One Piece: Path to Power

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Paradox_

My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.

LV 7

Melshan

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Waifu Boa Hancock

LV 1

Harvez

The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.

LV 14

Dave_Guest

A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.

LV 3

SOSboa

Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.

LV 2

schizocat

An utterly unnecessary rewrite. The author took a one year hiatus in order to organize everything and rewrite. The previous one was already pretty good, the author could've just gradually improved their writing and the quality of the story by releasing chapters regularly. However, they said they wanted some time to rewrite everything because they wanted the whole book to be consistent in its quality. The result? This ridiculous... thing? Honestly, I'm incredibly disappointed since this was one of my favorite fanfics and the previous one certainly managed to tug at my emotional strings, but this one isn't doing it at all. The incorrect use of adjectives and certain verbs isn't helping with the immersion, the characters that were properly fleshed out in the previous writing weren't even fleshed out properly (e.g. Whitebeard vs Borealis), the world-building is worse compared to the previous one, and the story development and pacing is all over the place, it feels like you don't know what they'll do next (not in a good way) and since everthing just happens all of a sudden without a proper build up or suspense, the story ends up feeling lackluster compared to the previous one, a shadow of its former self. To conclude, this is a rewrite that turned out for the worse. WAY WORSE. If you expect this'll be as good as the previous one, just read something else and save your time.

LV 13

Donflamingo1304

The best onde piece fic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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nacht

i am tired reading cliche of mc parents died, i thought this story will be different since author said that he hated weak mc parents but it seems it's my misunderstanding what the author mean.

LV 3

sari_saarinen

asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered

LV 2

MChabb

I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art, author-sama. SUBARASHI!!!

LV 5

UchihaZenn

This is the best one piece fanfic I've ever read, haha ​​I'm tired of readers who always say harsh words or negative words and many are due to their comments, many fanfics that I like are dropped. I hope they understand the many writers who earn nothing just to entertain readers to the point of racking their brains to write a good chapter. Just because of the genre or nature of mc's characters many flock to encourage other readers to pressure the author because they don't like the content of the story, please man if you don't like it don't read it and if you want a fanfic story according to your thoughts write your own fanfic and see the reactions of the people readers who read your writing so that you feel the feelings of the writers when you comment negatively. (By google translate)

LV 11

Austin_5620

this is my favorite one piece fanfiction. LMAO99 and DaoOfEternity are lying thiefs DaoOfEternity is really impressive being able to type while in a coma while the huge idiot LMAO99 has by paradox😂 on the cover of his "amazing" and "original" fanfic.

LV 5

The_Tube

I CAME FROM YOUR OTHER BOOK AND WHEN I SAW THIS ONE I IMMEDIATELY ADDED TO MY LIBRARY AND READ IT!!! THE STORY BACKGROUND IS ALSO REALLY INTERESTING!!! HOPE THIS TURNS OUT TO BE A SUCCESS!!! AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! IF YOU CAN PLIZZZ UPDATE REGULARY OR FREQUENTLY!!!

LV 13

1stZenitsu_Zoldyck

Don't take this review too seriously. I only read 5 chapters before dropping this. The MC sucks. He is one of those whiner/melodramatic type protagonists "who just want a peaceful life, and blah blah blah ." He knew he was in the One Piece world and how dangerous that world is. Luckily, there was a devil literally in a tree right next to him, but he said, "Nah." He said Nah for years because "who knows what abilities it might give him." That's kinda of understandable, but come on, bro. If you don't wanna risk getting a dumb ability at least freaking train, try to awaken your haki or something. You know how powerful people in the One Piece can get just through training, so why don't you? when pirates inevitably attacked his island and killed his mother, I said, "Good! this sighing bustard deserves it. " What kind of moron transmigrator doesn't know that to have a peaceful life, you gotta become the strongest in the world first. 😤 So yeah, I didn't like this fic, but a lot of people apparently do, so it's cool. 😎

LV 3

Vahvel

One of, if not THE best One Piece fanfic I have had the pleasure to read. The idea and timeline setting at the start of the novel is new and interesting, the characters are well fleshed out, the devil fruit is interesting and the story progression and pacing is good and well thought out. The grammar is good, and I rarely notice any mistakes. Also has a good update schedule. I have no other words than that it's an amazing story. If you enjoy the One Piece world then this is a must read. 5/5.

LV 4

AsDarkAsBlack

Trash leech from DaoOfEternity __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 1

Demons_Ki

i never gave a book a 1 star but is not as good as the last one so im out good luck tho. .-.

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The_Crimson_Abyss

This has been one of the best One piece FF. However to my immeasurable disappointment it is being stolen by vulgar theif like DaoOfEternity.