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Nerfherder69
Well, first, thanks for writing a chapter and this work. Buuut, HP was born in 1980. If you are changing it to fit the story then I apologize for bringing it up.
Nerfherder69
Too stilted and OOC on Fury. He was way to soft on his sale. Alex came across as too controlled and Fury would have crushed that prior to doing the sale.
Nerfherder69
It ain't boring and the plot moves along at a good clip. The visuals are good and the humor comes thru clearly. All in all a good read. I hope the author has time to keep updating this work.
Once again, thank you for the chapter. You shucked a little girls soul to make a flesh golem?!? Hardcore... Just saying, you do know there are more deserving targets, say Deatheaters! Sigh, nice to see this Harry ain't a simp, but still....
The Original Harry Potter
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