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Has this been dropped? I was really enjoying it so I hope you’re doing ok and continue the story! Ty Lee is best girl!!!
The story is very well written here builds on existing avatar world and she was one of the most interesting characters in avatar to begin with and I love to see her explored as a character I wish to see this novel continued
Ok I gotta say it! I loooooveee ur story and yup totally understandable that Azula wouldglitch the sistem I mean she does kinda of glitch hwr family too. I'm waiting 4 more read ya
really enjoying this novel/fanfic i look forward to future chapters assuming this isnt dropped ([img=update]) and i just want to say mc has good taste in waifus ty lee was always my fav as well and im happy to read about her adventure with the mc a happy ty lee is the best ty lee [img=recommend]
Hello author san can u please update chapters , it really been pain killing 5 months have passed please update chapters please don't drop such good as there is no such good novel of avatar active nowdays so please update chapters
its has really good story and charachters but i need more to reeeeead but it hasnt been updated in 4 months 68658583726373737484848485858
Uno de los mejores fanfic de avatar, la calidad de los personajes y el desarrollo del mc increíble, además me gusta eso de que que no abuses tanto del sistema
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Great story. I like how it goes at its own pace but never really slows down showing the character exploring the world he’s in in depth before rushing off to the next world. Can’t wait for the upcoming dragon meeting
This is an amazing novel and it is perfect in every aspect exept that it seems to have been droped i really hope that the auther comes back to develop it further
More!! More!!! I want more! This my favorite Avatar fanfic. Please continue to update more chapters author! I love the Ty Lee illustration by the way!
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I want more chapters. needs more than 140 characters...dhjdbdjxjsnxhdjsnsbxhdhsjndbshsjsjdbdvdjdksndbdhdjdjndbdhdjsjsbdhdjsjsjdbdhdjsjdbhdjd
Legitimately a good read. Also an interesting look at a Gamer plot. A little disappointed on the skipping of Azula (Azula is best, come fight me) for the ditzy chick, but both options are better than Mai. My one complaint is you setting this up for what looks like a Jump-chain. Not a fan of those... Also, the update's for this? Or the lack thereof? Yea, not a fan of that at *all*.
i already read the DBZ one so i thought i would look at your other fanfics, the moment i saw Ty Lee i added it to my library so i hope you pair up with her.(i dont think i will need to put anything other than 5stars so keep up the amazing work)
I really love the direction this is going. Really want more. Not many Avatar fanfics and this is my favourite, I reccomend it. I feel the characters have been captured accurately. I have seen the series and read some of the comics for side stories, I'm interested if they would be included. The MC development is going well, I like how had interest in Azula too (I love the crazy *****, I'd choose both, so hot but crazy). Now that the MC is separate I wonder if the world would be opened up more to places not canon too, the world is a big place.
This was at first for the beginning 20 or so chapters a solid fanfic a mc that had a good personality a desire to further himself and his interactions and the depictions of how others reacted to him were honest and realistic. Then the massive trainwreck of this fanfic took place at first he treated others well and was confident and cool headed, but then he became arrogant and condescending to a staggering degree out of nowhere. He treated others that he showed curiously to like they where trash or beneath him or acted out of character to how he was previously just giving away future knowledge to people even if it wasnt relevant overall this fanfic started strong but the author has disappointed me. But there is no denying his talent for writing i think maybe this is just his inexperience but i have no idea what happened to the story after that still this author has some good stuff and im hoping he can fix this and turn it all around.
I wish to see the story move to at least the defeat of ozai, I would be immensely grateful for that and it would greatly please me.
Will there be more of this book I hope there will be it's very interesting I love the relationship aspect In this book it's very compelling I want more from this author
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i love the story but these recent chapters have been kind of boring to me, too much fluff. im not really a fan of too much romance so i've taken a break and the story so that i wouldn't start to get bored of it. but other than that i really enjoy the novel, im still excited for when mc starts to travel to other worlds
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Love it please continue Nyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-he-he
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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Has this been dropped? I was really enjoying it so I hope you’re doing ok and continue the story! Ty Lee is best girl!!!
The story is very well written here builds on existing avatar world and she was one of the most interesting characters in avatar to begin with and I love to see her explored as a character I wish to see this novel continued
Ok I gotta say it! I loooooveee ur story and yup totally understandable that Azula wouldglitch the sistem I mean she does kinda of glitch hwr family too. I'm waiting 4 more read ya
really enjoying this novel/fanfic i look forward to future chapters assuming this isnt dropped ([img=update]) and i just want to say mc has good taste in waifus ty lee was always my fav as well and im happy to read about her adventure with the mc a happy ty lee is the best ty lee [img=recommend]
Hello author san can u please update chapters , it really been pain killing 5 months have passed please update chapters please don't drop such good as there is no such good novel of avatar active nowdays so please update chapters
its has really good story and charachters but i need more to reeeeead but it hasnt been updated in 4 months 68658583726373737484848485858
Uno de los mejores fanfic de avatar, la calidad de los personajes y el desarrollo del mc increíble, además me gusta eso de que que no abuses tanto del sistema
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Great story. I like how it goes at its own pace but never really slows down showing the character exploring the world he’s in in depth before rushing off to the next world. Can’t wait for the upcoming dragon meeting
This is an amazing novel and it is perfect in every aspect exept that it seems to have been droped i really hope that the auther comes back to develop it further
More!! More!!! I want more! This my favorite Avatar fanfic. Please continue to update more chapters author! I love the Ty Lee illustration by the way!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I want more chapters. needs more than 140 characters...dhjdbdjxjsnxhdjsnsbxhdhsjndbshsjsjdbdvdjdksndbdhdjdjndbdhdjsjsbdhdjsjsjdbdhdjsjdbhdjd
Legitimately a good read. Also an interesting look at a Gamer plot. A little disappointed on the skipping of Azula (Azula is best, come fight me) for the ditzy chick, but both options are better than Mai. My one complaint is you setting this up for what looks like a Jump-chain. Not a fan of those... Also, the update's for this? Or the lack thereof? Yea, not a fan of that at *all*.
i already read the DBZ one so i thought i would look at your other fanfics, the moment i saw Ty Lee i added it to my library so i hope you pair up with her.(i dont think i will need to put anything other than 5stars so keep up the amazing work)
I really love the direction this is going. Really want more. Not many Avatar fanfics and this is my favourite, I reccomend it. I feel the characters have been captured accurately. I have seen the series and read some of the comics for side stories, I'm interested if they would be included. The MC development is going well, I like how had interest in Azula too (I love the crazy *****, I'd choose both, so hot but crazy). Now that the MC is separate I wonder if the world would be opened up more to places not canon too, the world is a big place.
This was at first for the beginning 20 or so chapters a solid fanfic a mc that had a good personality a desire to further himself and his interactions and the depictions of how others reacted to him were honest and realistic. Then the massive trainwreck of this fanfic took place at first he treated others well and was confident and cool headed, but then he became arrogant and condescending to a staggering degree out of nowhere. He treated others that he showed curiously to like they where trash or beneath him or acted out of character to how he was previously just giving away future knowledge to people even if it wasnt relevant overall this fanfic started strong but the author has disappointed me. But there is no denying his talent for writing i think maybe this is just his inexperience but i have no idea what happened to the story after that still this author has some good stuff and im hoping he can fix this and turn it all around.
I wish to see the story move to at least the defeat of ozai, I would be immensely grateful for that and it would greatly please me.
Will there be more of this book I hope there will be it's very interesting I love the relationship aspect In this book it's very compelling I want more from this author
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Spoiler enthüllen i love the story but these recent chapters have been kind of boring to me, too much fluff. im not really a fan of too much romance so i've taken a break and the story so that i wouldn't start to get bored of it. but other than that i really enjoy the novel, im still excited for when mc starts to travel to other worlds
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Love it please continue Nyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-he-he
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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