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I loved this story but it would be nice if he got mai and azula to like him also[img=coins]please get them pleassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssse
Pls bring this back from the infernal depths of the deep a abyss and show us a worthy avatar story
It ain't boring and the plot moves along at a good clip. The visuals are good and the humor comes thru clearly. All in all a good read. I hope the author has time to keep updating this work.
God bless you Jordinio and your unlimited fanfic powers, as always I will just give 5 stars before reading, after so many masterpieces I will be a fool do doubt this one's quality
Hands down the Best Avatar fan fic on this app excited to see where it will go but it hasn’t been updated in a while.
C'mon man 10 months and no new chapter? this is a good book you should continue it. Is this dropped or something? Still loved it but for a idea where he travels different worlds it needs quite a lot of chapters to progress but there is none here. There shall come a time where you will finish a book
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love it keep up the good work also this is a good power system. t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t t
This person makes such great novels but then drops all of them...I really wanted to continue reading this and the DBZ one but here I am....why, author..why
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I love this book, please don't abandon it. This is the only ATLA fanfic I've seen with Ty Lee as a love intrest, and how good the characters are to their original counterparts. Author, you're doing a great job on this book, only small peeve I have is the odd grammar error here and there, but overall this is an amazing work
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Only 1 chapter and this is probably the most Interesting ATLA fan-fic i ever start reading. Fırst DBZ and now ATLA. This guy is on a roll with original and GOOD content i can’t help but reload my page every few minutes to see if there is any new updates. I really hope you continue doing these amazing piece of works. 👍❤️
Solo 1 capítulo y este es probablemente el fan-fic de ATLA más interesante que he empezado a leer. Primero DBZ y ahora ATLA. Este tipo está en racha con contenido original y BUENO. No puedo evitar recargar mi página cada pocos minutos para ver si hay nuevas actualizaciones. Realmente espero que continúes haciendo estos increíbles trabajos.
this is the only story in webnovel that made me want to write a good review. there are romantic moments which i like because they are not cringe and overly used. decent fight scenes, a good female lead. overall this story is really good. i ussually never give good reviws cause my standarts are a bit high.
Its a Avatar fic thats all I got say I like how the story is progressing and I hope that he gets Azula because she is best fire nation girl.
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buen personaje y buena interaccion entre los personajes, buen desarrollo de la trama, pero le falta desafios, duelos y habilidades especiales, creo que como la trama esta mas orientado a the gamer deberia haber mas desafios , el personaje se fortalece luchando o desarrollando nuevas habilidades, y de esas habilidades se desarrollan otra mas, incluso puede romper los limites del mundo y desarrollar algo que no deberia existir, por ejemplo, aura, haki o nen. ahora el problema que mas tiene la trama es en que direccion va las relaciones del mc, si el formara un harem o si se acostara con otras mujeres, o tendra parejas temporales, dependiendo de que tipo de relacion va a tener, se puede determinar en como sera el mc en otros mundos, por ejemplo, si es harem, se debe determinar una cantidad, ver que tipo de mundo es, luego determinar el tipo genero dominante, luego ver el tipo de mujeres que lo acompañaran, su edad y su utilidad, y sobre todo el momento en que esta de la trama. ahora lo mas importante, el mc es un idiota directo, esto hace que el mc solo pueda ir a mundos shonen debido a que es tipo de mundo donde el podra dominar mejor, quizas uno de sobrenaturales, artes marciales, fantacia o guerra. si lo mandas a un mundo de cultivo solo haras que el mc se pierda a si mismo, debido a que sus estadisticas solo lo confundiran mas de lo usual cuando se compare con el cultivo de ese mundo, luego esta el hecho que la gente en esos mundos son muy miopes y los que no, son demasiado op o muy complicados
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The fact that this story came back is possibly the best thing this year and i can clearly see the improvement in writing from the old chapters, I really want to see where this is going
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It started being quite an interesting novel. A fun read really.... Until the author went offroad 😒 It all started going downhill the moment MC ran away with Tylee. After that happened all the chapters become bland and boring 😑 Really quite a shame...
Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best But I love Jordinio too❤️
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Pls bring this back from the infernal depths of the deep a abyss and show us a worthy avatar story
It ain't boring and the plot moves along at a good clip. The visuals are good and the humor comes thru clearly. All in all a good read. I hope the author has time to keep updating this work.
God bless you Jordinio and your unlimited fanfic powers, as always I will just give 5 stars before reading, after so many masterpieces I will be a fool do doubt this one's quality
Hands down the Best Avatar fan fic on this app excited to see where it will go but it hasn’t been updated in a while.
C'mon man 10 months and no new chapter? this is a good book you should continue it. Is this dropped or something? Still loved it but for a idea where he travels different worlds it needs quite a lot of chapters to progress but there is none here. There shall come a time where you will finish a book
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This person makes such great novels but then drops all of them...I really wanted to continue reading this and the DBZ one but here I am....why, author..why
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I love this book, please don't abandon it. This is the only ATLA fanfic I've seen with Ty Lee as a love intrest, and how good the characters are to their original counterparts. Author, you're doing a great job on this book, only small peeve I have is the odd grammar error here and there, but overall this is an amazing work
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Spoiler enthüllen Only 1 chapter and this is probably the most Interesting ATLA fan-fic i ever start reading. Fırst DBZ and now ATLA. This guy is on a roll with original and GOOD content i can’t help but reload my page every few minutes to see if there is any new updates. I really hope you continue doing these amazing piece of works. 👍❤️
Solo 1 capítulo y este es probablemente el fan-fic de ATLA más interesante que he empezado a leer. Primero DBZ y ahora ATLA. Este tipo está en racha con contenido original y BUENO. No puedo evitar recargar mi página cada pocos minutos para ver si hay nuevas actualizaciones. Realmente espero que continúes haciendo estos increíbles trabajos.
this is the only story in webnovel that made me want to write a good review. there are romantic moments which i like because they are not cringe and overly used. decent fight scenes, a good female lead. overall this story is really good. i ussually never give good reviws cause my standarts are a bit high.
Its a Avatar fic thats all I got say I like how the story is progressing and I hope that he gets Azula because she is best fire nation girl.
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The fact that this story came back is possibly the best thing this year and i can clearly see the improvement in writing from the old chapters, I really want to see where this is going
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Spoiler enthüllen It started being quite an interesting novel. A fun read really.... Until the author went offroad 😒 It all started going downhill the moment MC ran away with Tylee. After that happened all the chapters become bland and boring 😑 Really quite a shame...
Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best Haroldinho is the best But I love Jordinio too❤️
Author if you ever read this please continue.