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A boy gets an unusual system and worlds change.
Watch as he explore worlds and make friends all over and gets a family of his own.
Harem. Multicross.
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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionthe last novel was a lot better. In this one, I feel like the Mc is a side character. It's like he exists just so the other characters could talk to each other. He has no story and no character development, and every time the author introduces a new character, he makes them a lot stronger than the Mc, and all he does is say that the Mc has potential. he is another potential man.
My dear author, I will support you as usual. But be sure to make the black haired wizard (Zerf) and barefoot girl (Mavis) together again.
Very good bro, continue your work, don't stop in the middle .................................. . .......... . ,. , , , , , , ,.,., ,.,..,. ,., ,..,., ,
The starting chapters were a bit rough, to the point that they felt completely different from what I initially expected. It wasn’t bad, per se, but the MC came across as too much of a side character, lacking any standout traits or a unique personality imo. That said, it’s understandable for the MC to be overshadowed by others early on, given that he’s still weak and hasn’t gained any powers. Based on my observations, the archetype of the MC here is a neutral good type, with some semi traits of a Japanese light novel protagonist. So, don’t expect an MC who’s out to slaughter everything that offends him. Thankfully I've been seeing character development from him as of 30+ chapter and expect more to come. Also, much luv to ur other fic.
if im gonna be honest this will be my first time giving a review to someone, and i just make this soo that this master piece could survive.
Como devo dizer ... seu protagonista não parece um protagonista sabe , ele é meio que um personagem secundario com o nome de protagonista, tire ele e não muda nada . Devo também dizer que o sistema de poder está muito desbalanceado , focado muito no jujutsu e diminuindo os outros tipos. Em geral a história até que é legalzinha mas fica muito clichê e sem sal.
The timeline is messed up by all the rewriting, Naruto took the sword from Thoru's back but silva got it and asked the yuyutsu sorcerers to make a knife for him to use, but originally before the second rewrite, thoru kept the sword and had it later reforged the sword into a knife used by sila. The problem is that in chaper 2 part 3 you read that he gave it to the sorcrers but in chapter 5 part 2 there is a small callback to how Thoru gave him the sword and had it reforged into a knife, witch didn't happen in this timeline.
Spoiler enthüllenIt's honestly more interesting than the previous version. There are more characters displayed and they don't look stiff like the old version, you know if you reread it. And I'm really waiting for this story to continue, I will try to support it gradually🥳
You know it's a good fanfiction but at the starting it get's jumbled up due to author introducing too many characters together and most of the time he uses 1st name only which makes it difficult to follow sometimes. Buttttt.... it's a good novel after everything is set in stage but author should also give mc some chance to show is powers and author has also totally forgotten about the system which was only shown 1 time through the entire 70+ chapters. There should be some more solo moments with heroines and him just leaving this restaurant as a gathering shot for other while he's just gone to other world to have some fun. Mc also through the whole time didn't have any information about other anime worlds and he'll be learning slowly. Mc is also not revenge oriented as he's parents were killed and author just skips the part of there revenge while sending zeref taking care of whole organisation. It should have been mc taking care of his own revenge.
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I hope it won't be dropped like the last one.