A ghost within my heart

LV 2

Tangerqueen

Woahhh I really like this!!!! I'm actually amazed at how smoothly it read, and I could really follow both their emotions and physical (or lack thereof) state as the situation unfolded. I just wanted to say that I was honesty kind of mislead by the cover tho ahahah (so when I actually started reading, I was in for a pleasant surprise)

LV 3

Biva

The plot of story seems quite interesting. The beautiful lie and turn of events draws me to read more of. I wonder what will happen to them. Will they reincarnate or wander as ghosts? Waiting for more updates.

LV 2

Sneakycat098

Read till chapter 14. This novel is amazing! And characters are really well described according to me. There were a few editing and grammatical mistakes, but after re-reading it again, author can correct them easily. The flow of reading can be enhanced using accurate connecting sentences. Also, the tags don't really relate to story, atleast upto the chapters I've read so far. Apart from these, I would really like to highlight how interesting the storyline is, there are ghosts, telekinesis, possession and what not. It was fun reading this novel

LV 2

Ishaisa

Keep up the good work author. The synopsis is great and I feel hooked to the story just by reading the beginning. The characters and plots are amazing.

LV 12

Empzze

Great work author, interesting plot, it's different, and I like both the cover and the synopsis too, I just started reading but I can tell that this story has a lot of potentials so I'm rooting for you. keep up the good work

LV 1

Little_me1

It is a nice story. Interesting so far I’ve read till the fifth chapter as I give this review but I feel like it could be better in terms of the story construction but the idea and wording is really good. You guys should give it a chance it is nice

LV 12

ZeroX0666

Great story, love the main character and I enjoy how the author tries so hard to make the plot interesting. The writing is also quite well done, the characters are all interesting, and I look forward to more of it.

LV 4

RomanceFanatic028

The starting was interesting. I read liked it but you need to work on your writing style. It is very hard to connect with the characters. But you can work on it. Except this, i don't find anything wrong with the novel. The plot is amazing and i would love to keep reading. So keep it up.

LV 1

Winnie_jazella1

You story has a good plot and it is well thought of. I encourage you to think outside the box with words. This will help you in the long run as it will enable your readers to feel and relate better to your characters. You seem to be using a mixture of Eastern and western forms of paragraphing. I advice you to stick to one. I have really high hopes for this book.All the best.

LV 1

GMSJakers

The sypnosis and cover is great, and the story is amazing on its basis of idea and wording. In the way the story is built up could use some work, but its good.