Naruto: Of Bone and Ice

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Yutu

This story is great. I love that there is a well written Naruto fanfic that does not revolve around Konoha. The character although powerful does seem possible.

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Omipotent_reader

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Yuri_yuri

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DogeLuvReadin

This is a good book im pretty sure i saw this on FanFiction.Net and im pretty sure this is the same author, if it is this story hasn’t been updated for months so either this author is hoping to continue the story or their just trying to get more fans. This book is ok kinda slow updates but its a good story to read if you h e nothing to do. This story is just a part of the many Ok naruto stories.

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Enigmation

Reviewed as of chp35: Grammar is alright, however quite a few spelling mistakes and liberal use of quotation marks instead of apostrophes in their intended context causes some confusion. Thankfully the sentences are still readable. Plotwise, it's interesting and the author has some good ideas. It is merely the execution of said ideas are at best average. Perhaps this can be a point of improvement for the author. Character wise, the MC's abilities are interesting to read about, both kekkai genkais are powerful and offer some creative battle scenes. The problem is that the MC's personality is abit jarring. While reading the beginning chps, the MC seemed cold, ruthless and pretty much an ass. But suddenly he cares more about his colleagues than a woman(his mom) who took care of him for years, risked life and more for him to protect but he doesn't care about her. That's fine, I can suspend my disbelief as maybe he's an unsympathetic character with no real connection to anyone who is starting to open up. But suddenly he also cares about random teammates that he just met and that's just jarring. His personality switch was just too jarring and given no monologue for the reader to see the process of his change. Also the author writes him(maybe unintentionally) as someone who panics quite a fair bit. I'm not entirely sure but I assume it's cause the author wants to write a scene with drama but again, the execution falls flat. He isn't even a normal ninja but for some reason has these moments of utter panic. Confusion, worry, frustration etc are normal emotions but panic from someone who was trained and has not even use his full abilities in a fight seems ridiculous. Now the side characters are neither here nor there, they are simply side characters. Like how the MC acted before, I find no connection nor am I invested in any of them. Unfortunately, some of the focus on their fights are fine but sometimes lengthened too much for my liking(tbh I skipped some of the side char fights because like I said no connection or investment on the reader's side, we have no time to build it up, we are simply shown their MC's teammates before jumping into fight scenes that in the grand scheme of things don't really matter). I believe the author can definitely make some improvement on the execution of character development and their inner monologues. Give us more details on their aspirations, short backgrounds or even their connections to other characters. For updating stability, it seems reasonable. Now world background, it's Naruto, it ain't super deep but definitely more than good enough. I like how the author started the MC in a different village other than Konoha for once. Thanks author for sharing the story. This review isn't to bash but to critique it a little in hopes that it might be useful to you. Please continue to write and improve!

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3PoundsOfRice

If you are really the owner of this fanfic and not an impostor, you could publish a statement on fanfiction.net, saying that they are the same person? I'm sorry if it's really you, but I'm doing it just in case, I don't feel right reading something that can be stolen from someone else. Maybe I'm a little paranoid, but it wouldn't be the first time it happens, and I find it suspicious that you only publish chapters here, when the story started on fanfiction.net

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Anas_AsBEIY

Good story embodied in the hidden fog village and has two Kiki Genkai has a good relationship with many people there are many original characters developed a new combat style

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sage_of_balance

this is a great story, the author did a great job taking the played out naruto verse and giving it his own spin. I truly enjoy reading it, it has a consistent-ish updating schedule and well proportioned chapters. over all a great read.

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Mitsuki_Maki

I loved it, it was truly interesting how he changed a lot of plots and I really enjoyed how he never met the main cast or befriending naruto, not that I hate that its just really common for the oc to be born into konoha either with a family or in an orphanage which gets boring after a period of time, so once again I give my regards to the author.

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1Shadow_Monarch1

This is one of the best Naruto fanfic on web novel if not the best. The mc isn't from the hidden leaf he doesn't have some dumbass system, cheat eyes (sharingan) or the god eyes (rinnegan) or some cheat ass ability granted by some god he just took what he had trained and become a badass it's just simply amazing just read it. Only problem is the shakey update schedule and even that's getting fixed.

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Tatsumi810

In the overall, it's a good novel if the author work on the character and writing quality. I recommended this novel to every fan of Shinobu world.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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tb1304

Great fic. How often do we get updates? .... ...... ..... ..... ..... ..... ji n join e dwj dhwjnjsan ionwdoanon ojdwnaonon jdnwono. ndwaonon

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Hyuga_Tobirama

One of the best Naruto stories I have read defo top 5 and the story still has so much left to give. The author is definitely a very talented writer and story teller. Great work author san I can’t wait to see where you go with this story and other stoies you write.

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TinyTank

Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]

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FishermanCantSwim

i cant say anything, just look at the star, u will never be dissapointed ....................................................................................................................................

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Zwelton

pretty decent .............................................................................................................................

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RandomSwordsThief

The best story that I have ever read so far. New environment rather than the cliche of being reborn in Konoha. Author-san did a lot of reading because the timeline is as good as it can be! No overused Kekkei Genkai and good referencing to historical events in the series. The main character does not follow canon and does all he can do for his village. He does not act on impulses, aka not dumb as naruto. Updates aren't as frequent as I would have liked, but they are still there. You can't expect such a masterpiece written fast. There is a lot of thinking and planning done before each chapter. I can't recommend it enough.