenly a SECRET assassin and got the venom symbiote... His sudden backstory reveal was just too much...

LV 4

LastGod

I can't really blame the person who is writing this as this is just a translation. But it is a big reason i dislike most chinese fanfic. The first problem. Too many crossovers you already have a DC character in Marvel. But that wasn't enough. so you throw in both "Wanted" and "John Wick." So many different worlds together are going to cause story bloat.Next, instead of coming off calm and cool, the MC either comes off as petrified in front of Dianna or like a whiny child with a gun and no consequences when he's out in the world. Next, sadly, despite the best efforts of the author, the chinese nationalism is heavy right off the bat complaining cause people are racists against him. When the chinese are super racists themselves, and hate most Americans and Japanese and Taiwanese and black people, etc...

LV 4

Azathoth2

harem??? hope not

LV 1

GodOfLight

You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up Writing Quality 5/5 Updating Stability 5/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 world background 1/5

LV 13

Josh_Richie

This is disturbing on so many levels. I came here to read a Marvel FF with wonder woman as the heroine, not a combination of so many American movies that had nothing to do with Marvel

LV 4

StressOwl

Title is misleadingit's about some guy being an assassin with venom. wonder woman isn't really there much and could easily be replaced with a card board cutout of any woman.It's really cringy.

LV 13

The_Puffer

An "assassin" simp MC that explains his powers to his gf the first time he gets caught instead of trying to find a way to recover from the incident and with toxic relationship with Wonder women that uses the lasso of truth on MC because she doesnt trusts her 2 year boyfriend.

LV 5

Darth_Ullyses

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LV 1

Daoist367883

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LV 4

Henova

While the story is interesting and the ide behind the story is great, the author has incorporated too many elements into the story that it feels overly complicated to read. While I can't blame the author since it seems to be an MTL, the grammar is bad and gets worse as you read. There are times when I can no longer ubderstand the scene since the choice of words seem out of place in the context but would make perfect sense in chinese. I hope the author would be open to havin a beta to revise the story since the idea is really good just poorly translated.

LV 3

Kaba_Baka

only readed 60chapters then I dropped. the amount of disrespect was a little too much for me.

LV 1

AlastorGF

Nunca dejen un reseña de 2 estrellas pero este fanfic se lo merece, empieza contando como diana sabe que es un asesino pero no le molesta porque no mata gente inocente..... pero mas adelante le importa una mierd quien es inocente o no, solo busca beneficio y me dio sinceramente asco lo hipócrita que se convirtió

LV 3

lopez_lop

links to the mtl or the raw fanfiction please+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

LV 14

GoldenKing_

No Harem 🙏🏽 Wonder Woman All He Needs 😁.

LV 4

Arbestos

You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up

LV 1

Oleg_Nikitin

Спасибо за вашу работу и необычное смешение историй. Буду ждать продолжения. Желаю творческих успехов и удачи в ваших начинаниях. Пусть фантазия не покидает вас как можно дольше.

LV 4

TharinduIndunil

[How Many Chapters has This in Raw ??][Yes! My Grammar Suck❤❤]

LV 14

Darkph30nix

Can’t wait till the updates have caught up with where I left off on pattern, it’s a shame I haven’t been able to ccontinug lately due to my lack of cash