Pokemon: A New Adventure Of Ash

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Dark_PersonJJ

Ash Harem story who is also better treiner i will give it a try.

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TheAngels

This novel was fine until movie 3, the author promised too much and the only thing he did was to make "fate" prevent Ash from remembering the plot, that he cannot move at crucial moments and marry his mother Delia with a random guy justifying it and even killed the random guy's wife to marry him to Delia, It was pretty disappointing and probably a lot of people dropped out in that arc including me.

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LuciFer_Kardam

Bro this is a harem, right? RIGHT!? I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is! I hope it is!

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TFH

a hârêm and no segs/lemon chapters... whats the point!? its like trying to grow plants without water!!!

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Jatin_Gowda

the orginal name of novel on mtl because good for a translation novel

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Humbuub

meh, everything seems forced. The MC is too sleazy for me.

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AstralNinja420

Wrong names for the the Kanto region except maybe pallet town

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Christofer_Jose

A escrita tem alguns erros ainda, os personagens se apaixonam muito rápido( ou é assim nesse mundo), as batalhas são um pouco rápidas demais. O resto é bom. Tem discord novo? O que tá aí mostra como inválido.

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SupremeEgolist

Well, I don’t know how you fixed each chapter but it is still wrong in the end. So, try better I guess.

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Superninja4591

All I want is for ash to get and keep his greninja from kalos I beg you author.

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Cordellswitzer0

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Dark_PersonJJ

Heh, thare is so few Ash FF out thare who have regural updates, most of them are updated once in month or even more then that.

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Aztfort

I loved it, a good story, I hope you don't cancel it

LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

Cool story, i hope Ash will reach Finals and wins, even if he lose at the end to the one of the Elite Four it will be still great if he wins Indigo Pokemon Leaguewhen he is still a rookie Pokemon Treiner. Such victory will give him lots of fame and will make him far more popular, and others will recognize him on the spot when they see him, as a rookie treiner who won Indigo League.

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Dark_PersonJJ

I hope Ash will put her in her place, and will not let her boss him around.

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Nap_Abao

is there mega evolution here?...........

LV 2

Alex102022

Uno de los pocos fan-fic de pokemon que me gustan. la historia es muy buena y entretenida. Espero que la sigas escribiendo y publicando. Espero tu proxima actualización.

LV 14

Arch_Tysonoo

Bro, the translation isn't that great, please work on it. There several things like Characters who I don't even recognise but later I got to know that they were the characters I knew but with Spanish names. There are even some Spanish lines mixed. PLEASE!! The story is good so please update your translation quality and do some research.

LV 5

taticus

This is good for a translation novel. though rough around the edges, it's not bad. I'd say it's a good simple read.