Thanks :)
Both have a 15 years in appearance and more than 60 in reality...
If Emma and Olive were beauties superior to any supermodel, Bronwyn was definitely not far behind.
Book&Literature · Bloodnight
Child body? For starters, in this fic this girl have 15 in appearance and more than 60 years in reality, so I don't understand your question.
Bronwyn had black hair, extremely thin arms and a purple dress that enhanced her attractive figure. The only "bad" if we can put it that way, are the breasts. They were almost as flat as an ironing board, but her beauty made up for her lack of breasts.
Book&Literature · Bloodnight
Yeah, it can be a confusion, you have the reason but don't worry in the future I won't do the same mistakes, thanks :)
"Don't worry, nothing will happen to you, Emma is more talkative than other thing" – Millard said.
Book&Literature · Bloodnight
I didn’t want to give myself a review because I’m not exactly a fan of doing that. However I have been forced to do so by a gentleman who is rather heavy with regard to history. I will say it clearly because he already knows who is and I do not want to go into details. This is not mind control and I do not censor bad opinions, I only censor his because it makes no sense, but if you think that this story is not worth it for a valid reason, then I don’t care. But that gentleman or lady (no idea), is constantly saying that this story has Mind Control, something I don’t agree with at all. Also, I’m not censoring anything, I’m just letting each person who reads it judge whether or not it is Mind Control, without further ado and if you want to check if I am censuring the bad reviews or not, you can go to my other fics and see it by yourself if there are or not bad reviews, in my other fics are the proof if you don't believe me. If you, who is reading it right now believes that this fic is not worth, I invite you to give your most sincere opinion on it and I will not censor anything. I only ask that the reviews make sense, nothing more. And finally I would like to leave a message to the person who does not stop being a pain. Normally I do not eliminate comments from anyone and if you do not believe me you can see check it my other fics and you will see that there are opinions of all kinds, so I ask you please and with all the respect of the world you already stop or I will continue reporting you.
In the film yes but in the books no
Emma: Fire Peculiarity. Olive: Float Peculiarity. It's simple and I describe it at the beggining of the story and very good.
Olive: Float Peculiarity Emma: Fire Peculiarity An I only made Bronwyn a little older but with a similar appaerance with film one, I am not confusing nothing.
My ego? Sorry but I only want to people to judge by their self if this a mind control or not, I accept criticism but not about something that isn’t true and above all I didn’t blame you so don’t cross the line. If you want to write this review then go ahead but wait until this fic have 70 at least, don’t judge it only with this few chapters. I don’t like to report anybody so please don’t talk me like that again, thanks.
Yeah, it can be but remember that this fic is trying to recreate the original story from the first three books so I can't do it that. But that doesn't mean that you are saying won't happen. It's only that you'll have to wait a lot until this happen. And if you're thinking that I'll only recreate the three first books... you're are wrong. After I finish the first three books, I'm preparing a new story completely new that you'll be crazy about that. Believe me. It'll will be better than the original story and with a better end. New characters, new misteries and new enemies. I won't say anymore because that is enough spoiler.
Then, I turned off the phone and lay down in bed to wait for the system's response, as it was time to receive my rewards.
A Peculiar very Peculiar (Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children)
Book&Literature · Bloodnight